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ambo
05-14-2003, 11:38 PM
Okay, I'm feeling creative. And I find that so seldom is verse ever actually written to be visually recognizable, so here are the rules for this thread.

One line per post, to create seven line verses in the following pattern:

1st line short-------------
2nd line medium---------------
3rd line long--------------------------
4th line longest----------------------------
5th line long--------------------------
6th line medium----------------
7th line short-------------

Example:

Once outside
I realized that the air
Was particularly sweet today
Perhaps it was the honeysuckle vines
Or the red and yellow roses
I took a deep breath
Spring at last

I'll start the first one:

1. Sunday morning

trisherina
05-15-2003, 12:12 AM
1. Sunday morning
2. Quiet rays of light

lapietra
05-15-2003, 01:15 AM
1. Sunday morning
2. Quiet rays of light
3. Reach across my room

dinzdale
05-15-2003, 11:39 AM
1. Sunday morning
2. Quiet rays of light
3. Reach across my room
4. With warming fingers stetching

ambo
05-15-2003, 02:00 PM
1. Sunday morning
2. Quiet rays of light
3. Reach across my room
4. With warming fingers stretching
5. To eyes only half open

nycwriters
05-15-2003, 04:23 PM
1. Sunday morning
2. Quiet rays of light
3. Reach across my room
4. With warming fingers stretching
5. To eyes only half open
6. Sleepy, contented

ambo
05-15-2003, 04:47 PM
1. Sunday morning
2. Quiet rays of light
3. Reach across my room
4. With warming fingers stretching
5. To eyes only half open
6. Sleepy, contented
7. Pillow snuggles

Deviate
05-15-2003, 05:50 PM
1. stretching

ambo
05-15-2003, 06:17 PM
1. stretching
2. out to touch you

nycwriters
05-15-2003, 06:28 PM
1. stretching
2. out to touch you
3. a lazy smile upon your lips

lapietra
05-15-2003, 09:24 PM
1. stretching
2. out to touch you
3. a lazy smile upon your lips
4. as you slowly undress yourself

ambo
05-15-2003, 10:04 PM
1. stretching
2. out to touch you
3. a lazy smile upon your lips
4. as you slowly undress yourself
5. my eyes drinking your body

trisherina
05-15-2003, 11:40 PM
1. stretching
2. out to touch you
3. a lazy smile upon your lips
4. as you slowly undress yourself
5. my eyes drinking your body
6. caressed, alit by a glow

lapietra
05-16-2003, 05:41 PM
1. stretching
2. out to touch you
3. a lazy smile upon your lips
4. as you slowly undress yourself
5. my eyes drinking your body
6. caressed, alit by a glow
7. from our fireplace

ambo
05-16-2003, 05:45 PM
1. Don't go

dinzdale
05-16-2003, 06:31 PM
1. Don't go
2. not just yet

lapietra
05-16-2003, 06:44 PM
1. Don't go
2. not just yet
3. just another kiss

ambo
05-16-2003, 09:30 PM
1. Don't go
2. not just yet
3. just another kiss
4. or perhaps two or three

lapietra
05-17-2003, 04:50 AM
1. Don't go
2. not just yet
3. just another kiss
4. or perhaps two or three
5. or three hundred

moel
05-17-2003, 10:46 PM
1. Don't go
2. not just yet
3. just another kiss
4. or perhaps two or three
5. or three hundred
6. just please

ambo
05-17-2003, 11:03 PM
1. Don't go
2. not just yet
3. just another kiss
4. or perhaps two or three
5. or three hundred
6. just please
7. Don't go

*aw guys, this was beautiful, and truly circular*

moel
05-17-2003, 11:13 PM
1. Sweetness

ambo
05-17-2003, 11:15 PM
1. Sweetness
2. And a wee bit tart

moel
05-17-2003, 11:17 PM
1. Sweetness
2. And a wee bit tart
3. Complex and intriguing

ambo
05-17-2003, 11:19 PM
1. Sweetness
2. And a wee bit tart
3. Complex and intriguing
4. Like a book you can't put down

moel
05-17-2003, 11:33 PM
1. Sweetness
2. And a wee bit tart
3. Complex and intriguing
4. Like a book you can't put down
5. Forever existing now

ambo
05-19-2003, 11:51 AM
1. Sweetness
2. And a wee bit tart
3. Complex and intriguing
4. Like a book you can't put down
5. Forever existing now
6. Between my lips

beckstra
05-20-2003, 11:35 PM
1. Sweetness
2. And a wee bit tart
3. Complex and intriguing
4. Like a book you can't put down
5. Forever existing now
6. Between my lips
7. Berry tongue

red
05-21-2003, 05:14 PM
1. Call. damnit!

