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Okay, I'm feeling creative. And I find that so seldom is verse ever actually written to be visually recognizable, so here are the rules for this thread.
One line per post, to create seven line verses in the following pattern:
1st line short-------------
2nd line medium---------------
3rd line long--------------------------
4th line longest----------------------------
5th line long--------------------------
6th line medium----------------
7th line short-------------
Example:
Once outside
I realized that the air
Was particularly sweet today
Perhaps it was the honeysuckle vines
Or the red and yellow roses
I took a deep breath
Spring at last
I'll start the first one:
1. Sunday morning
trisherina
05-15-2003, 12:12 AM
1. Sunday morning
2. Quiet rays of light
lapietra
05-15-2003, 01:15 AM
1. Sunday morning
2. Quiet rays of light
3. Reach across my room
dinzdale
05-15-2003, 11:39 AM
1. Sunday morning
2. Quiet rays of light
3. Reach across my room
4. With warming fingers stetching
1. Sunday morning
2. Quiet rays of light
3. Reach across my room
4. With warming fingers stretching
5. To eyes only half open
nycwriters
05-15-2003, 04:23 PM
1. Sunday morning
2. Quiet rays of light
3. Reach across my room
4. With warming fingers stretching
5. To eyes only half open
6. Sleepy, contented
1. Sunday morning
2. Quiet rays of light
3. Reach across my room
4. With warming fingers stretching
5. To eyes only half open
6. Sleepy, contented
7. Pillow snuggles
Deviate
05-15-2003, 05:50 PM
1. stretching
1. stretching
2. out to touch you
nycwriters
05-15-2003, 06:28 PM
1. stretching
2. out to touch you
3. a lazy smile upon your lips
lapietra
05-15-2003, 09:24 PM
1. stretching
2. out to touch you
3. a lazy smile upon your lips
4. as you slowly undress yourself
1. stretching
2. out to touch you
3. a lazy smile upon your lips
4. as you slowly undress yourself
5. my eyes drinking your body
trisherina
05-15-2003, 11:40 PM
1. stretching
2. out to touch you
3. a lazy smile upon your lips
4. as you slowly undress yourself
5. my eyes drinking your body
6. caressed, alit by a glow
lapietra
05-16-2003, 05:41 PM
1. stretching
2. out to touch you
3. a lazy smile upon your lips
4. as you slowly undress yourself
5. my eyes drinking your body
6. caressed, alit by a glow
7. from our fireplace
dinzdale
05-16-2003, 06:31 PM
1. Don't go
2. not just yet
lapietra
05-16-2003, 06:44 PM
1. Don't go
2. not just yet
3. just another kiss
1. Don't go
2. not just yet
3. just another kiss
4. or perhaps two or three
lapietra
05-17-2003, 04:50 AM
1. Don't go
2. not just yet
3. just another kiss
4. or perhaps two or three
5. or three hundred
1. Don't go
2. not just yet
3. just another kiss
4. or perhaps two or three
5. or three hundred
6. just please
1. Don't go
2. not just yet
3. just another kiss
4. or perhaps two or three
5. or three hundred
6. just please
7. Don't go
*aw guys, this was beautiful, and truly circular*
1. Sweetness
2. And a wee bit tart
1. Sweetness
2. And a wee bit tart
3. Complex and intriguing
1. Sweetness
2. And a wee bit tart
3. Complex and intriguing
4. Like a book you can't put down
1. Sweetness
2. And a wee bit tart
3. Complex and intriguing
4. Like a book you can't put down
5. Forever existing now
1. Sweetness
2. And a wee bit tart
3. Complex and intriguing
4. Like a book you can't put down
5. Forever existing now
