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Gatsby
12-22-2004, 06:23 AM
A

Hyakujo's Fox
12-31-2004, 06:32 AM
A
brief

....

Large Marge
12-31-2004, 09:20 PM
When I catch you
There's going to be
A scene quite shocking
So call up the blood bank,
Streetsweepers too,
for I am just about

When I catch you
There's going to be
A scene quite shocking
So call up the blood bank,
Streetsweepers too,
for I am just about
done with you


(sorry, i had to finish it)

Large Marge
12-31-2004, 09:21 PM
A
brief

....

A
brief
but unfathomable

Marcus Bales
01-01-2005, 02:54 PM
A
brief
but unfathomable
poem about a lobster on a leash

Coffee
01-01-2005, 06:05 PM
A
brief
but unfathomable
poem about a lobster on a leash
and a crock pot named Stuey,

Large Marge
01-01-2005, 11:18 PM
A
brief
but unfathomable
poem about a lobster on a leash
and a crock pot named Stuey,
steaming and screaming,

Marcus Bales
01-02-2005, 01:27 AM
A
brief
but unfathomable
poem about a lobster on a leash
and a crock pot named Stuey,
steaming and screaming,
hello Dali!

Large Marge
01-02-2005, 01:42 AM
The victory

Marcus Bales
01-02-2005, 02:04 AM
The victory
left our treasury empty

Large Marge
01-02-2005, 02:15 AM
The victory
left our treasury empty
but our soldiers defiant and strong

Marcus Bales
01-02-2005, 02:27 AM
The victory
left our treasury empty
but our soldiers defiant and strong
shouting that the liars and cowards back home

Large Marge
01-02-2005, 02:29 AM
The victory
left our treasury empty
but our soldiers defiant and strong
shouting that the liars and cowards back home
may keep their lives but sacrifice

Marcus Bales
01-02-2005, 02:44 AM
The victory
left our treasury empty
but our soldiers defiant and strong
shouting that the liars and cowards back home
may keep their lives, but sacrifice
like theirs deserves

Large Marge
01-02-2005, 02:49 AM
The victory
left our treasury empty
but our soldiers defiant and strong
shouting that the liars and cowards back home
may keep their lives, but sacrifice
like theirs deserves
respect

Hyakujo's Fox
01-02-2005, 06:37 AM
truant children

Large Marge
01-02-2005, 07:59 AM
truant children
should not be blamed

Marcus Bales
01-02-2005, 03:22 PM
truant children
should not be blamed,
damn their little souls to hell,

Large Marge
01-02-2005, 07:51 PM
truant children
should not be blamed,
damn their little souls to hell;
it's the parents I blame, distracted

Marcus Bales
01-03-2005, 12:46 AM
truant children
should not be blamed,
damn their little souls to hell;
it's the parents I blame, distracted
by sex, drugs, and money

xfox
01-03-2005, 02:52 AM
reason whatever you call it

Large Marge
01-03-2005, 03:49 AM
truant children
should not be blamed,
damn their little souls to hell;
it's the parents I blame, distracted
by sex, drugs, and money --
our new leaders

Coffee
01-03-2005, 05:09 AM
truant children
should not be blamed,
damn their little souls to hell;
it's the parents I blame, distracted
by sex, drugs, and money.
Our new leaders
ignore this.

Large Marge
01-03-2005, 05:52 AM
truant children
should not be blamed,
damn their little souls to hell;
it's the parents I blame, distracted
by sex, drugs, and money.
Our new leaders
ignore this.
:D



under pressure

Marcus Bales
01-03-2005, 12:58 PM
under pressure
the administration

Large Marge
01-04-2005, 05:39 AM
under pressure
the administration
caved, turning its back

Gatsby
01-06-2005, 12:33 AM
under pressure
the administration
caved, turning its back
on the damage it had done

Large Marge
01-06-2005, 04:37 AM
under pressure
the administration
caved, turning its back
on the damage it had done
and the ones it had killed

funkytuba
01-06-2005, 05:39 AM
under pressure
the administration
caved, turning its back
on the damage it had done
and the ones it had killed
rose from the dead

Large Marge
01-06-2005, 06:21 AM
under pressure
the administration
caved, turning its back
on the damage it had done
and the ones it had killed
rose from the dead
and pleaded

I lidbotLl l
01-06-2005, 06:30 AM
under pressure
the administration
caved, turning its back
on the damage it had done
and the ones it had killed
rose from the dead
and pleaded
in mind, deflecting infection, misdirection

Marcus Bales
01-07-2005, 01:53 PM
what's the deal

Gatsby
01-09-2005, 02:47 AM
what's the deal
with people who
don't read the farking
thread instructions my god!

funkytuba
01-09-2005, 03:11 AM
what's the deal
with people who
don't read the farking
thread instructions my god!
I mean what dumbass

Marcus Bales
01-09-2005, 01:34 PM
what's the deal
with people who
don't read the farking
thread instructions my god!
I mean what dumbass
can't seem to count
to seven?

