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trisherina
07-07-2003, 02:06 AM
1. a glance
2. as cold as ice
3. pierces my armour
4. cracking through my soul
5. i collect the pieces
6. and muster on,
1. a glance
2. as cold as ice
3. pierces my armour
4. cracking through my soul
5. i collect the pieces
6. and muster on,
7. wincing
Frieda
07-07-2003, 05:00 PM
1. my butt
1. my butt
2. isn't too big
trisherina
07-07-2003, 07:18 PM
1. my butt
2. isn't too big
3. unless you count
zefrank
07-07-2003, 08:44 PM
1. my butt
2. isn't too big
3. unless you count
4. those two mounds
fodder
07-07-2003, 11:41 PM
1. my butt
2. isn't too big
3. unless you count
4. those two mounds
5. yearning, praying
1. my butt
2. isn't too big
3. unless you count
4. those two mounds
5. yearning, praying
6. to be tight
amanda
07-08-2003, 10:03 PM
1. my butt
2. isn't too big
3. unless you count
4. those two mounds
5. yearning, praying
6. to be tight
7. pucker
trisherina
07-09-2003, 02:10 AM
1. let's talk
2. about your
zefrank
07-09-2003, 07:50 AM
1. let's talk
2. about your
3. teensie little
amanda
07-09-2003, 11:00 AM
1. let's talk
2. about your
3. teensie little
4. itty-bitty yellow
1. let's talk
2. about your
3. teensie little
4. itty-bitty yellow
5. training bra
RuneT
07-10-2003, 07:39 PM
1. let's talk
2. about your
3. teensie little
4. itty-bitty yellow
5. training bra
6. that don't
amanda
07-10-2003, 09:03 PM
1. let's talk
2. about your
3. teensie little
4. itty-bitty yellow
5. training bra
6. that don't
7. snap
amanda
07-11-2003, 10:34 PM
1. Sip my tea
2. don't laugh now
Frieda
07-12-2003, 04:13 PM
1. Sip my tea
2. don't laugh now
3. it tastes like cheap
dickieC
07-12-2003, 05:30 PM
1. Sip my tea
2. don't laugh now
3. it tastes like cheap
4. perfume from a cheaper
nycwriters
07-12-2003, 06:17 PM
1. Sip my tea
2. don't laugh now
3. it tastes like cheap
4. perfume from a cheaper
5. life I used to lead,
AllegroNg
07-12-2003, 07:27 PM
1. Sip my tea
2. don't laugh now
3. it tastes like cheap
4. perfume from a cheaper
5. life I used to lead,
6. thru that door
dickieC
07-12-2003, 07:44 PM
1. Sip my tea
2. don't laugh now
3. it tastes like cheap
4. perfume from a cheaper
5. life I used to lead,
6. thru that door
7. into history
AllegroNg
07-12-2003, 10:41 PM
1. baby genius
2. what she knows
amanda
07-13-2003, 10:07 PM
1. baby genius
2. what she knows
3. would shock her momma
1. baby genius
2. what she knows
3. would shock her momma
4. writes a tell-all book; best-seller
amanda
07-14-2003, 09:39 PM
1. baby genius
2. what she knows
3. would shock her momma
4. writes a tell-all book; best-seller
5. titled "Tales from the Crib"
1. baby genius
2. what she knows
3. would shock her momma
4. writes a tell-all book; best-seller
5. titled "Tales from the Crib"
6. gets an agent
zefrank
07-15-2003, 06:10 PM
1. baby genius
2. what she knows
3. would shock her momma
4. writes a tell-all book; best-seller
5. titled "Tales from the Crib"