6. Between my lips
beckstra
05-20-2003, 11:35 PM
1. Sweetness
2. And a wee bit tart
3. Complex and intriguing
4. Like a book you can't put down
5. Forever existing now
6. Between my lips
7. Berry tongue
nycwriters
05-21-2003, 10:34 PM
1. Call. damnit!
2. I can't bear this
trisherina
05-21-2003, 10:49 PM
1. Call. damnit!
2. I can't bear this
3. Being so near, yet
1. Call. damnit!
2. I can't bear this
3. Being so near, yet
4. Tauntingly out of reach
1. Call. damnit!
2. I can't bear this
3. Being so near, yet
4. Tauntingly out of reach
5. and yet so close
1. Call. damnit!
2. I can't bear this
3. Being so near, yet
4. Tauntingly out of reach
5. and yet so close
6. I can feel you
lapietra
05-30-2003, 09:51 PM
1. Call. damnit!
2. I can't bear this
3. Being so near, yet
4. Tauntingly out of reach
5. and yet so close
6. I can feel you
7. touching me
lapietra
05-30-2003, 09:52 PM
1. Ruined dress
1. Ruined dress
2. Big red wine stain
trisherina
05-31-2003, 12:58 AM
1. Ruined dress
2. Big red wine stain
3. That makes me smile
lapietra
05-31-2003, 01:34 AM
1. Ruined dress
2. Big red wine stain
3. That makes me smile
4. remembering the embrace
nycwriters
06-01-2003, 12:17 AM
1. Ruined dress
2. Big red wine stain
3. That makes me smile
4. remembering the embrace.
5. How time stood still
1. Ruined dress
2. Big red wine stain
3. That makes me smile
4. remembering the embrace.
5. How time stood still
6. as our eyes met
Obvius
06-02-2003, 07:28 PM
1. Ruined dress
2. Big red wine stain
3. That makes me smile
4. remembering the embrace.
5. How time stood still
6. as our eyes met
7. like sparrows.
nycwriters
06-02-2003, 07:36 PM
1. Strength
1. Strength
2. like weakness
nycwriters
06-02-2003, 10:51 PM
1. Strength
2. like weakness
3. tempered by vanity
zefrank
06-02-2003, 11:44 PM
1. Strength
2. like weakness
3. tempered by vanity
4. is easy to find in another
1. Strength
2. like weakness
3. tempered by vanity
4. is easy to find in another
5. held up as a mirror
nycwriters
06-03-2003, 01:03 AM
1. Strength
2. like weakness
3. tempered by vanity
4. is easy to find in another
5. held up as a mirror
6. truth reflects
1. Strength
2. like weakness
3. tempered by vanity
4. is easy to find in another
5. held up as a mirror
6. truth reflects
7. all flaws
Obvius
06-03-2003, 03:18 PM
1. Desire
lapietra
06-03-2003, 09:47 PM
1. Desire
2. Fills me up
3. flows through
1. Desire
2. Fills me up
3. flows through
4. me, returning again
Obvius
06-04-2003, 07:47 AM
1. Desire
2. Fills me up
3. flows through
4. me, returning again
5. with the lost
RuneT
06-04-2003, 08:04 AM
1. Desire
2. Fills me up
3. flows through
4. me, returning again
5. with the lost
6. feelings I
1. Desire
2. Fills me up
3. flows through
4. me, returning again
5. with the lost
6. feelings I
7. Denied
lapietra
06-04-2003, 03:13 PM
1. Will you
Obvius
06-04-2003, 03:21 PM
1. Will you
2. be as bright
1. Will you
2. be as bright
3. light to the blind
beckstra
06-05-2003, 09:51 AM
1. Will you
2. be as bright
3. light to the blind
4. leading this love on
Obvius
06-05-2003, 07:01 PM
1. Will you
2. be as bright
3. light to the blind
4. leading this love on
5. shadowy minds,
1. Will you
2. be as bright
3. light to the blind
4. leading this love on
5. shadowy minds,
6. blend as one
beckstra
06-07-2003, 01:51 PM
1. Will you
2. be as bright
3. light to the blind
4. leading this love on
5. shadowy minds,
6. blend as one,
7. glow.