Frieda
01-09-2005, 06:09 PM
my nose

Gatsby
01-09-2005, 07:25 PM
my nose
is itching

Frieda
01-09-2005, 11:34 PM
my nose
is itching
and my eyes

Large Marge
01-10-2005, 12:00 AM
my nose
is itching
and my eyes
won't stop watering

Marcus Bales
01-10-2005, 01:22 PM
my nose
is itching
and my eyes
won't stop watering
is it hot in here or is it me?

daverbee
01-10-2005, 06:21 PM
my nose
is itching
and my eyes
won't stop watering
is it hot in here or is it me?
Where's my Nyquil?

Marcus Bales
01-12-2005, 12:02 AM
my nose
is itching
and my eyes
won't stop watering
is it hot in here or is it me?
Where's my Nyquil,
Dammit?

Gatsby
01-12-2005, 06:35 AM
my nose
is itching
and my eyes
won't stop watering
is it hot in here or is it me?
Where's my Nyquil,
Dammit?
Sniff.

Gatsby
01-12-2005, 09:13 PM
pigeon

Frieda
01-12-2005, 09:26 PM
pigeon
on the roof

chuckie egg
01-12-2005, 10:08 PM
pigeon
on the roof
with a beady eye

Marcus Bales
01-12-2005, 10:17 PM
pigeon
on the roof
with a beady eye
and irridescent feathers

Frieda
01-12-2005, 10:21 PM
pigeon
on the roof
with a beady eye
and irridescent feathers
glowing in the sun

Marcus Bales
01-13-2005, 02:34 AM
pigeon
on the roof
with a beady eye
and irridescent feathers
glowing in the sun
soon you'll fly

chuckie egg
01-13-2005, 12:33 PM
pigeon
on the roof
with a beady eye
and irridescent feathers
glowing in the sun
soon you'll fly
and poop

trisherina
01-13-2005, 03:14 PM
don't feed

Frieda
01-13-2005, 04:58 PM
don't feed
the white tigers

Marcus Bales
01-13-2005, 07:12 PM
don't feed
the white tigers
sleeping in the sun

Gatsby
01-14-2005, 05:21 AM
don't feed
the white tigers
sleeping in the sun
magnificent behind bars

Marcus Bales
01-14-2005, 12:41 PM
don't feed
the white tigers
sleeping in the sun.
Magnificent behind bars
the liquor bottles beckon

Gatsby
01-14-2005, 10:25 PM
don't feed
the white tigers
sleeping in the sun.
Magnificent behind bars
the liquor bottles beckon
delusions of grandeur slipping

Marcus Bales
01-17-2005, 01:29 PM
don't feed
the white tigers
sleeping in the sun.
Magnificent behind bars
the liquor bottles beckon
delusions of grandeur slipping
away.

Marcus Bales
01-17-2005, 01:35 PM
oh no

daverbee
01-17-2005, 02:34 PM
oh no
not another

Frieda
01-17-2005, 08:14 PM
oh no
not another
wet t-shirt contest

Marcus Bales
01-18-2005, 02:37 PM
oh no
not another
wet t-shirt contest
at the assisted living facility

funkytuba
01-19-2005, 04:56 AM
"oh no
not another
wet t-shirt contest
at the assisted living facility"
says madasacutsnake

chuckie egg
01-19-2005, 12:48 PM
"oh no
not another
wet t-shirt contest
at the assisted living facility"
says madasacutsnake
as she peeps

Marcus Bales
01-19-2005, 12:56 PM
"oh no
not another
wet t-shirt contest
at the assisted living facility"
says madasacutsnake
as she peeps
inside

Marcus Bales
01-19-2005, 12:57 PM
What the hell

daverbee
01-19-2005, 01:08 PM
What the hell
did Condoleeza Rice

Frieda
01-26-2005, 02:54 PM
What the hell
did Condoleeza Rice
squirt into her eyeballs

trisherina
01-30-2005, 07:06 AM
What the hell
did Condoleeza Rice
squirt into her eyeballs,
succinylcholine? I tell you,