6. gets an agent
7. bigger crib
amanda
07-15-2003, 08:48 PM
1. honey
zefrank
07-15-2003, 11:57 PM
1. honey
2. bees are so
3. -so. Ants are
1. honey
2. bees are so
3. -so. Ants are
4. in my pants. If I
CatchrNdRy
07-16-2003, 08:42 PM
1. honey
2. bees are so
3. -so. Ants are
4. in my pants. If I
5. loosen a notch
amanda
07-16-2003, 09:31 PM
1. honey
2. bees are so
3. -so. Ants are
4. in my pants. If I
5. loosen a notch
6. wiggles up
Frieda
07-17-2003, 03:55 AM
1. honey
2. bees are so
3. -so. Ants are
4. in my pants. If I
5. loosen a notch
6. wiggles up
7. EEK!
CatchrNdRy
07-17-2003, 11:29 AM
1. Don't go
2. away my dear
zefrank
07-17-2003, 03:17 PM
1. Don't go
2. away my dear
3. not before the fight
1. Don't go
2. away my dear
3. not before the fight
4. i've got the pillows fluffed
dickieC
07-17-2003, 03:28 PM
1. Don't go
2. away my dear
3. not before the fight
4. i've got the pillows fluffed
5. Full of feathers
amanda
07-17-2003, 09:27 PM
1. Don't go
2. away my dear
3. not before the fight
4. i've got the pillows fluffed
5. Full of feathers
6. wallop me
dickieC
07-18-2003, 03:02 AM
1. Don't go
2. away my dear
3. not before the fight
4. i've got the pillows fluffed
5. Full of feathers
6. wallop me
7. baby
amanda
07-18-2003, 01:18 PM
1. woof
1. woof
2. the wolf
3. all moon-eyed
fodder
07-19-2003, 11:11 PM
1. woof
2. the wolf
3. all moon-eyed
4. rabid, sceaming man
1. woof
2. the wolf
3. all moon-eyed
4. rabid, sceaming man
5. a look of terror
dickieC
07-20-2003, 05:42 PM
1. woof
2. the wolf
3. all moon-eyed
4. rabid, sceaming man
5. a look of terror
6. he retches
CatchrNdRy
07-21-2003, 05:15 PM
1. woof
2. the wolf
3. all moon-eyed
4. rabid, sceaming man
5. a look of terror
6. he retches
7. growls
zefrank
07-22-2003, 12:31 AM
1. "You can't!"
trisherina
07-22-2003, 12:46 AM
1. "You can't!"
2. But I can, and
amanda
07-22-2003, 01:47 AM
1. "You can't!"
2. But I can, and
3. I'm gonna. It'll be
zefrank
07-22-2003, 09:33 AM
1. "You can't!"
2. But I can, and
3. I'm gonna. It'll be
4. the best damn hickey
AllegroNg
07-22-2003, 11:05 AM
1. "You can't!"
2. But I can, and
3. I'm gonna. It'll be
4. the best damn hickey
5. oh boy will it suck
CatchrNdRy
07-22-2003, 11:13 AM
1. "You can't!"
2. But I can, and
3. I'm gonna. It'll be
4. the best damn hickey
5. oh boy will it suck
6. can't show my mom
amanda
07-22-2003, 09:54 PM
1. "You can't!"
2. But I can, and
3. I'm gonna. It'll be
4. the best damn hickey
5. oh boy will it suck
6. can't show my mom
7. you're naughty
fodder
07-22-2003, 11:52 PM
1. walk inside, smoky
zefrank
07-23-2003, 12:03 AM
1. walk inside, smoky
2. this sure ain't new york
AllegroNg
07-23-2003, 07:27 AM
1. walk inside, smoky
2. this sure ain't new york
3. yet it feels like home to me
malina
07-23-2003, 08:52 AM
1. walk inside, smoky
2. this sure ain't new york
3. yet it feels like home to me
4. i've travelled the world and the seven seas
zefrank
07-23-2003, 11:38 AM
1. walk inside, smoky
2. this sure ain't new york
3. yet it feels like home to me
4. i've travelled the world and the seven seas
5. damn, the jukebox is so old
fodder
07-23-2003, 11:44 AM
1. walk inside, smoky
2. this sure ain't new york
3. yet it feels like home to me
4. i've travelled the world and the seven seas
5. damn, the jukebox is so old
6. sit alone at the bar
1. walk inside, smoky
2. this sure ain't new york
3. yet it feels like home to me
4. i've travelled the world and the seven seas
5. damn, the jukebox is so old
6. sit alone at the bar
7. cryin' in my beer
amanda
07-24-2003, 12:43 AM
1. do-si-do
1. do-si-do
2. line dancing
Frieda
07-24-2003, 03:46 AM
1. do-si-do
2. line dancing
3. wearin' my hat
AllegroNg
07-24-2003, 10:07 AM
1. do-si-do
2. line dancing
3. wearin' my hat
4. uncle chuck watchin me
Frieda
07-24-2003, 10:09 AM
1. do-si-do
2. line dancing
3. wearin' my hat
4. uncle chuck watchin me
5. clickety-clack boots on the floor
AllegroNg
07-24-2003, 10:17 AM
1. do-si-do
2. line dancing
3. wearin' my hat
4. uncle chuck watchin me
5. clickety-clack boots on the floor
6. crooked smiles stare
amanda
07-24-2003, 11:46 AM
1. do-si-do
2. line dancing
3. wearin' my hat
4. uncle chuck watchin me
5. clickety-clack boots on the floor
6. crooked smiles stare
7. wood eye?