beckstra
06-08-2003, 01:20 AM
1. Water
2. Drooling on
1. Water
2. Drooling on
3. the kitchen floor
1. Water
2. Drooling on
3. the kitchen floor
4. The mop's right here
trisherina
06-09-2003, 12:03 AM
1. Water
2. Drooling on
3. the kitchen floor
4. The mop's right here
5. Care for a dance?
beckstra
06-09-2003, 12:27 PM
1. Water
2. Drooling on
3. the kitchen floor
4. The mop's right here
5. Care for a dance?
6. Let us spin
zefrank
06-09-2003, 08:40 PM
1. Water
2. Drooling on
3. the kitchen floor
4. The mop's right here
5. Care for a dance?
6. Let us spin
7. Quietly.
lapietra
06-09-2003, 09:46 PM
1. Skittering
1. Skittering
2. across water
1. Skittering
2. across water
3. the firefly dances
lapietra
06-10-2003, 12:31 AM
1. Skittering
2. across water
3. the firefly dances
4. its clownface reflection
noxxville
06-10-2003, 01:22 AM
1. Skittering
2. across water
3. the firefly dances
4. its clownface reflection
5. burns into night
beckstra
06-10-2003, 09:31 AM
1. Skittering
2. across water
3. the firefly dances
4. its clownface reflection
5. burns into night
6. and the lake
1. Skittering
2. across water
3. the firefly dances
4. its clownface reflection
5. burns into night
6. and the lake
7. glistens
1. Sleepily
2. at daybreak
nycwriters
06-10-2003, 05:32 PM
1. Sleepily
2. at daybreak
3. my thoughts turn
1. Sleepily
2. at daybreak
3. my thoughts turn
4. to the dream i interrupted
nycwriters
06-10-2003, 06:35 PM
1. Sleepily
2. at daybreak
3. my thoughts turn
4. to the dream i interrupted
5. somnambulist's sonnet
beckstra
06-10-2003, 07:48 PM
1. Sleepily
2. at daybreak
3. my thoughts turn
4. to the dream i interrupted
5. somnambulist's sonnet
6. written in sunlight
nycwriters
06-10-2003, 08:55 PM
1. Sleepily
2. at daybreak
3. my thoughts turn
4. to the dream i interrupted
5. somnambulist's sonnet
6. written in sunlight
7. sublime
beckstra
06-10-2003, 11:45 PM
1. sublimation
nycwriters
06-11-2003, 05:01 PM
1. sublimation
2. sweet deceit
beckstra
06-11-2003, 07:39 PM
1. sublimation
2. sweet deceit
3. staining my skin
nycwriters
06-11-2003, 10:39 PM
1. sublimation
2. sweet deceit
3. staining my skin
4. At first, bitter to the taste
beckstra
06-12-2003, 12:35 AM
1. sublimation
2. sweet deceit
3. staining my skin
4. At first, bitter to the taste
5. sour to smell even
nycwriters
06-12-2003, 01:42 AM
1. sublimation
2. sweet deceit
3. staining my skin
4. At first, bitter to the taste
5. sour to smell even
6. begging purpose
zefrank
06-12-2003, 09:51 AM
1. sublimation
2. sweet deceit
3. staining my skin
4. At first, bitter to the taste
5. sour to smell even
6. begging purpose
7. sublimation
zefrank
06-12-2003, 09:51 AM
1) thirty
Deviate
06-12-2003, 10:42 AM
1) thirty
2) tastes like
Frieda
06-12-2003, 11:00 AM
1) thirty
2) tastes like
3) something soft
Deviate
06-12-2003, 11:10 AM
1) thirty
2) tastes like
3) something soft
4) dark, smoky, bitter
nycwriters
06-12-2003, 12:26 PM
1) thirty
2) tastes like
3) something soft
4) dark, smoky, bitter
5) a new decade
Deviate
06-12-2003, 12:35 PM
1) thirty
2) tastes like
3) something soft
4) dark, smoky, bitter
5) a new decade
6) a slow burn
nycwriters
06-12-2003, 03:36 PM
1) thirty
2) tastes like
3) something soft
4) dark, smoky, bitter
5) a new decade
6) a slow burn
7) forty
Deviate
06-12-2003, 04:17 PM
1) white
Deviate
06-12-2003, 04:41 PM
1) white
2) milky skin
3) trembles 'neath lips
nycwriters
06-12-2003, 04:50 PM
1) white
2) milky skin
3) trembles 'neath lips
4) succomb to earthly desires, haste
Frieda
06-12-2003, 07:57 PM
1) white
2) milky skin
3) trembles 'neath lips
4) succomb to earthly desires, haste
5) butterfly kisses
Deviate
06-12-2003, 08:19 PM
1) white
2) milky skin
3) trembles 'neath lips
4) succomb to earthly desires, haste
5) butterfly kisses
6) melt rough
nycwriters
06-12-2003, 08:40 PM
1) white
2) milky skin
3) trembles 'neath lips
4) succomb to earthly desires, haste
5) butterfly kisses
6) melt rough
7) gone
beckstra
06-12-2003, 10:48 PM
1) nickel
Deviate
06-13-2003, 12:22 PM
1) nickel
2) two for 10
3) still not enough
beckstra