Frieda
02-01-2005, 12:30 PM
What the hell
did Condoleeza Rice
squirt into her eyeballs,
succinylcholine? I tell you,
Jim Henson would be

chuckie egg
02-01-2005, 01:18 PM
What the hell
did Condoleeza Rice
squirt into her eyeballs,
succinylcholine? I tell you,
Jim Henson would be
writing down notes

Hyakujo's Fox
02-04-2005, 12:20 PM
What the hell
did Condoleeza Rice
squirt into her eyeballs,
succinylcholine? I tell you,
Jim Henson would be
writing down notes
for new monsters

trisherina
02-04-2005, 03:35 PM
On Friday

ambo
02-04-2005, 06:26 PM
On Friday
The weekend

Hyakujo's Fox
02-07-2005, 12:58 AM
On Friday
The weekend
Takes over my mind

ambo
02-07-2005, 05:05 PM
On Friday
The weekend
Takes over my mind
Two blissful days of freedom

Hyakujo's Fox
02-10-2005, 01:52 PM
On Friday
The weekend
Takes over my mind
Two blissful days of freedom
to do and be and say

Frieda
02-12-2005, 08:52 AM
On Friday
The weekend
Takes over my mind
Two blissful days of freedom
to do and be and say
relaxing and calm

amanda
02-19-2005, 06:10 PM
On Friday
The weekend
Takes over my mind
Two blissful days of freedom
to do and be and say
relaxing and calm
please no ants

xfox
02-19-2005, 06:22 PM
She sprang from her seat in that time zone

Hyakujo's Fox
02-20-2005, 06:17 AM
She sprang from her seat in that time zone
where it always seemed to be the right time for a drink

Frieda
02-20-2005, 12:03 PM
She sprang from her seat in that time zone
where it always seemed to be the right time for a drink
"One whisky on the rocks please.. my room number is 405"

Marcus Bales
02-21-2005, 10:55 AM
She sprang from her seat in that time zone
where it always seemed to be the right time for a drink
"One whisky on the rocks please.. my room number is 405"
she added impulsively when she noticed the bartender's ice-blue eyes

Hyakujo's Fox
02-22-2005, 01:03 PM
She sprang from her seat in that time zone
where it always seemed to be the right time for a drink
"One whisky on the rocks please.. my room number is 405"
she added impulsively when she noticed the bartender's ice-blue eyes
wander slowly up from the ice-bucket toward her neckline

Marcus Bales
02-25-2005, 02:44 PM
She sprang from her seat in that time zone
where it always seemed to be the right time for a drink
"One whisky on the rocks please.. my room number is 405"
she added impulsively when she noticed the bartender's ice-blue eyes
wander slowly up from the ice-bucket toward her neckline.
He smiled. "That's my favorite number," he murmured

Hyakujo's Fox
02-27-2005, 11:00 PM
She sprang from her seat in that time zone
where it always seemed to be the right time for a drink
"One whisky on the rocks please.. my room number is 405"
she added impulsively when she noticed the bartender's ice-blue eyes
wander slowly up from the ice-bucket toward her neckline.
He smiled. "That's my favorite number," he murmured
"I thought it might be", she said, and sipped.

Marcus Bales
02-28-2005, 12:22 PM
Those lips on the rim of her glass!

Hyakujo's Fox
03-02-2005, 02:35 AM
Those lips on the rim of her glass!
Express something too simple for words

Frieda
03-05-2005, 12:44 AM
Those lips on the rim of her glass!
Express something too simple for words,
Maybe more of an urge. To feel those lips

Hyakujo's Fox
03-29-2005, 08:28 AM
Those lips on the rim of her glass!
Express something too simple for words,
Maybe more of an urge. To feel those lips
pressed against my own - there is nothing else

Marcus Bales
03-29-2005, 01:53 PM
Those lips on the rim of her glass!
Express something too simple for words,
Maybe more of an urge. To feel those lips
pressed against my own - there is nothing else -
well, almost nothing else I want

zefrank
06-01-2005, 10:42 PM
its as if it had died

trisherina
06-01-2005, 10:59 PM
its as if it had died
breathe in a little life

Brynn
06-01-2005, 11:20 PM
its as if it had died
breathe in a little life
inject it with something fluid

zefrank
06-02-2005, 01:29 PM
its as if it had died
breathe in a little life
inject it with something fluid
sit and wait for a bit