nycwriters
05-21-2003, 10:34 PM
1. Call. damnit!
2. I can't bear this

trisherina
05-21-2003, 10:49 PM
1. Call. damnit!
2. I can't bear this
3. Being so near, yet

ambo
05-21-2003, 10:58 PM
1. Call. damnit!
2. I can't bear this
3. Being so near, yet
4. Tauntingly out of reach

red
05-22-2003, 10:50 AM
1. Call. damnit!
2. I can't bear this
3. Being so near, yet
4. Tauntingly out of reach
5. and yet so close

ambo
05-30-2003, 01:03 PM
1. Call. damnit!
2. I can't bear this
3. Being so near, yet
4. Tauntingly out of reach
5. and yet so close
6. I can feel you

lapietra
05-30-2003, 09:51 PM
1. Call. damnit!
2. I can't bear this
3. Being so near, yet
4. Tauntingly out of reach
5. and yet so close
6. I can feel you
7. touching me

lapietra
05-30-2003, 09:52 PM
1. Ruined dress

ambo
05-30-2003, 11:24 PM
1. Ruined dress
2. Big red wine stain

trisherina
05-31-2003, 12:58 AM
1. Ruined dress
2. Big red wine stain
3. That makes me smile

lapietra
05-31-2003, 01:34 AM
1. Ruined dress
2. Big red wine stain
3. That makes me smile
4. remembering the embrace

nycwriters
06-01-2003, 12:17 AM
1. Ruined dress
2. Big red wine stain
3. That makes me smile
4. remembering the embrace.
5. How time stood still

ambo
06-01-2003, 08:26 PM
1. Ruined dress
2. Big red wine stain
3. That makes me smile
4. remembering the embrace.
5. How time stood still
6. as our eyes met

Obvius
06-02-2003, 07:28 PM
1. Ruined dress
2. Big red wine stain
3. That makes me smile
4. remembering the embrace.
5. How time stood still
6. as our eyes met
7. like sparrows.

nycwriters
06-02-2003, 07:36 PM
1. Strength

ambo
06-02-2003, 10:23 PM
1. Strength
2. like weakness

nycwriters
06-02-2003, 10:51 PM
1. Strength
2. like weakness
3. tempered by vanity

zefrank
06-02-2003, 11:44 PM
1. Strength
2. like weakness
3. tempered by vanity
4. is easy to find in another

ambo
06-03-2003, 12:52 AM
1. Strength
2. like weakness
3. tempered by vanity
4. is easy to find in another
5. held up as a mirror

nycwriters
06-03-2003, 01:03 AM
1. Strength
2. like weakness
3. tempered by vanity
4. is easy to find in another
5. held up as a mirror
6. truth reflects

ambo
06-03-2003, 11:38 AM
1. Strength
2. like weakness
3. tempered by vanity
4. is easy to find in another
5. held up as a mirror
6. truth reflects
7. all flaws

Obvius
06-03-2003, 03:18 PM
1. Desire

ambo
06-03-2003, 03:40 PM
1. Desire
2. Fills me up

lapietra
06-03-2003, 09:47 PM
1. Desire
2. Fills me up
3. flows through

ambo
06-03-2003, 10:28 PM
1. Desire
2. Fills me up
3. flows through
4. me, returning again

Obvius
06-04-2003, 07:47 AM
1. Desire
2. Fills me up
3. flows through
4. me, returning again
5. with the lost

RuneT
06-04-2003, 08:04 AM
1. Desire
2. Fills me up
3. flows through
4. me, returning again
5. with the lost
6. feelings I

ambo
06-04-2003, 12:32 PM
1. Desire
2. Fills me up
3. flows through
4. me, returning again
5. with the lost
6. feelings I
7. Denied

lapietra
06-04-2003, 03:13 PM
1. Will you

Obvius
06-04-2003, 03:21 PM
1. Will you
2. be as bright

ambo
06-04-2003, 04:30 PM
1. Will you
2. be as bright
3. light to the blind

beckstra
06-05-2003, 09:51 AM
1. Will you
2. be as bright
3. light to the blind
4. leading this love on