06-13-2003, 07:46 PM
1) nickel
2) two for 10
3) still not enough
4) for an ice cream cone
lapietra
06-13-2003, 09:45 PM
1) nickel
2) two for 10
3) still not enough
4) for an ice cream cone
5) would you take
Deviate
06-13-2003, 10:22 PM
1) nickel
2) two for 10
3) still not enough
4) for an ice cream cone
5) would you take
6) a red sucker
1) nickel
2) two for 10
3) still not enough
4) for an ice cream cone
5) would you take
6) a red sucker
7) sour ball
beckstra
06-14-2003, 01:09 AM
1. Dustbunnies
2. Finding my bed
trisherina
06-14-2003, 01:23 AM
1. Dustbunnies
2. Finding my bed
3. And hiding beneath
beckstra
06-14-2003, 01:34 AM
1. Dustbunnies
2. Finding my bed
3. And hiding beneath
4. Faded yellow photographs
trisherina
06-14-2003, 02:47 AM
1. Dustbunnies
2. Finding my bed
3. And hiding beneath
4. Faded yellow photographs
5. Of you and me atop
beckstra
06-14-2003, 02:57 PM
1. Dustbunnies
2. Finding my bed
3. And hiding beneath
4. Faded yellow photographs
5. Of you and me atop
6. Eroding mountains
1. Dustbunnies
2. Finding my bed
3. And hiding beneath
4. Faded yellow photographs
5. Of you and me atop
6. Eroding mountains
7. So long ago
lapietra
06-15-2003, 01:45 AM
1. Where is
beckstra
06-15-2003, 10:44 AM
1. Where is
2. Sweetheart Lookout?
Deviate
06-15-2003, 12:56 PM
1. Where is
2. Sweetheart Lookout?
3. I've been looking for so long
beckstra
06-15-2003, 09:46 PM
1. Where is
2. Sweetheart Lookout?
3. I've been looking for so long
4. Nightlife has lost itself in my radio
fodder
06-16-2003, 11:31 PM
1. Where is
2. Sweetheart Lookout?
3. I've been looking for so long
4. Nightlife has lost itself in my radio
5. I stare ahead, navy blankets
1. Where is
2. Sweetheart Lookout?
3. I've been looking for so long
4. Nightlife has lost itself in my radio
5. I stare ahead, navy blankets
6. the starless sky
zefrank
06-17-2003, 09:12 AM
1. Where is
2. Sweetheart Lookout?
3. I've been looking for so long
4. Nightlife has lost itself in my radio
5. I stare ahead, navy blankets
6. the starless sky
7. and Mom.
Deviate
06-17-2003, 09:56 AM
1. sugar
Frieda
06-17-2003, 10:23 AM
1. sugar
2. burning sweetness
RuneT
06-17-2003, 11:05 AM
1. sugar
2. burning sweetness
3. add strips of peach and stir
zefrank
06-17-2003, 11:35 AM
1. sugar
2. burning sweetness
3. add strips of peach and stir
4. don't worry if a tear drops in
Deviate
06-17-2003, 11:39 AM
1. sugar
2. burning sweetness
3. add strips of peach and stir
4. don't worry if a tear drops in
5. it's bitter salty taste makes
lapietra
06-17-2003, 03:24 PM
1. sugar
2. burning sweetness
3. add strips of peach and stir
4. don't worry if a tear drops in
5. its bitter salty taste makes
6. the final outcome
1. sugar
2. burning sweetness
3. add strips of peach and stir
4. don't worry if a tear drops in
5. its bitter salty taste makes
6. the final outcome
7. nectar
*these are starting to look downright phallic*
amanda
06-17-2003, 09:10 PM
1. Unemployed
2. last dollar gone
1. Unemployed
2. last dollar gone
3. check the classifieds
1. Unemployed
2. last dollar gone
3. check the classifieds
4. and pull out the highlighter
1. Unemployed
2. last dollar gone
3. check the classifieds
4. and pull out the highlighter
5. "Wanted: male escort"
1. Unemployed
2. last dollar gone
3. check the classifieds
4. and pull out the highlighter
5. "Wanted: male escort"
6. "not too tall"
amanda
06-18-2003, 07:35 PM
1. Unemployed
2. last dollar gone
3. check the classifieds
4. and pull out the highlighter
5. "Wanted: male escort"
6. "not too tall"
7. redundant
lapietra
06-18-2003, 08:21 PM
1. curled
nycwriters
06-18-2003, 08:59 PM
1. curled
2. toes tucked
amanda
06-18-2003, 09:19 PM
1. curled
2. toes tucked
3. suckled honey drips
1. curled
2. toes tucked
3. suckled honey drips
4. from eager sticky fingers
zefrank
06-19-2003, 08:38 PM
1. curled
2. toes tucked
3. suckled honey drips
4. from eager sticky fingers
5. "bears don't belong inside," I said.
lapietra
06-19-2003, 10:46 PM
1. curled
2. toes tucked
3. suckled honey drips
4. from eager sticky fingers
5. "bears don't belong inside," I said.