Brynn
06-03-2005, 12:09 AM
it's as if it had died
breathe in a little life
inject it with something fluid
sit and wait for a bit
watch for flutters

Hyakujo's Fox
06-04-2005, 12:29 PM
tonight

Brynn
06-09-2005, 07:20 PM
tonight
star-choked

amanda
06-10-2005, 05:13 AM
tonight
star-choked
we rise to the moon

trisherina
06-10-2005, 05:23 AM
tonight
star-choked
we rise to the moon
and make our sacrifices

xfox
06-10-2005, 02:16 PM
tonight
star-choked
we rise to the moon
and make our sacrifices
time, hope, faith, charity fall away

Brynn
06-11-2005, 11:49 AM
tonight
star-choked
we rise to the moon
and make our sacrifices
time, hope, faith, charity fall away
'til the bare bone of truth

trisherina
06-11-2005, 02:47 PM
tonight
star-choked
we rise to the moon
and make our sacrifices
time, hope, faith, charity fall away
'til the bare bone of truth
scrapes on the lintel

Brynn
06-11-2005, 08:00 PM
However many

amanda
06-12-2005, 05:07 AM
However many
cupcakes it takes, oh baby

Gatsby
06-14-2005, 12:33 AM
tonight
star-choked
we rise to the moon
and make our sacrifices
time, hope, faith, charity fall away
'til the bare bone of truth
scrapes on the lintel
like so many
omens

However many
cupcakes it takes, oh baby
I'll woo you 'till you're mine, all mine

Brynn
06-15-2005, 09:27 PM
However many
cupcakes it takes, oh baby
I'll woo you 'till you're mine, all mine
yessir, however many hours till the cows come home

Gatsby
06-17-2005, 09:22 PM
However many
cupcakes it takes, oh baby
I'll woo you 'till you're mine, all mine
yessir, however many hours till the cows come home
as long as we can stop singing country

amanda
06-20-2005, 04:39 AM
However many
cupcakes it takes, oh baby
I'll woo you 'till you're mine, all mine
yessir, however many hours till the cows come home
as long as we can stop singing country
and get cream cheese frosting

trisherina
06-20-2005, 03:30 PM
However many
cupcakes it takes, oh baby
I'll woo you 'till you're mine, all mine
yessir, however many hours till the cows come home
as long as we can stop singing country
and get cream cheese frosting
down our gullets

Gatsby
06-21-2005, 06:50 PM
spun

trisherina
06-21-2005, 08:47 PM
spun
silk webs

Gatsby
06-21-2005, 09:31 PM
spun
silk webs
transluscent

trisherina
06-22-2005, 12:53 AM
spun
silk webs
transluscent
all dew-bedecked

Brynn
06-23-2005, 01:24 AM
spun
silk webs
transluscent
all dew-bedecked
meet an untimely destruction

amanda
06-23-2005, 05:23 AM
spun
silk webs
transluscent
all dew-bedecked
meet an untimely destruction
of spiders and men

Brynn
06-23-2005, 05:45 PM
spun
silk webs
transluscent
all dew-bedecked
meet an untimely destruction
of spiders and men
instantaneously

amanda
06-24-2005, 05:38 AM
no borders

trisherina
06-24-2005, 05:40 AM
no borders
fickle boundaries

Brynn
06-25-2005, 07:08 PM
spun
silk webs
transluscent
all dew-bedecked
meet an untimely destruction
of spiders and men
instantaneously
swept away
gone
(Sorry, I'll try harder to stick to the 7-line format :o)

no borders
fickle boundaries
imaginary territories

trisherina
06-26-2005, 03:48 AM
no borders
fickle boundaries
imaginary territories
cross into no man's land

Gatsby
06-29-2005, 09:51 PM
no borders
fickle boundaries
imaginary territories
cross into no man's land
invisible lines of war

xfox
06-30-2005, 02:29 AM
no borders
fickle boundaries
imaginary territories
cross into no man's land
invisible lines of war
waving their flag

Brynn
06-30-2005, 02:45 AM
no borders
fickle boundaries
imaginary territories
cross into no man's land
invisible lines of war
waving their flag
of paranoia

Hyakujo's Fox
06-30-2005, 03:12 PM
for the truth

trisherina
06-30-2005, 03:24 PM
for the truth
stand against all

xfox
07-01-2005, 03:28 AM
for the truth
stand against all
forgive any trespasses

funkytuba
07-01-2005, 05:32 AM
for the truth
stand against all
forgive any trespasses
promulgate the common welfare