Obvius
06-05-2003, 07:01 PM
1. Will you
2. be as bright
3. light to the blind
4. leading this love on
5. shadowy minds,

moel
06-05-2003, 10:47 PM
1. Will you
2. be as bright
3. light to the blind
4. leading this love on
5. shadowy minds,
6. blend as one

beckstra
06-07-2003, 01:51 PM
1. Will you
2. be as bright
3. light to the blind
4. leading this love on
5. shadowy minds,
6. blend as one,
7. glow.

moel
06-07-2003, 10:22 PM
1. Water

beckstra
06-08-2003, 01:20 AM
1. Water
2. Drooling on

red
06-08-2003, 08:02 PM
1. Water
2. Drooling on
3. the kitchen floor

ambo
06-08-2003, 08:11 PM
1. Water
2. Drooling on
3. the kitchen floor
4. The mop's right here

trisherina
06-09-2003, 12:03 AM
1. Water
2. Drooling on
3. the kitchen floor
4. The mop's right here
5. Care for a dance?

beckstra
06-09-2003, 12:27 PM
1. Water
2. Drooling on
3. the kitchen floor
4. The mop's right here
5. Care for a dance?
6. Let us spin

zefrank
06-09-2003, 08:40 PM
1. Water
2. Drooling on
3. the kitchen floor
4. The mop's right here
5. Care for a dance?
6. Let us spin
7. Quietly.

lapietra
06-09-2003, 09:46 PM
1. Skittering

red
06-09-2003, 10:38 PM
1. Skittering
2. across water

ambo
06-10-2003, 12:00 AM
1. Skittering
2. across water
3. the firefly dances

lapietra
06-10-2003, 12:31 AM
1. Skittering
2. across water
3. the firefly dances
4. its clownface reflection

noxxville
06-10-2003, 01:22 AM
1. Skittering
2. across water
3. the firefly dances
4. its clownface reflection
5. burns into night

beckstra
06-10-2003, 09:31 AM
1. Skittering
2. across water
3. the firefly dances
4. its clownface reflection
5. burns into night
6. and the lake

Zyle
06-10-2003, 11:12 AM
1. Skittering
2. across water
3. the firefly dances
4. its clownface reflection
5. burns into night
6. and the lake
7. glistens

red
06-10-2003, 01:15 PM
1. Sleepily

ambo
06-10-2003, 01:22 PM
1. Sleepily
2. at daybreak

nycwriters
06-10-2003, 05:32 PM
1. Sleepily
2. at daybreak
3. my thoughts turn

ambo
06-10-2003, 06:11 PM
1. Sleepily
2. at daybreak
3. my thoughts turn
4. to the dream i interrupted

nycwriters
06-10-2003, 06:35 PM
1. Sleepily
2. at daybreak
3. my thoughts turn
4. to the dream i interrupted
5. somnambulist's sonnet

beckstra
06-10-2003, 07:48 PM
1. Sleepily
2. at daybreak
3. my thoughts turn
4. to the dream i interrupted
5. somnambulist's sonnet
6. written in sunlight

nycwriters
06-10-2003, 08:55 PM
1. Sleepily
2. at daybreak
3. my thoughts turn
4. to the dream i interrupted
5. somnambulist's sonnet
6. written in sunlight
7. sublime

beckstra
06-10-2003, 11:45 PM
1. sublimation

nycwriters
06-11-2003, 05:01 PM
1. sublimation
2. sweet deceit

beckstra
06-11-2003, 07:39 PM
1. sublimation
2. sweet deceit
3. staining my skin

nycwriters
06-11-2003, 10:39 PM
1. sublimation
2. sweet deceit
3. staining my skin
4. At first, bitter to the taste

beckstra
06-12-2003, 12:35 AM
1. sublimation
2. sweet deceit
3. staining my skin
4. At first, bitter to the taste
5. sour to smell even

nycwriters
06-12-2003, 01:42 AM
1. sublimation
2. sweet deceit
3. staining my skin
4. At first, bitter to the taste
5. sour to smell even
6. begging purpose

zefrank
06-12-2003, 09:51 AM
1. sublimation
2. sweet deceit
3. staining my skin
4. At first, bitter to the taste
5. sour to smell even
6. begging purpose
7. sublimation

zefrank
06-12-2003, 09:51 AM
1) thirty

Deviate
06-12-2003, 10:42 AM
1) thirty
2) tastes like

Frieda
06-12-2003, 11:00 AM
1) thirty
2) tastes like
3) something soft

Deviate
06-12-2003, 11:10 AM
1) thirty
2) tastes like
3) something soft
4) dark, smoky, bitter

nycwriters
06-12-2003, 12:26 PM
1) thirty
2) tastes like
3) something soft
4) dark, smoky, bitter
5) a new decade