6. "But since you're so cute,
1. curled
2. toes tucked
3. suckled honey drips
4. from eager sticky fingers
5. "bears don't belong inside," I said.
6. "But since you're so cute,
7. get yer butt in here."
amanda
06-20-2003, 10:42 AM
1. hokey-pokey
RuneT
06-20-2003, 10:52 AM
1. hokey-pokey
2. the holy monkey
zefrank
06-20-2003, 11:12 AM
1. hokey-pokey
2. the holy monkey
3. sat up one morning.
Frieda
06-20-2003, 11:43 AM
1. hokey-pokey
2. the holy monkey
3. sat up one morning.
4. put some enchiladas on my plate
amanda
06-20-2003, 12:28 PM
1. hokey-pokey
2. the holy monkey
3. sat up one morning.
4. put some enchiladas on my plate
5. turned it inside-out,
1. hokey-pokey
2. the holy monkey
3. sat up one morning.
4. put some enchiladas on my plate
5. turned it inside-out,
6. screeched at me,
beckstra
06-20-2003, 07:07 PM
1. hokey-pokey
2. the holy monkey
3. sat up one morning.
4. put some enchiladas on my plate
5. turned it inside-out,
6. screeched at me,
7. and danced
amanda
06-20-2003, 10:01 PM
1. Two times
2. two is not for
dickieC
06-20-2003, 10:11 PM
1. Two times
2. two is not for
3. the faint-hearted
lapietra
06-21-2003, 02:23 AM
1. Two times
2. two is not for
3. the faint-hearted
4. but you're a brave one
1. Two times
2. two is not for
3. the faint-hearted
4. but you're a brave one
5. so square away
amanda
06-21-2003, 07:13 AM
1. Two times
2. two is not for
3. the faint-hearted
4. but you're a brave one
5. so square away
6. be rootless
1. Two times
2. two is not for
3. the faint-hearted
4. but you're a brave one
5. so square away
6. be rootless
7. live!
1. Dreaming, I
2. am flying high
nycwriters
06-21-2003, 03:02 PM
1. Dreaming, I
2. am flying high
3. my soul, euphoric
lapietra
06-21-2003, 03:55 PM
1. Dreaming, I
2. am flying high
3. my soul, euphoric
4. our kisses communicate
1. Dreaming, I
2. am flying high
3. my soul, euphoric
4. our kisses communicate
5. in shades of light
lapietra
06-22-2003, 12:01 AM
1. Dreaming, I
2. am flying high
3. my soul, euphoric
4. our kisses communicate
5. in shades of light
4. our two souls
1. Dreaming, I
2. am flying high
3. my soul, euphoric
4. our kisses communicate
5. in shades of light
6. our two souls
7. in unison
lapietra
06-22-2003, 12:16 AM
1. breathing
nycwriters
06-22-2003, 12:37 AM
1. breathing
2. in and out
1. breathing
2. in and out
3. into the bag
nycwriters
06-22-2003, 01:59 AM
1. breathing
2. in and out
3. into the bag
4. this feeling comes and goes
amanda
06-22-2003, 07:26 PM
1. breathing
2. in and out
3. into the bag
4. this feeling comes and goes
5. my prize fish
beckstra
06-22-2003, 09:51 PM
1. breathing
2. in and out
3. into the bag
4. this feeling comes and goes
5. my prize fish
6. wiggles up
1. breathing
2. in and out
3. into the bag
4. this feeling comes and goes
5. my prize fish
6. wiggles up
7. gasping
beckstra
06-23-2003, 10:55 AM
1. Marda girl
lapietra
06-23-2003, 02:47 PM
1. Marda girl
2. blue-eyed, bald
fodder
06-23-2003, 09:54 PM
1. Marda girl
2. blue-eyed, bald
3. and those bulby eyeballs
lapietra
06-23-2003, 10:35 PM
1. Marda girl
2. blue-eyed, bald
3. and those bulby eyeballs
4. such incredibly smooth green skin
beckstra
06-23-2003, 10:52 PM
1. Marda girl
2. blue-eyed, bald