CatchrNdRy
07-24-2003, 06:34 PM
1. Smug grin on you
fodder
07-25-2003, 10:58 AM
1. Smug grin on you
2. cheeks to the sky, rain falling thick
1. Smug grin on you
2. cheeks to the sky, rain falling thick
3. now, eyes looking down, face to the ground
fodder
07-26-2003, 12:54 AM
1. Smug grin on you
2. cheeks to the sky, rain falling thick
3. now, eyes looking down, face to the ground
4. the blonde in the blue dress waves from across the road
1. Smug grin on you
2. cheeks to the sky, rain falling thick
3. now, eyes looking down, face to the ground
4. the blonde in the blue dress waves from across the road
5. i keep playing it cool, well my insides explode
AllegroNg
07-27-2003, 09:53 PM
1. Smug grin on you
2. cheeks to the sky, rain falling thick
3. now, eyes looking down, face to the ground
4. the blonde in the blue dress waves from across the road
5. i keep playing it cool, well my insides explode
6. You give me that smile, you always do
Melcena
07-28-2003, 12:23 AM
1. Smug grin on you
2. cheeks to the sky, rain falling thick
3. now, eyes looking down, face to the ground
4. the blonde in the blue dress waves from across the road
5. i keep playing it cool, well my insides explode
6. You give me that smile, you always do
7. you know me too well
1. What's to say
petitesoeur
07-28-2003, 08:58 AM
1. What's to say
2. Daily pleasantries or clandestine clatter
AllegroNg
07-29-2003, 09:37 AM
1. What's to say
2. Daily pleasantries or clandestine clatter
3. Perhaps there's something we can enjoy always
Frieda
07-29-2003, 10:04 AM
1. What's to say
2. Daily pleasantries or clandestine clatter
3. Perhaps there's something we can enjoy always
4. Such as the sun or watermelon flavored bubble-gum
amanda
07-30-2003, 09:53 PM
1. What's to say
2. Daily pleasantries or clandestine clatter
3. Perhaps there's something we can enjoy always
4. Such as the sun or watermelon flavored bubble-gum
5. skinny dips and honeysuckle sips, pale moonlight
AllegroNg
07-31-2003, 05:29 PM
1. What's to say
2. Daily pleasantries or clandestine clatter
3. Perhaps there's something we can enjoy always
4. Such as the sun or watermelon flavored bubble-gum
5. skinny dips and honeysuckle sips, pale moonlight
6. or to catch fireflies that look like little stars
petitesoeur
08-02-2003, 09:37 PM
1. What's to say
2. Daily pleasantries or clandestine clatter
3. Perhaps there's something we can enjoy always
4. Such as the sun or watermelon flavored bubble-gum
5. skinny dips and honeysuckle sips, pale moonlight
6. or to catch fireflies that look like little stars
7. while we are silently being.
AllegroNg
08-02-2003, 10:11 PM
1. To begin
1. To begin
2. I would like to
zefrank
08-03-2003, 04:05 PM
1. To begin
2. I would like to
3. thank all of you
AllegroNg
08-03-2003, 06:31 PM
1. To begin
2. I would like to
3. thank all of you
4. for joining me at my
1. To begin
2. I would like to
3. thank all of you
4. for joining me at my
5. first ever nightly
AllegroNg
08-03-2003, 07:18 PM
1. To begin
2. I would like to
3. thank all of you
4. for joining me at my
5. first ever nightly
6. castration
1. To begin
2. I would like to
3. thank all of you
4. for joining me at my
5. first ever nightly
6. castration
7. The End
(!)
! is right ambo, i don't really like where that one took us. But it did go full circle.