Deviate
06-12-2003, 12:35 PM
1) thirty
2) tastes like
3) something soft
4) dark, smoky, bitter
5) a new decade
6) a slow burn

nycwriters
06-12-2003, 03:36 PM
1) thirty
2) tastes like
3) something soft
4) dark, smoky, bitter
5) a new decade
6) a slow burn
7) forty

Deviate
06-12-2003, 04:17 PM
1) white

ambo
06-12-2003, 04:32 PM
1) white
2) milky skin

Deviate
06-12-2003, 04:41 PM
1) white
2) milky skin
3) trembles 'neath lips

nycwriters
06-12-2003, 04:50 PM
1) white
2) milky skin
3) trembles 'neath lips
4) succomb to earthly desires, haste

Frieda
06-12-2003, 07:57 PM
1) white
2) milky skin
3) trembles 'neath lips
4) succomb to earthly desires, haste
5) butterfly kisses

Deviate
06-12-2003, 08:19 PM
1) white
2) milky skin
3) trembles 'neath lips
4) succomb to earthly desires, haste
5) butterfly kisses
6) melt rough

nycwriters
06-12-2003, 08:40 PM
1) white
2) milky skin
3) trembles 'neath lips
4) succomb to earthly desires, haste
5) butterfly kisses
6) melt rough
7) gone

beckstra
06-12-2003, 10:48 PM
1) nickel

ambo
06-13-2003, 12:15 AM
1) nickel
2) two for 10

Deviate
06-13-2003, 12:22 PM
1) nickel
2) two for 10
3) still not enough

beckstra
06-13-2003, 07:46 PM
1) nickel
2) two for 10
3) still not enough
4) for an ice cream cone

lapietra
06-13-2003, 09:45 PM
1) nickel
2) two for 10
3) still not enough
4) for an ice cream cone
5) would you take

Deviate
06-13-2003, 10:22 PM
1) nickel
2) two for 10
3) still not enough
4) for an ice cream cone
5) would you take
6) a red sucker

ambo
06-13-2003, 11:52 PM
1) nickel
2) two for 10
3) still not enough
4) for an ice cream cone
5) would you take
6) a red sucker
7) sour ball

red
06-14-2003, 12:07 AM
1. Dustbunnies

beckstra
06-14-2003, 01:09 AM
1. Dustbunnies
2. Finding my bed

trisherina
06-14-2003, 01:23 AM
1. Dustbunnies
2. Finding my bed
3. And hiding beneath

beckstra
06-14-2003, 01:34 AM
1. Dustbunnies
2. Finding my bed
3. And hiding beneath
4. Faded yellow photographs

trisherina
06-14-2003, 02:47 AM
1. Dustbunnies
2. Finding my bed
3. And hiding beneath
4. Faded yellow photographs
5. Of you and me atop

beckstra
06-14-2003, 02:57 PM
1. Dustbunnies
2. Finding my bed
3. And hiding beneath
4. Faded yellow photographs
5. Of you and me atop
6. Eroding mountains

ambo
06-15-2003, 12:54 AM
1. Dustbunnies
2. Finding my bed
3. And hiding beneath
4. Faded yellow photographs
5. Of you and me atop
6. Eroding mountains
7. So long ago

lapietra
06-15-2003, 01:45 AM
1. Where is

beckstra
06-15-2003, 10:44 AM
1. Where is
2. Sweetheart Lookout?

Deviate
06-15-2003, 12:56 PM
1. Where is
2. Sweetheart Lookout?
3. I've been looking for so long

beckstra
06-15-2003, 09:46 PM
1. Where is
2. Sweetheart Lookout?
3. I've been looking for so long
4. Nightlife has lost itself in my radio

fodder
06-16-2003, 11:31 PM
1. Where is
2. Sweetheart Lookout?
3. I've been looking for so long
4. Nightlife has lost itself in my radio
5. I stare ahead, navy blankets

ambo
06-17-2003, 12:33 AM
1. Where is
2. Sweetheart Lookout?
3. I've been looking for so long
4. Nightlife has lost itself in my radio
5. I stare ahead, navy blankets
6. the starless sky

zefrank
06-17-2003, 09:12 AM
1. Where is
2. Sweetheart Lookout?
3. I've been looking for so long
4. Nightlife has lost itself in my radio
5. I stare ahead, navy blankets
6. the starless sky
7. and Mom.