3. and those bulby eyeballs
4. such incredibly smooth green skin
5. super powers galore
1. Marda girl
2. blue-eyed, bald
3. and those bulby eyeballs
4. such incredibly smooth green skin
5. super powers galore
6. she chooses to
lapietra
06-24-2003, 01:59 AM
1. Marda girl
2. blue-eyed, bald
3. and those bulby eyeballs
4. such incredibly smooth green skin
5. super powers galore
6. she chooses to
7. write porn
beckstra
06-24-2003, 12:09 PM
1. Ripples
2. under the dock
lapietra
06-24-2003, 04:52 PM
1. Ripples
2. under the dock
3. silver sunlit flash, there
1. Ripples
2. under the dock
3. silver sunlit flash, there
4. where golden feet are dangling
amanda
06-24-2003, 08:09 PM
1. Ripples
2. under the dock
3. silver sunlit flash, there
4. where golden feet are dangling
5. lazy fishin' away the day
1. Ripples
2. under the dock
3. silver sunlit flash, there
4. where golden feet are dangling
5. lazy fishin' away the day
6. after day after
amanda
06-25-2003, 07:28 PM
1. Ripples
2. under the dock
3. silver sunlit flash, there
4. where golden feet are dangling
5. lazy fishin' away the day
6. after day after
7. fine day
Frieda
06-26-2003, 04:05 AM
1. Grief will
2. Close my eyes
zefrank
06-26-2003, 10:24 AM
1. Grief will
2. Close my eyes
3. Close my heart
amanda
06-26-2003, 11:07 AM
1. Grief will
2. Close my eyes
3. Close my heart
4. but open the door to another
beckstra
06-26-2003, 06:41 PM
1. Grief will
2. Close my eyes
3. Close my heart
4. but open the door to another
5. floodgate of tears
trisherina
06-27-2003, 01:29 AM
1. Grief will
2. Close my eyes
3. Close my heart
4. but open the door to another
5. floodgate of tears
6. cleansing away
beckstra
06-27-2003, 11:24 AM
1. Grief will
2. Close my eyes
3. Close my heart
4. but open the door to another
5. floodgate of tears
6. cleansing away
7. his blue eyes
beckstra
06-28-2003, 12:45 AM
1. Fury
2. Stirring
1. Fury
2. Stirring
3. Disturbing
1. Fury
2. Stirring
3. Disturbing
4. In your eyes
beckstra
06-28-2003, 01:29 PM
1. Fury
2. Stirring
3. Disturbing
4. In your eyes
5. Crawling
Frieda
06-28-2003, 05:16 PM
1. Fury
2. Stirring
3. Disturbing
4. In your eyes
5. Crawling
6. Me
1. Fury
2. Stirring
3. Disturbing
4. In your eyes
5. Crawling
6. Me
7. I
Guido
06-29-2003, 10:56 PM
1. A dozen eggs
2. All lying, cracked
zefrank
06-30-2003, 12:50 PM
1. A dozen eggs
2. All lying, cracked
3. Bleeding yellow on tiles
1. A dozen eggs
2. All lying, cracked
3. Bleeding yellow on tiles
4. Fills me with incedible edible rage
1. A dozen eggs
2. All lying, cracked
3. Bleeding yellow on tiles
4. Fills me with incedible edible rage
5. A sensation I can taste
1. A dozen eggs
2. All lying, cracked
3. Bleeding yellow on tiles
4. Fills me with incedible edible rage
5. A sensation I can taste
6. As I lick the floor
zefrank
06-30-2003, 04:35 PM
1. A dozen eggs
2. All lying, cracked
3. Bleeding yellow on tiles
4. Fills me with incredible edible rage
5. A sensation I can taste
6. As I lick the floor
7. Under you
fodder
06-30-2003, 05:06 PM
1. water's hot
zefrank
06-30-2003, 05:33 PM
1. water's hot
2. "some tea, my dear?"
Frieda
06-30-2003, 06:11 PM
1. water's hot
2. "some tea, my dear?"
3. cinnamon cookies on a plate
1. water's hot
2. "some tea, my dear?"