1. Instant
amanda
08-03-2003, 10:59 PM
1. Instant
2. mashed potatoes are
petitesoeur
08-03-2003, 11:40 PM
1. Instant
2. mashed potatoes are
3. a sign of my heart's surrender
zefrank
08-04-2003, 12:02 AM
1. Instant
2. mashed potatoes are
3. a sign of my heart's surrender
4. The Midwest has swallowed me whole.
trisherina
08-04-2003, 01:48 AM
1. Instant
2. mashed potatoes are
3. a sign of my heart's surrender
4. The Midwest has swallowed me whole.
5. Idahoan, boxed, dehydrated
petitesoeur
08-04-2003, 09:40 AM
1.monday storms
1. Instant
2. mashed potatoes are
3. a sign of my heart's surrender
4. The Midwest has swallowed me whole.
5. Idahoan, boxed, dehydrated
6. ready when you are
AllegroNg
08-04-2003, 10:13 AM
1. Instant
2. mashed potatoes are
3. a sign of my heart's surrender
4. The Midwest has swallowed me whole.
5. Idahoan, boxed, dehydrated
6. ready when you are
7. Oh god yes.
AllegroNg
08-04-2003, 10:14 AM
Originally posted by petitesoeur
1.monday storms
amanda
08-04-2003, 09:58 PM
1. monday storms
2. swirling in my tea cup
fodder
08-05-2003, 01:24 AM
1. monday storms
2. swirling in my tea cup
3. tornados dont matter, i'm warm and
trisherina
08-05-2003, 02:09 AM
1. monday storms
2. swirling in my tea cup
3. tornados dont matter, i'm warm and
4. cozy in my own little tempest of self-loathing
AllegroNg
08-05-2003, 08:05 AM
1. monday storms
2. swirling in my tea cup
3. tornados dont matter, i'm warm and
4. cozy in my own little tempest of self-loathing
5. pretend my teabag is a boat of sorrow
AllegroNg
08-05-2003, 08:05 AM
1. monday storms
2. swirling in my tea cup
3. tornados dont matter, i'm warm and
4. cozy in my own little tempest of self-loathing
5. pretend my teabag is a boat of sorrow
1. monday storms
2. swirling in my tea cup
3. tornados dont matter, i'm warm and
4. cozy in my own little tempest of self-loathing
5. pretend my teabag is a boat of sorrow
6. the sugar my escape
1. monday storms
2. swirling in my tea cup
3. tornados dont matter, i'm warm and
4. cozy in my own little tempest of self-loathing
5. pretend my teabag is a boat of sorrow
6. the sugar my escape
7. rain has stopped
zefrank
08-06-2003, 12:20 AM
punk ass bitch
petitesoeur
08-06-2003, 12:59 AM
1. punk ass bitch
2. peels another banana
AllegroNg
08-06-2003, 07:50 AM
1. punk ass bitch
2. peels another banana
3. bitches need potassium, too
Frieda
08-06-2003, 08:24 AM
1. punk ass bitch
2. peels another banana
3. bitches need potassium, too
4. about 85 miligrams of calcium take care of
RuneT
08-06-2003, 08:27 AM
1. punk ass bitch
2. peels another banana
3. bitches need potassium, too
4. about 85 miligrams of calcium take care of
5. get your hands off my banana!
amanda
08-06-2003, 09:56 PM
1. punk ass bitch
2. peels another banana
3. bitches need potassium, too
4. about 85 miligrams of calcium take care of
5. get your hands off my banana!
6. Or you'll be eating it with
Frieda
08-07-2003, 01:28 PM
1. punk ass bitch
2. peels another banana
3. bitches need potassium, too
4. about 85 miligrams of calcium take care of
5. get your hands off my banana!
6. Or you'll be eating it with
7. chocolate pudding
amanda
08-07-2003, 07:04 PM
1. Slimy slick
2. wet elephant poo
petitesoeur
08-07-2003, 08:24 PM
1. Slimy slick
2. wet elephant poo
3. slippin' & slidin' around the zoo
AllegroNg
08-08-2003, 09:05 AM
1. Slimy slick
2. wet elephant poo
3. slippin' & slidin' around the zoo
4. said the kid, "it smells like daddy's bathroom"
1. Slimy slick
2. wet elephant poo
3. slippin' & slidin' around the zoo
4. said the kid, "it smells like daddy's bathroom"
5. "only with much less monkeys"
petitesoeur
08-10-2003, 10:01 AM
1. Slimy slick
2. wet elephant poo
3. slippin' & slidin' around the zoo
4. said the kid, "it smells like daddy's bathroom"
5. "only with much less monkeys"
6. as he released the blue ballon
AllegroNg
08-10-2003, 10:37 AM
1. Slimy slick
2. wet elephant poo
3. slippin' & slidin' around the zoo
4. said the kid, "it smells like daddy's bathroom"
5. "only with much less monkeys"
6. as he released the blue ballon
7. filled with elephant poo.