Deviate
06-17-2003, 09:56 AM
1. sugar

Frieda
06-17-2003, 10:23 AM
1. sugar
2. burning sweetness

RuneT
06-17-2003, 11:05 AM
1. sugar
2. burning sweetness
3. add strips of peach and stir

zefrank
06-17-2003, 11:35 AM
1. sugar
2. burning sweetness
3. add strips of peach and stir
4. don't worry if a tear drops in

Deviate
06-17-2003, 11:39 AM
1. sugar
2. burning sweetness
3. add strips of peach and stir
4. don't worry if a tear drops in
5. it's bitter salty taste makes

lapietra
06-17-2003, 03:24 PM
1. sugar
2. burning sweetness
3. add strips of peach and stir
4. don't worry if a tear drops in
5. its bitter salty taste makes
6. the final outcome

ambo
06-17-2003, 04:12 PM
1. sugar
2. burning sweetness
3. add strips of peach and stir
4. don't worry if a tear drops in
5. its bitter salty taste makes
6. the final outcome
7. nectar



*these are starting to look downright phallic*

red
06-17-2003, 05:53 PM
1. Unemployed

amanda
06-17-2003, 09:10 PM
1. Unemployed
2. last dollar gone

ambo
06-17-2003, 11:15 PM
1. Unemployed
2. last dollar gone
3. check the classifieds

moel
06-17-2003, 11:17 PM
1. Unemployed
2. last dollar gone
3. check the classifieds
4. and pull out the highlighter

danh
06-18-2003, 12:44 AM
1. Unemployed
2. last dollar gone
3. check the classifieds
4. and pull out the highlighter
5. "Wanted: male escort"

ambo
06-18-2003, 07:20 PM
1. Unemployed
2. last dollar gone
3. check the classifieds
4. and pull out the highlighter
5. "Wanted: male escort"
6. "not too tall"

amanda
06-18-2003, 07:35 PM
1. Unemployed
2. last dollar gone
3. check the classifieds
4. and pull out the highlighter
5. "Wanted: male escort"
6. "not too tall"
7. redundant

lapietra
06-18-2003, 08:21 PM
1. curled

nycwriters
06-18-2003, 08:59 PM
1. curled
2. toes tucked

amanda
06-18-2003, 09:19 PM
1. curled
2. toes tucked
3. suckled honey drips

ambo
06-18-2003, 11:03 PM
1. curled
2. toes tucked
3. suckled honey drips
4. from eager sticky fingers

zefrank
06-19-2003, 08:38 PM
1. curled
2. toes tucked
3. suckled honey drips
4. from eager sticky fingers
5. "bears don't belong inside," I said.

lapietra
06-19-2003, 10:46 PM
1. curled
2. toes tucked
3. suckled honey drips
4. from eager sticky fingers
5. "bears don't belong inside," I said.
6. "But since you're so cute,

ambo
06-20-2003, 12:19 AM
1. curled
2. toes tucked
3. suckled honey drips
4. from eager sticky fingers
5. "bears don't belong inside," I said.
6. "But since you're so cute,
7. get yer butt in here."

amanda
06-20-2003, 10:42 AM
1. hokey-pokey

RuneT
06-20-2003, 10:52 AM
1. hokey-pokey
2. the holy monkey

zefrank
06-20-2003, 11:12 AM
1. hokey-pokey
2. the holy monkey
3. sat up one morning.

Frieda
06-20-2003, 11:43 AM
1. hokey-pokey
2. the holy monkey
3. sat up one morning.
4. put some enchiladas on my plate

amanda
06-20-2003, 12:28 PM
1. hokey-pokey
2. the holy monkey
3. sat up one morning.
4. put some enchiladas on my plate
5. turned it inside-out,

ambo
06-20-2003, 02:07 PM
1. hokey-pokey
2. the holy monkey
3. sat up one morning.
4. put some enchiladas on my plate
5. turned it inside-out,
6. screeched at me,

beckstra
06-20-2003, 07:07 PM
1. hokey-pokey
2. the holy monkey
3. sat up one morning.
4. put some enchiladas on my plate
5. turned it inside-out,
6. screeched at me,
7. and danced