3. cinnamon cookies on a plate
4. sitting cross-legged before the fire
amanda
06-30-2003, 10:26 PM
1. water's hot
2. "some tea, my dear?"
3. cinnamon cookies on a plate
4. sitting cross-legged before the fire
5. jeans warming, careful now
1. water's hot
2. "some tea, my dear?"
3. cinnamon cookies on a plate
4. sitting cross-legged before the fire
5. jeans warming, careful now
6. As grandpa tell's tales
1. water's hot
2. "some tea, my dear?"
3. cinnamon cookies on a plate
4. sitting cross-legged before the fire
5. jeans warming, careful now
6. As grandpa tell's tales
7. softly, dearly
amanda
07-01-2003, 11:53 AM
1. wrestling
1. wrestling
2. with my demons
bealeblues
07-01-2003, 06:08 PM
1. wrestling
2. with my demons
3. they mock my struggle
Frieda
07-02-2003, 04:41 AM
1. wrestling
2. with my demons
3. they mock my struggle
4. leaving me in despair, sitting here
zefrank
07-02-2003, 02:06 PM
1. wrestling
2. with my demons
3. they mock my struggle
4. leaving me in despair, sitting here
5. surrounded by photos
1. wrestling
2. with my demons
3. they mock my struggle
4. leaving me in despair, sitting here
5. surrounded by photos
6. faded and yellow
amanda
07-02-2003, 04:00 PM
1. wrestling
2. with my demons
3. they mock my struggle
4. leaving me in despair, sitting here
5. surrounded by photos
6. faded and yellow
7. suspended
zefrank
07-02-2003, 08:02 PM
1) this beer
1) this beer
2) plus that beer
1) this beer
2) plus that beer
3) uh, where was i ?
1) this beer
2) plus that beer
3) uh, where was i ?
4) did i really say that?
zefrank
07-03-2003, 12:29 AM
1) this beer
2) plus that beer
3) uh, where was i ?
4) did i really say that?
5) what? uhhh..sure.
1) this beer
2) plus that beer
3) uh, where was i ?
4) did i really say that?
5) what? uhhh..sure.
6) i need a beer
fodder
07-03-2003, 11:22 AM
1) this beer
2) plus that beer
3) uh, where was i ?
4) did i really say that?
5) what? uhhh..sure.
6) i need a beer
7) oh schlitz
amanda
07-03-2003, 12:31 PM
1. cutie pie
zefrank
07-03-2003, 03:08 PM
1. cutie pie
2. don't blush
1. cutie pie
2. don't blush
3. i like your smile
bailygrl
07-03-2003, 07:13 PM
1. cutie pie
2. don't blush
3. i like your smile
4. even withouth teeth
zefrank
07-03-2003, 07:43 PM
1. cutie pie
2. don't blush
3. i like your smile
4. even withouth teeth
5. little baby girl
amanda
07-03-2003, 10:01 PM
1. cutie pie
2. don't blush
3. i like your smile
4. even withouth teeth
5. little baby girl
6. don't hide
1. cutie pie
2. don't blush
3. i like your smile
4. even withouth teeth
5. little baby girl
6. don't hide
7. giggle
amanda
07-04-2003, 01:17 AM
1. Tomorrow
2. I shall dance
fodder
07-04-2003, 01:29 AM
1. Tomorrow
2. I shall dance
3. alone and twisting
zefrank
07-04-2003, 10:05 AM
1. Tomorrow
2. I shall dance
3. alone and twisting
4. for rain and other things
1. Tomorrow
2. I shall dance
3. alone and twisting
4. for rain and other things
5. i'd like if you joined
amanda
07-04-2003, 11:48 AM
1. Tomorrow
2. I shall dance
3. alone and twisting
4. for rain and other things
5. i'd like if you joined
6. b.y.o. barefeet
1. Tomorrow
2. I shall dance
3. alone and twisting
4. for rain and other things
5. i'd like if you joined
6. b.y.o. barefeet
7. ha cha cha
fodder
07-05-2003, 01:14 AM
1. a glance
1. a glance
2. as cold as ice
1. a glance
2. as cold as ice
3. pierces my armour
1. a glance
2. as cold as ice
3. pierces my armour
4. cracking through my soul
1. a glance
2. as cold as ice
3. pierces my armour
4. cracking through my soul
5. i collect the pieces
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