petitesoeur
08-11-2003, 07:57 AM
1. tuesday finds me
1. tuesday finds me
2. a little worse for wear
zefrank
08-12-2003, 02:02 PM
1. tuesday finds me
2. a little worse for wear
3. this cycle of disappointment
fodder
08-12-2003, 02:12 PM
1. tuesday finds me
2. a little worse for wear
3. this cycle of disappointment
4. they stole my car and they stole my
1. tuesday finds me
2. a little worse for wear
3. this cycle of disappointment
4. they stole my car and they stole my
5. genuine zefrank t-shirt
petitesoeur
08-12-2003, 06:06 PM
1. tuesday finds me
2. a little worse for wear
3. this cycle of disappointment
4. they stole my car and they stole my
5. genuine zefrank t-shirt
6. my simu-date tanked
AllegroNg
08-12-2003, 07:41 PM
1. tuesday finds me
2. a little worse for wear
3. this cycle of disappointment
4. they stole my car and they stole my
5. genuine zefrank t-shirt
6. my simu-date tanked
7. wednesday cure me
amanda
08-12-2003, 08:47 PM
1. on the edge
1. on the edge
2. i wait for your reply
trisherina
08-12-2003, 11:11 PM
1. on the edge
2. i wait for your reply
3. What's it gonna be, boy?
petitesoeur
08-12-2003, 11:34 PM
1. on the edge
2. i wait for your reply
3. What's it gonna be, boy?
4. as you're stumblin' through twisted
nycwriters
08-13-2003, 02:56 AM
1. on the edge
2. i wait for your reply
3. What's it gonna be, boy?
4. as you're stumblin' through twisted
5. denied and resisting
amanda
08-13-2003, 03:29 AM
1. on the edge
2. i wait for your reply
3. What's it gonna be, boy?
4. as you're stumblin' through twisted
5. denied and resisting
6. taffy quagmire
nycwriters
08-13-2003, 03:30 AM
1. on the edge
2. i wait for your reply
3. What's it gonna be, boy?
4. as you're stumblin' through twisted
5. denied and resisting
6. taffy quagimire
7. stuck.
AllegroNg
08-13-2003, 07:26 AM
it's been
Frieda
08-13-2003, 08:02 AM
1. it's been
2. a day full of
chuckie egg
08-13-2003, 08:29 AM
1. it's been
2. a day full of
3. annoyances from
petitesoeur
08-13-2003, 09:16 AM
1. it's been
2. a day full of
3. annoyances from
4. hammerin' spammers
zefrank
08-13-2003, 12:23 PM
1. it's been
2. a day full of
3. annoyances from
4. hammerin' spammers
5. "enlarge your penis"
1. it's been
2. a day full of
3. annoyances from
4. hammerin' spammers
5. "enlarge your penis"
6. "low rates"
trisherina
08-13-2003, 02:14 PM
1. it's been
2. a day full of
3. annoyances from
4. hammerin' spammers
5. "enlarge your penis"
6. "low rates"
7. BITE ME
AddyCat
08-13-2003, 05:01 PM
1. My love
RuneT
08-13-2003, 05:08 PM
1. My love
2. is cheaper
amanda
08-13-2003, 08:43 PM
1. My love
2. is cheaper
3. than a Nova in Baja
AddyCat
08-13-2003, 08:46 PM
1. My love
2. is cheaper
3. than a Nova in Baja
4. whose wheels turn backwards
nycwriters
08-13-2003, 10:34 PM
1. My love
2. is cheaper
3. than a Nova in Baja
4. whose wheels turn backwards
5. never getting beyond
amanda
08-14-2003, 07:52 PM
1. My love
2. is cheaper
3. than a Nova in Baja
4. whose wheels turn backwards
5. never getting beyond
6. customs in Tijuana
AllegroNg
08-15-2003, 10:29 AM
1. My love
2. is cheaper
3. than a Nova in Baja
4. whose wheels turn backwards
5. never getting beyond
6. customs in Tijuana
7. yet getting crabs
amanda
08-16-2003, 09:27 PM
1. hi mom!
AllegroNg
08-16-2003, 09:34 PM
1. hi mom!
2. everything is fine.
1. hi mom!
2. everything is fine.
3. my cellmate is very nice
Frieda
08-17-2003, 06:38 AM
1. hi mom!
2. everything is fine.
3. my cellmate is very nice
4. he watches my back in the shower
nycwriters
08-17-2003, 01:40 PM
1. hi mom!
2. everything is fine.
3. my cellmate is very nice
4. he watches my back in the shower
5. and passes me the soap
1. hi mom!
2. everything is fine.
3. my cellmate is very nice
4. he watches my back in the shower
5. and passes me the soap
6. but when i drop it
AllegroNg
08-17-2003, 02:16 PM
1. hi mom!