moel
06-20-2003, 08:48 PM
1. Two times

amanda
06-20-2003, 10:01 PM
1. Two times
2. two is not for

dickieC
06-20-2003, 10:11 PM
1. Two times
2. two is not for
3. the faint-hearted

lapietra
06-21-2003, 02:23 AM
1. Two times
2. two is not for
3. the faint-hearted
4. but you're a brave one

ambo
06-21-2003, 03:23 AM
1. Two times
2. two is not for
3. the faint-hearted
4. but you're a brave one
5. so square away

amanda
06-21-2003, 07:13 AM
1. Two times
2. two is not for
3. the faint-hearted
4. but you're a brave one
5. so square away
6. be rootless

red
06-21-2003, 01:33 PM
1. Two times
2. two is not for
3. the faint-hearted
4. but you're a brave one
5. so square away
6. be rootless
7. live!

ambo
06-21-2003, 01:34 PM
1. Dreaming, I

red
06-21-2003, 01:37 PM
1. Dreaming, I
2. am flying high

nycwriters
06-21-2003, 03:02 PM
1. Dreaming, I
2. am flying high
3. my soul, euphoric

lapietra
06-21-2003, 03:55 PM
1. Dreaming, I
2. am flying high
3. my soul, euphoric
4. our kisses communicate

ambo
06-21-2003, 11:45 PM
1. Dreaming, I
2. am flying high
3. my soul, euphoric
4. our kisses communicate
5. in shades of light

lapietra
06-22-2003, 12:01 AM
1. Dreaming, I
2. am flying high
3. my soul, euphoric
4. our kisses communicate
5. in shades of light
4. our two souls

ambo
06-22-2003, 12:03 AM
1. Dreaming, I
2. am flying high
3. my soul, euphoric
4. our kisses communicate
5. in shades of light
6. our two souls
7. in unison

lapietra
06-22-2003, 12:16 AM
1. breathing

nycwriters
06-22-2003, 12:37 AM
1. breathing
2. in and out

ambo
06-22-2003, 01:27 AM
1. breathing
2. in and out
3. into the bag

nycwriters
06-22-2003, 01:59 AM
1. breathing
2. in and out
3. into the bag
4. this feeling comes and goes

amanda
06-22-2003, 07:26 PM
1. breathing
2. in and out
3. into the bag
4. this feeling comes and goes
5. my prize fish

beckstra
06-22-2003, 09:51 PM
1. breathing
2. in and out
3. into the bag
4. this feeling comes and goes
5. my prize fish
6. wiggles up

red
06-23-2003, 12:11 AM
1. breathing
2. in and out
3. into the bag
4. this feeling comes and goes
5. my prize fish
6. wiggles up
7. gasping

beckstra
06-23-2003, 10:55 AM
1. Marda girl

lapietra
06-23-2003, 02:47 PM
1. Marda girl
2. blue-eyed, bald

fodder
06-23-2003, 09:54 PM
1. Marda girl
2. blue-eyed, bald
3. and those bulby eyeballs

lapietra
06-23-2003, 10:35 PM
1. Marda girl
2. blue-eyed, bald
3. and those bulby eyeballs
4. such incredibly smooth green skin

beckstra
06-23-2003, 10:52 PM
1. Marda girl
2. blue-eyed, bald
3. and those bulby eyeballs
4. such incredibly smooth green skin
5. super powers galore

red
06-24-2003, 12:50 AM
1. Marda girl
2. blue-eyed, bald
3. and those bulby eyeballs
4. such incredibly smooth green skin
5. super powers galore
6. she chooses to

lapietra
06-24-2003, 01:59 AM
1. Marda girl
2. blue-eyed, bald
3. and those bulby eyeballs
4. such incredibly smooth green skin
5. super powers galore
6. she chooses to
7. write porn

ambo
06-24-2003, 02:06 AM
1. Ripples

beckstra
06-24-2003, 12:09 PM
1. Ripples
2. under the dock

lapietra
06-24-2003, 04:52 PM
1. Ripples
2. under the dock
3. silver sunlit flash, there

ambo
06-24-2003, 06:05 PM
1. Ripples
2. under the dock
3. silver sunlit flash, there
4. where golden feet are dangling

amanda
06-24-2003, 08:09 PM
1. Ripples
2. under the dock
3. silver sunlit flash, there
4. where golden feet are dangling
5. lazy fishin' away the day