Brynn
07-04-2005, 03:03 AM
for the truth
stand against all
forgive any trespasses
promulgate the common welfare
and above all, forget not

ambo
07-04-2005, 05:59 AM
for the truth
stand against all
forgive any trespasses
promulgate the common welfare
and above all, forget not
to walk the path

amanda
07-04-2005, 06:22 AM
for the truth
stand against all
forgive any trespasses
promulgate the common welfare
and above all, forget not
to walk the path
trod by few

trisherina
07-04-2005, 06:28 AM
Impact

Brynn
07-07-2005, 02:02 AM
Impact
Crash test

Hyakujo's Fox
07-09-2005, 09:41 PM
Impact
Crash test
Somewhere in Sweden

Brynn
07-11-2005, 01:35 AM
Impact
Crash test
Somewhere in Sweden
Something goes terribly wrong

Marcus Bales
07-11-2005, 02:27 AM
Impact
Crash test
Somewhere in Sweden
Something goes terribly wrong
they thought the dummy

amanda
07-11-2005, 03:17 AM
Impact
Crash test
Somewhere in Sweden
Something goes terribly wrong
they thought the dummy
was supposed to be

Brynn
07-11-2005, 11:54 PM
Impact
Crash test
Somewhere in Sweden
Something goes terribly wrong
they thought the dummy
was supposed to be
Bush himself
(oops)

dinzdale
07-12-2005, 07:28 PM
Leather

lapietra
07-12-2005, 07:37 PM
Leather
worn, soft

dinzdale
07-12-2005, 08:22 PM
Leather
worn, soft
but very tight

Brynn
07-26-2005, 07:04 AM
Leather
worn, soft
but very tight
in all the right places

Hyakujo's Fox
08-14-2005, 02:52 AM
Leather
worn, soft
but very tight
in all the right places
shows what it hides

Con ate dog
08-14-2005, 09:35 AM
Leather
worn, soft
but very tight
in all the right places
shows what it hides
better than

Brynn
09-08-2005, 10:54 PM
Leather
worn, soft
but very tight
in all the right places
shows what it hides
better than
burlap



Smokers huddled in the cold

amanda
09-09-2005, 04:00 AM
Smokers huddled in the cold
reminisce, before the smoking ban at Denny's

Tahnee
09-09-2005, 04:23 AM
1. Don't go
2. I dreamt you died

Hyakujo's Fox
09-10-2005, 11:35 AM
double barrelling


Smokers huddled in the cold
reminisce, before the smoking ban at Denny's
how the world back then seemed to be a warmer place


Don't go
I dreamt you died
I was alone in the world

Brynn
09-10-2005, 09:23 PM
Smokers huddled in the cold
reminisce, before the smoking ban at Denny's
how the world back then seemed to be a warmer place
- not quite so many hateful stares, and anyone you asked had a match.







Don't go
I dreamt you died
I was alone in the world
and I fell through the hole you left

Marcus Bales
09-11-2005, 01:20 AM
Smokers huddled in the cold
reminisce, before the smoking ban at Denny's
how the world back then seemed to be a warmer place
- not quite so many hateful stares, and anyone you asked had a match
and often would give you a cigarette, too.




Don't go
I dreamt you died
I was alone in the world
and I fell through the hole you left
tumbling uncontrolled

Brynn
09-11-2005, 10:31 PM
Smokers huddled in the cold
reminisce, before the smoking ban at Denny's
how the world back then seemed to be a warmer place
- not quite so many hateful stares, and anyone you asked had a match
and often would give you a cigarette, too.
They hunch now, furtive as thieves
converting good air to bad



Don't go
I dreamt you died
I was alone in the world
and I fell through the hole you left
tumbling uncontrolled
calling into silence

Hyakujo's Fox
09-11-2005, 10:37 PM
Don't go
I dreamt you died
I was alone in the world
and I fell through the hole you left
tumbling uncontrolled
calling into silence
"Don't go"

Hyakujo's Fox
09-13-2005, 11:49 AM
closer than

trisherina
09-13-2005, 01:53 PM
closer than
I know you want

Marcus Bales
09-13-2005, 02:52 PM
closer than
I know you want
the yawning void to be

Frieda
09-15-2005, 06:14 AM
closer than
I know you want
the yawning void to be
we stand at the edge together

dddrum
09-15-2005, 12:58 PM
closer than
I know you want
the yawning void to be
we stand at the edge together
frightened, brave, defiant
hand held in hand
hearts tighter