2. everything is fine.
3. my cellmate is very nice
4. he watches my back in the shower
5. and passes me the soap
6. but when i drop it
7. i get lucky.
nycwriters
08-17-2003, 02:41 PM
1. sentient
petitesoeur
08-17-2003, 02:50 PM
1. sentient
2. beings sometimes
amanda
08-17-2003, 08:37 PM
1. sentient
2. beings sometimes
3. feel like saying very loudly...
nycwriters
08-17-2003, 10:01 PM
1. sentient
2. beings sometimes
3. feel like saying very loudly...
4. words trapped behind eyes and sighs
petitesoeur
08-18-2003, 08:39 AM
1. sentient
2. beings sometimes
3. feel like saying very loudly...
4. words trapped behind eyes and sighs
5. it was a sudden summer storm
zefrank
08-18-2003, 10:09 AM
1. sentient
2. beings sometimes
3. feel like saying very loudly...
4. words trapped behind eyes and sighs
5. it was a sudden summer storm
6. and I had no patience for it
1. sentient
2. beings sometimes
3. feel like saying very loudly...
4. words trapped behind eyes and sighs
5. it was a sudden summer storm
6. and I had no patience for it
7. my gutters leak
petitesoeur
08-19-2003, 08:58 AM
1. wednesday brings
1. wednesday brings
2. the cheesecake vendors
AddyCat
08-20-2003, 05:18 PM
1. wednesday brings
2. the cheesecake vendors
3. with all their glorious fare
1. wednesday brings
2. the cheesecake vendors
3. with all their glorious fare
4. i'll gain ten pounds by thursday
AllegroNg
08-21-2003, 08:54 AM
1. wednesday brings
2. the cheesecake vendors
3. with all their glorious fare
4. i'll gain ten pounds by thursday
5. which means bigger breasts
petitesoeur
08-21-2003, 09:10 AM
1. wednesday brings
2. the cheesecake vendors
3. with all their glorious fare
4. i'll gain ten pounds by thursday
5. which means bigger breasts
6. & scintillating whistles
Frieda
08-21-2003, 09:40 AM
1. wednesday brings
2. the cheesecake vendors
3. with all their glorious fare
4. i'll gain ten pounds by thursday
5. which means bigger breasts
6. & scintillating whistles
7. and a butt to put
malina
08-21-2003, 10:10 AM
1. i hear
RuneT
08-21-2003, 10:12 AM
1. i hear
2. the sound of
Frieda
08-21-2003, 10:47 AM
Originally posted by Frieda
1. wednesday brings
2. the cheesecake vendors
3. with all their glorious fare
4. i'll gain ten pounds by thursday
5. which means bigger breasts
6. & scintillating whistles
7. and a butt to put
hey! it's not finished yet!!
petitesoeur
08-22-2003, 07:01 AM
1. i hear
2. the sound of
3. another year turning
Frieda
08-22-2003, 07:26 AM
why change it if someone can finish it? and besides, i have no idea what that last sentence means.. but hey, the world is yours, do whatever you please! :)
petitesoeur
08-22-2003, 07:32 AM
fuggehaboudit
:o
Frieda
08-22-2003, 08:00 AM
chezus this pisses me off somehow. i haven't figured out yet why exactly. i'll be back ;)
petitesoeur
08-22-2003, 09:50 AM
Originally posted by Frieda :
1. wednesday brings
2. the cheesecake vendors
3. with all their glorious fare
4. i'll gain ten pounds by thursday
5. which means bigger breasts
6. & scintillating whistles
7. and a butt to put
Frieda
08-22-2003, 11:20 AM
okay i have found out why this annoyed me--
malina, i am going to kill you for starting another one when the last one wasn't finished yet! you can pick between death by listening to tom jones or death by listening to david hasselhoff.. ;)
that was it, everything normal now, sorry people! :o *smooch*
Frieda! They figured it was done!
Originally posted by ambo
One line per post, to create seven line verses in the following pattern:
1st line short-------------
2nd line medium---------------
3rd line long--------------------------
4th line longest----------------------------
5th line long--------------------------
6th line medium----------------
7th line short-------------
petitesoeur
08-22-2003, 01:27 PM
1. wednesday brings
2. the cheesecake vendors
3. with all their glorious fare
4. i'll gain ten pounds by thursday
5. which means bigger breasts
6. & scintillating whistles
7. not a butt to boot
=================c'est fin.;)
========================
matin, un autre:
1. i hear
2. the sound of
3. another year turning
1. i hear
2. the sound of
3. another year turning
4. grinding away my moments
petitesoeur
08-22-2003, 08:07 PM
1. i hear
2. the sound of
3. another year turning
4. grinding away my moments
5. until i'm bereft of all
malina
08-22-2003, 08:09 PM
FRIEDA
i'm so sorry!!!