ambo
06-25-2003, 12:10 AM
1. Ripples
2. under the dock
3. silver sunlit flash, there
4. where golden feet are dangling
5. lazy fishin' away the day
6. after day after

amanda
06-25-2003, 07:28 PM
1. Ripples
2. under the dock
3. silver sunlit flash, there
4. where golden feet are dangling
5. lazy fishin' away the day
6. after day after
7. fine day

ambo
06-25-2003, 11:56 PM
1. Grief will

Frieda
06-26-2003, 04:05 AM
1. Grief will
2. Close my eyes

zefrank
06-26-2003, 10:24 AM
1. Grief will
2. Close my eyes
3. Close my heart

amanda
06-26-2003, 11:07 AM
1. Grief will
2. Close my eyes
3. Close my heart
4. but open the door to another

beckstra
06-26-2003, 06:41 PM
1. Grief will
2. Close my eyes
3. Close my heart
4. but open the door to another
5. floodgate of tears

trisherina
06-27-2003, 01:29 AM
1. Grief will
2. Close my eyes
3. Close my heart
4. but open the door to another
5. floodgate of tears
6. cleansing away

beckstra
06-27-2003, 11:24 AM
1. Grief will
2. Close my eyes
3. Close my heart
4. but open the door to another
5. floodgate of tears
6. cleansing away
7. his blue eyes

moel
06-27-2003, 11:34 PM
1. Fury

beckstra
06-28-2003, 12:45 AM
1. Fury
2. Stirring

ambo
06-28-2003, 12:29 PM
1. Fury
2. Stirring
3. Disturbing

moel
06-28-2003, 01:03 PM
1. Fury
2. Stirring
3. Disturbing
4. In your eyes

beckstra
06-28-2003, 01:29 PM
1. Fury
2. Stirring
3. Disturbing
4. In your eyes
5. Crawling

Frieda
06-28-2003, 05:16 PM
1. Fury
2. Stirring
3. Disturbing
4. In your eyes
5. Crawling
6. Me

moel
06-28-2003, 05:25 PM
1. Fury
2. Stirring
3. Disturbing
4. In your eyes
5. Crawling
6. Me
7. I

ambo
06-29-2003, 07:48 PM
1. A dozen eggs

Guido
06-29-2003, 10:56 PM
1. A dozen eggs
2. All lying, cracked

zefrank
06-30-2003, 12:50 PM
1. A dozen eggs
2. All lying, cracked
3. Bleeding yellow on tiles

moel
06-30-2003, 03:53 PM
1. A dozen eggs
2. All lying, cracked
3. Bleeding yellow on tiles
4. Fills me with incedible edible rage

ambo
06-30-2003, 04:03 PM
1. A dozen eggs
2. All lying, cracked
3. Bleeding yellow on tiles
4. Fills me with incedible edible rage
5. A sensation I can taste

moel
06-30-2003, 04:20 PM
1. A dozen eggs
2. All lying, cracked
3. Bleeding yellow on tiles
4. Fills me with incedible edible rage
5. A sensation I can taste
6. As I lick the floor

zefrank
06-30-2003, 04:35 PM
1. A dozen eggs
2. All lying, cracked
3. Bleeding yellow on tiles
4. Fills me with incredible edible rage
5. A sensation I can taste
6. As I lick the floor
7. Under you

fodder
06-30-2003, 05:06 PM
1. water's hot

zefrank
06-30-2003, 05:33 PM
1. water's hot
2. "some tea, my dear?"

Frieda
06-30-2003, 06:11 PM
1. water's hot
2. "some tea, my dear?"
3. cinnamon cookies on a plate

ambo
06-30-2003, 07:22 PM
1. water's hot
2. "some tea, my dear?"
3. cinnamon cookies on a plate
4. sitting cross-legged before the fire

amanda
06-30-2003, 10:26 PM
1. water's hot
2. "some tea, my dear?"
3. cinnamon cookies on a plate
4. sitting cross-legged before the fire
5. jeans warming, careful now

moel
06-30-2003, 10:44 PM
1. water's hot
2. "some tea, my dear?"
3. cinnamon cookies on a plate
4. sitting cross-legged before the fire
5. jeans warming, careful now
6. As grandpa tell's tales

ambo
07-01-2003, 12:29 AM
1. water's hot
2. "some tea, my dear?"
3. cinnamon cookies on a plate
4. sitting cross-legged before the fire
5. jeans warming, careful now
6. As grandpa tell's tales
7. softly, dearly

amanda
07-01-2003, 11:53 AM
1. wrestling

ambo
07-01-2003, 04:00 PM
1. wrestling
2. with my demons

bealeblues
07-01-2003, 06:08 PM
1. wrestling
2. with my demons
3. they mock my struggle