Brynn
09-18-2005, 08:55 PM
Savagely,
without warning
a poem turned upon its subject

Marcus Bales
09-25-2005, 12:12 PM
Savagely,
without warning
a poem turned upon its subject
with deconstructing claws and disemboweled

trisherina
09-26-2005, 09:22 PM
Savagely,
without warning
a poem turned upon its subject
with deconstructing claws and disemboweled
scansion, laying bare the raw

Marcus Bales
09-26-2005, 11:31 PM
Savagely,
without warning
a poem turned upon its subject
with deconstructing claws and disemboweled
scansion, laying bare the raw
consonants

trisherina
09-27-2005, 01:33 PM
Savagely,
without warning
a poem turned upon its subject
with deconstructing claws and disemboweled
scansion, laying bare the raw
consonants
wtf

dddrum
09-27-2005, 11:03 PM
about to start

Marcus Bales
09-28-2005, 02:03 AM
about to start
a small hesitation

12"razormix
09-28-2005, 07:02 AM
about to start
a small hesitation
shoes sticking to the floor

dddrum
09-28-2005, 01:02 PM
about to start
a small hesitation
shoes sticking to the floor
a backward glance, a second thought

Marcus Bales
10-01-2005, 01:38 PM
about to start
a small hesitation
shoes sticking to the floor
a backward glance, a second thought
and then a letting go

Coffee
10-01-2005, 04:13 PM
about to start
a small hesitation
shoes sticking to the floor
a backward glance, a second thought
and then a letting go
a wallflower's

eveapple
10-01-2005, 04:22 PM
about to start
a small hesitation
shoes sticking to the floor
a backward glance, a second thought
and then a letting go
a wallflower's
about to start
a small hesitation
shoes sticking to the floor
a backward glance, a second thought
and then a letting go
a wallflower's
dance wish

Marcus Bales
10-03-2005, 11:39 AM
two cats, a paper bag,

Brynn
10-04-2005, 03:16 AM
two cats, a paper bag,
an empty morning's entertainment

Marcus Bales
10-04-2005, 10:06 AM
two cats, a paper bag,
an empty morning's entertainment
I really ought to focus on my work

Frieda
10-06-2005, 07:33 AM
two cats, a paper bag,
an empty morning's entertainment
I really ought to focus on my work
the screen doesn't look very appealing

Marcus Bales
10-06-2005, 09:36 AM
two cats, a paper bag,
an empty morning's entertainment
I really ought to focus on my work
the screen doesn't look very appealing
where's the fridge's cardboard box?

dddrum
10-06-2005, 03:54 PM
two cats, a paper bag,
an empty morning's entertainment
I really ought to focus on my work
the screen doesn't look very appealing
where's the fridge's cardboard box?
puppets out of mismatched socks?

glasshouse
10-06-2005, 06:22 PM
two cats, a paper bag,
an empty morning's entertainment
I really ought to focus on my work
the screen doesn't look very appealing
where's the fridge's cardboard box?
puppets out of mismatched socks?
Catnip could spice things up

Marcus Bales
10-07-2005, 10:07 AM
so there we were

Frieda
10-07-2005, 05:27 PM
so there we were
at the dried-up riverbed

Jack Flanders
10-07-2005, 05:48 PM
so there we were
at the dried-up riverbed
overlooking the exposed rocks

Marcus Bales
10-07-2005, 06:19 PM
so there we were
at the dried-up riverbed
overlooking the exposed rocks
when the thunderstorm exploded over the ridge

dddrum
10-18-2005, 01:41 PM
so there we were
at the dried-up riverbed
overlooking the exposed rocks
when the thunderstorm exploded over the ridge
and drew everything into its raging, lightning-toothed maw

Hyakujo's Fox
10-23-2005, 09:08 AM
so there we were
at the dried-up riverbed
overlooking the exposed rocks
when the thunderstorm exploded over the ridge
and drew everything into its raging lightning-toothed maw
it swallowed the world down into its dark inside

dddrum
10-23-2005, 01:51 PM
so there we were
at the dried-up riverbed
overlooking the exposed rocks
when the thunderstorm exploded over the ridge
and drew everything into its raging lightning-toothed maw
it swallowed the world down into its dark inside
then spewed it out in torrents

Hyakujo's Fox
10-24-2005, 09:57 AM
so there we were
at the dried-up riverbed
overlooking the exposed rocks
when the thunderstorm exploded over the ridge
and drew everything into its raging lightning-toothed maw
it swallowed the world down into its dark inside
then spewed it out in torrents
what seemed like a river

jasmina
10-24-2005, 06:17 PM
what seemed like a river
was really a sea of happiness