(i thought it was finished! i did! )
will you forgive me?
malina
08-22-2003, 08:18 PM
... sorry to interrupt your verse, ambo & petitesoeur! ... ;)
Frieda
08-23-2003, 09:11 AM
IT IS OK! I WAS JUST BEING AN ASS AND NAGGING ABOUT IT! I AM SORRY FOR THAT!!
LET'S STOP SHOUTING NOW! :p
petitesoeur
08-23-2003, 09:55 AM
yes please i am so sorry & :o that i started this up
please please let's kiss & make-up & turn back to making circular verse
petitesoeur
08-23-2003, 09:57 AM
1. i hear
2. the sound of
3. another year turning
4. grinding away my moments
5. until i'm bereft of all
1. i hear
2. the sound of
3. another year turning
4. grinding away my moments
5. until i'm bereft of all
6. expectations
1. i hear
2. the sound of
3. another year turning
4. grinding away my moments
5. until i'm bereft of all
6. expectations
7. and life
petitesoeur
08-25-2003, 12:46 AM
Originally posted by moel
1. i hear
2. the sound of
3. another year turning
4. grinding away my moments
5. until i'm bereft of all
6. expectations
7. and life
gonna write this one on a bookmark to take with me to schul on the high holidays -- perfect for the occasion
================
1. just before
1. just before
2. i yawned rudely
AddyCat
08-25-2003, 01:27 PM
1. just before
2. i yawned rudely
3. my mind fell asleep
fodder
08-25-2003, 11:11 PM
1. just before
2. i yawned rudely
3. my mind fell asleep
4. and something else cracked
petitesoeur
08-26-2003, 08:44 AM
1. just before
2. i yawned rudely
3. my mind fell asleep
4. and something else cracked
5. as i drifted towards
malina
08-26-2003, 09:54 AM
1. just before
2. i yawned rudely
3. my mind fell asleep
4. and something else cracked
5. as i drifted towards
6. my blue
RuneT
08-26-2003, 10:01 AM
1. just before
2. i yawned rudely
3. my mind fell asleep
4. and something else cracked
5. as i drifted towards
6. my blue
7. room
petitesoeur
08-27-2003, 12:43 AM
1.mars looms
1.mars looms
2.the red queen
Frieda
08-29-2003, 03:06 PM
1.mars looms
2.the red queen
3.peeking, blinking
petitesoeur
08-29-2003, 04:07 PM
1. mars looms
2. the red queen
3. peeking, blinking
4. as it rises in the midnight
fodder
09-03-2003, 10:36 PM
1. mars looms
2. the red queen
3. peeking, blinking
4. as it rises in the midnight
5. smearing the oils,
AddyCat
09-05-2003, 04:27 PM
1. mars looms
2. the red queen
3. peeking, blinking
4. as it rises in the midnight
5. smearing the oils,
6. in right places
petitesoeur
09-06-2003, 08:59 AM
1. mars looms
2. the red queen
3. peeking, blinking
4. as it rises at midnight
5. smearing the oils,
6. in right places
7. left-laid
petitesoeur
09-06-2003, 11:48 AM
1. saturday swings
1. saturday swings
2. its mallet at my head
petitesoeur
09-07-2003, 09:26 AM
1. saturday swings
2. its mallet at my head
3. the piles of dust, of unpaid bills,
1. saturday swings
2. its mallet at my head
3. the piles of dust, of unpaid bills,
4. my Friday hangover pounding in my ears
Frieda
09-08-2003, 06:41 PM
1. saturday swings
2. its mallet at my head
3. the piles of dust, of unpaid bills,
4. my Friday hangover pounding in my ears
5. another aspirin for those chills
1. saturday swings
2. its mallet at my head
3. the piles of dust, of unpaid bills,
4. my Friday hangover pounding in my ears
5. another aspirin for those chills
6. maybe a raw egg or 2
chuckie egg
09-09-2003, 08:54 AM
1. saturday swings
2. its mallet at my head
3. the piles of dust, of unpaid bills,
4. my Friday hangover pounding in my ears
5. another aspirin for those chills
6. maybe a raw egg or 2
7. lovin those eggs
amanda
09-09-2003, 02:17 PM
1. quiet colors
2. peek over the horizon
petitesoeur
09-10-2003, 12:17 AM
1. quiet colors
2. peek over the horizon
3. vanquishing the night's remmants
1. quiet colors
2. peek over the horizon