Frieda
07-02-2003, 04:41 AM
1. wrestling
2. with my demons
3. they mock my struggle
4. leaving me in despair, sitting here

zefrank
07-02-2003, 02:06 PM
1. wrestling
2. with my demons
3. they mock my struggle
4. leaving me in despair, sitting here
5. surrounded by photos

ambo
07-02-2003, 03:33 PM
1. wrestling
2. with my demons
3. they mock my struggle
4. leaving me in despair, sitting here
5. surrounded by photos
6. faded and yellow

amanda
07-02-2003, 04:00 PM
1. wrestling
2. with my demons
3. they mock my struggle
4. leaving me in despair, sitting here
5. surrounded by photos
6. faded and yellow
7. suspended

zefrank
07-02-2003, 08:02 PM
1) this beer

moel
07-02-2003, 08:05 PM
1) this beer
2) plus that beer

ambo
07-02-2003, 08:57 PM
1) this beer
2) plus that beer
3) uh, where was i ?

moel
07-02-2003, 09:34 PM
1) this beer
2) plus that beer
3) uh, where was i ?
4) did i really say that?

zefrank
07-03-2003, 12:29 AM
1) this beer
2) plus that beer
3) uh, where was i ?
4) did i really say that?
5) what? uhhh..sure.

ambo
07-03-2003, 01:26 AM
1) this beer
2) plus that beer
3) uh, where was i ?
4) did i really say that?
5) what? uhhh..sure.
6) i need a beer

fodder
07-03-2003, 11:22 AM
1) this beer
2) plus that beer
3) uh, where was i ?
4) did i really say that?
5) what? uhhh..sure.
6) i need a beer
7) oh schlitz

amanda
07-03-2003, 12:31 PM
1. cutie pie

zefrank
07-03-2003, 03:08 PM
1. cutie pie
2. don't blush

moel
07-03-2003, 06:38 PM
1. cutie pie
2. don't blush
3. i like your smile

bailygrl
07-03-2003, 07:13 PM
1. cutie pie
2. don't blush
3. i like your smile
4. even withouth teeth

zefrank
07-03-2003, 07:43 PM
1. cutie pie
2. don't blush
3. i like your smile
4. even withouth teeth
5. little baby girl

amanda
07-03-2003, 10:01 PM
1. cutie pie
2. don't blush
3. i like your smile
4. even withouth teeth
5. little baby girl
6. don't hide

ambo
07-04-2003, 12:43 AM
1. cutie pie
2. don't blush
3. i like your smile
4. even withouth teeth
5. little baby girl
6. don't hide
7. giggle

moel
07-04-2003, 12:47 AM
1. Tomorrow

amanda
07-04-2003, 01:17 AM
1. Tomorrow
2. I shall dance

fodder
07-04-2003, 01:29 AM
1. Tomorrow
2. I shall dance
3. alone and twisting

zefrank
07-04-2003, 10:05 AM
1. Tomorrow
2. I shall dance
3. alone and twisting
4. for rain and other things

moel
07-04-2003, 11:43 AM
1. Tomorrow
2. I shall dance
3. alone and twisting
4. for rain and other things
5. i'd like if you joined

amanda
07-04-2003, 11:48 AM
1. Tomorrow
2. I shall dance
3. alone and twisting
4. for rain and other things
5. i'd like if you joined
6. b.y.o. barefeet

ambo
07-05-2003, 12:28 AM
1. Tomorrow
2. I shall dance
3. alone and twisting
4. for rain and other things
5. i'd like if you joined
6. b.y.o. barefeet
7. ha cha cha

fodder
07-05-2003, 01:14 AM
1. a glance

moel
07-05-2003, 09:40 PM
1. a glance
2. as cold as ice

ambo
07-05-2003, 10:42 PM
1. a glance
2. as cold as ice
3. pierces my armour

moel
07-06-2003, 12:08 PM
1. a glance
2. as cold as ice
3. pierces my armour
4. cracking through my soul

ambo
07-06-2003, 02:31 PM
1. a glance
2. as cold as ice
3. pierces my armour
4. cracking through my soul
5. i collect the pieces