Marcus Bales
10-24-2005, 09:10 PM
what seemed like a river
was really a sea of happiness
on which she floated in a white boat

Hyakujo's Fox
11-02-2005, 11:45 PM
what seemed like a river
was really a sea of happiness
on which she floated in a white boat
that was really her very own bedroom

Marcus Bales
11-03-2005, 12:41 AM
what seemed like a river
was really a sea of happiness
on which she floated in a white boat
that was really her very own bedroom
she read the letter again

dddrum
11-03-2005, 11:33 AM
what seemed like a river
was really a sea of happiness
on which she floated in a white boat
that was really her very own bedroom
she read the letter again
merrily, dreaming

Hyakujo's Fox
11-22-2005, 12:02 AM
what seemed like a river
was really a sea of happiness
on which she floated in a white boat
that was really her very own bedroom
and then she read the letter again
merrily dreaming of that dream
that seems like a river

ambo
11-22-2005, 12:33 AM
baking bread

trisherina
11-22-2005, 01:54 AM
baking bread
soft fat lozenges

Brynn
11-25-2005, 01:35 PM
baking bread
soft fat lozenges
plumping globes of goodness

trisherina
11-26-2005, 11:45 AM
baking bread
soft fat lozenges
plumping globes of goodness
aroma as an airborne analgesic

Brynn
11-26-2005, 03:21 PM
baking bread
soft fat lozenges
plumping globes of goodness
aroma as an airborne analgesic
incantations of consolation

ambo
12-06-2005, 10:28 PM
baking bread
soft fat lozenges
plumping globes of goodness
aroma as an airborne analgesic
incantations of consolation
can we slice it now ?

dddrum
12-08-2005, 03:42 PM
baking bread
soft fat lozenges
plumping globes of goodness
aroma as an airborne analgesic
incantations of consolation
can we slice it now?
chew & remember

Hyakujo's Fox
12-09-2005, 11:15 PM
from the window

dddrum
12-10-2005, 04:18 AM
from the window
i watch the sleeping city

Marcus Bales
12-10-2005, 10:42 AM
from the window
I watch the sleeping city
soften in the silent falling snow

ambo
12-10-2005, 02:32 PM
from the window
I watch the sleeping city
soften in the silent falling snow
by morning, just a handful of footsteps

Hyakujo's Fox
12-11-2005, 09:55 AM
from the window
I watch the sleeping city
soften in the silent falling snow
by morning, just a handful of footsteps
will mark the paths of those souls

ambo
12-11-2005, 04:36 PM
from the window
I watch the sleeping city
soften in the silent falling snow
by morning, just a handful of footsteps
will mark the paths of those souls
brave enough to venture

dddrum
12-12-2005, 01:07 PM
from the window
I watch the sleeping city
soften in the silent falling snow
by morning, just a handful of footsteps
will mark the paths of those souls
brave enough to venture
into the winterwhite

ambo
12-12-2005, 01:32 PM
from the window
I watch the sleeping city
soften in the silent falling snow
by morning, just a handful of footsteps
will mark the paths of those souls
brave enough to venture
into the winterwhite
mittens ready

Brynn
12-17-2005, 10:13 PM
how many revolutions

Master_Jedi
12-18-2005, 02:32 AM
how many revolutions
does a tire really go in the snow

Brynn
12-18-2005, 09:30 PM
how many revolutions
does a tire really go in the snow
the dog turns on its bed, the earth turns on its axis

vgarber
12-22-2005, 07:04 PM
how many revolutions
does a tire really go in the snow
the dog turns on its bed, the earth turns on its axis
I have racing thoughts that don't stop

Hyakujo's Fox
12-23-2005, 10:15 PM
how many revolutions
does a tire really go in the snow
the dog turns on its bed, the earth turns on its axis
I have racing thoughts that don't stop
oh god, let me sleep

ambo
12-24-2005, 01:29 AM
lie still

trisherina
12-24-2005, 01:51 AM
lie still
don't vomit

dddrum
12-24-2005, 09:52 AM
lie still
don't vomit
you had... how many?
two, five; grab the bedspread
cos this spin's gonna be even faster

Brynn
02-17-2006, 10:34 PM
lie still
don't vomit
you had... how many?
two, five; grab the bedspread
cos this spin's gonna be even faster
than that last trip you took
when "just one more"
was more than
you got