3. vanquishing the night's remmants
4. with a flourish of pastel pinks and golds
1. quiet colors
2. peek over the horizon
3. vanquishing the night's remmants
4. with a flourish of pastel pinks and golds
5. to robin redbreasts summer song
amanda
09-11-2003, 11:23 AM
1. quiet colors
2. peek over the horizon
3. vanquishing the night's remmants
4. with a flourish of pastel pinks and golds
5. to robin redbreasts summer song
6. over dewed spiderwebs
1. quiet colors
2. peek over the horizon
3. vanquishing the night's remmants
4. with a flourish of pastel pinks and golds
5. to robin redbreasts summer song
6. over dewed spiderwebs
7. like prisms
funkytuba
09-13-2003, 01:00 AM
1. spaces
2. wide open
zefrank
09-13-2003, 11:13 AM
1. spaces
2. wide open
3. are defined by
fodder
09-13-2003, 12:48 PM
1. spaces
2. wide open
3. are defined by
4. your fingertips and chemicals,
amanda
09-14-2003, 11:51 AM
1. spaces
2. wide open
3. are defined by
4. your fingertips and chemicals,
5. prints of swirls
1. spaces
2. wide open
3. are defined by
4. your fingertips and chemicals,
5. prints of swirls
6. of you in ink
amanda
09-15-2003, 01:50 PM
1. spaces
2. wide open
3. are defined by
4. your fingertips and chemicals,
5. prints of swirls
6. of you in ink
7. placed
zefrank
09-15-2003, 07:05 PM
i lost
amanda
09-15-2003, 07:10 PM
i lost
a piece of
funkytuba
09-15-2003, 07:11 PM
i lost
a piece of
my naive nature
petitesoeur
09-15-2003, 08:52 PM
i lost
a piece of
my naive nature
with a wanton disregard
funkytuba
09-15-2003, 11:09 PM
i lost
a piece of
my naive nature
with a wanton disregard
for law, landing me
amanda
09-16-2003, 12:35 PM
i lost
a piece of
my naive nature
with a wanton disregard
for law, landing me
in Nevada, hitched
petitesoeur
09-16-2003, 04:57 PM
i lost
a piece of
my naive nature
with a wanton disregard
for law, landing me
in Nevada, hitched
- whoa, nellie.
slurpeedemon
09-16-2003, 05:25 PM
being here
rapscalious rob
09-16-2003, 05:30 PM
welcome to the board, slurpeedemon!
:)
being here
or being there
slurpeedemon
09-16-2003, 05:33 PM
being here
or being there
much more satisfying
rapscalious rob
09-16-2003, 05:52 PM
being here
or being there
much more satisfying
then pulling out all your hair
slurpeedemon
09-16-2003, 06:12 PM
being here
or being there
much more satisfying
then pulling out all your hair
knickers all betwisted
amanda
09-16-2003, 07:20 PM
being here
or being there
much more satisfying
then pulling out all your hair
knickers all betwisted
less wax next time
being here
or being there
much more satisfying
then pulling out all your hair
knickers all betwisted
less wax next time
more lovin'
nice, that last one...
absence of
amanda
09-17-2003, 02:19 PM
absence of
knowledge leads to
slurpeedemon
09-17-2003, 02:20 PM
absence of
knowledge leads to
either bliss or confusion
Frieda
09-17-2003, 04:22 PM
absence of
knowledge leads to
either bliss or confusion
my days are filled with both
rapscalious rob
09-17-2003, 05:20 PM
absence of
knowledge leads to
either bliss or confusion
my days are filled with both
or perhaps not either one
absence of
knowledge leads to
either bliss or confusion
my days are filled with both
or perhaps not either one
all that i'm sure of is
petitesoeur
09-18-2003, 12:06 AM
absence of
knowledge leads to
either bliss or confusion
my days are filled with both
or perhaps not either one
all that i'm sure of is
yesterday's gone
amanda
09-18-2003, 02:03 PM
shaking
funkytuba
09-18-2003, 08:32 PM
shaking
in the basement
Hyakujo's Fox
09-20-2003, 07:19 AM
shaking
in the basement
my brand new washing machine
lapietra
09-20-2003, 08:11 PM
shaking
in the basement
my brand new washing machine
maybe shouldn't have washed the futon
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