Hyakujo's Fox
02-18-2006, 11:34 AM
let's

trisherina
02-18-2006, 12:48 PM
let's
gamble

Hyakujo's Fox
02-18-2006, 08:30 PM
let's
gamble
everything

trisherina
02-18-2006, 08:48 PM
let's
gamble
everything
spin the wheel

MegMusic
02-19-2006, 09:56 PM
let's
gamble
everything
spin the wheel
close eyes

dddrum
02-20-2006, 08:24 AM
let's
gamble
everything
spin the wheel
close eyes
imagine

ambo
02-20-2006, 01:37 PM
let's
gamble
everything
spin the wheel
close eyes
imagine
Maui

Marcus Bales
02-20-2006, 05:44 PM
first the wheel bearing went bad

trisherina
02-25-2006, 11:28 AM
first the wheel bearing went bad
or that's what the mechanic told me

dddrum
02-27-2006, 05:04 AM
first the wheel bearing went bad
or that's what the mechanic told me
then the alignment went straight to sh*t

Brynn
02-27-2006, 11:06 PM
first the wheel bearing went bad
or that's what the mechanic told me
then the alignment went straight to sh*t
and that's when I knew it was high time to do

ambo
06-26-2006, 11:43 AM
first the wheel bearing went bad
or that's what the mechanic told me
then the alignment went straight to sh*t
and that's when I knew it was high time to do
what I should have done 2 flat tires ago

Ze Frank
06-26-2006, 10:50 PM
irst the wheel bearing went bad
or that's what the mechanic told me
then the alignment went straight to sh*t
and that's when I knew it was high time to do
what I should have done 2 flat tires ago
kick the mechanic hard in the knee

dddrum
06-26-2006, 10:55 PM
first the wheel bearing went bad
or that's what the mechanic told me
then the alignment went straight to sh*t
and that's when I knew it was high time to do
what I should have done 2 flat tires ago
kick the mechanic hard in the knee
and drive like hell, in a circle

ambo
06-27-2006, 02:37 AM
Chocolate

Hyakujo's Fox
06-28-2006, 10:38 PM
Chocolate
Slowly melts

ambo
06-29-2006, 02:20 AM
Chocolate
Slowly melts
On Greta's thighs

Hyakujo's Fox
07-17-2006, 11:20 PM
Chocolate
Slowly melts
On Greta's thighs
And I stand waiting

ambo
07-17-2006, 11:42 PM
Chocolate
Slowly melts
On Greta's thighs
And I stand waiting
Tongue over lips

Hyakujo's Fox
07-23-2006, 10:54 PM
Chocolate
Slowly melts
On Greta's thighs
And I stand waiting
Tongue over lips
Anticipating

Marcus Bales
07-23-2006, 11:02 PM
The grill is hot

xfox
07-23-2006, 11:13 PM
The grill is hot
The market heavy

ambo
07-24-2006, 12:07 AM
Chocolate
Slowly melts
On Greta's thighs
And I stand waiting
Tongue over lips
Anticipating
Sunset

Hyakujo's Fox
08-10-2006, 11:16 PM
The grill is hot
The market heavy
The parrot lugubrious

Brynn
08-11-2006, 01:17 AM
The grill is hot
The market heavy
The parrot lugubrious
And the tourist is having a panic attack

trisherina
08-11-2006, 02:40 AM
The grill is hot
The market heavy
The parrot lugubrious
And the tourist is having a panic attack
Salmon coloured neck

Penut
08-11-2006, 10:01 AM
The grill is hot
The market heavy
The parrot lugubrious
And the tourist is having a panic attack
Salmon coloured neck
Veild in darkness

Marcus Bales
08-16-2006, 04:30 PM
The grill is hot
The market heavy
The parrot lugubrious
And the tourist is having a panic attack
Salmon coloured neck
Veiled in darkness
The cleaver!

Frieda
08-17-2006, 05:45 PM
in the morning

Coffee
08-17-2006, 07:09 PM
in the morning
dense downpouring

ambo
08-17-2006, 08:41 PM
in the morning
dense downpouring
sends the turds floating

Frieda
08-18-2006, 01:35 PM
in the morning
dense downpouring
sends the turds floating
right into the Döner's place

Brynn
09-06-2006, 09:45 PM
in the morning
dense downpouring
sends the turds floating
right into the Döner's place
who would have thought

ambo
09-07-2006, 01:11 AM
in the morning
dense downpouring
sends the turds floating
right into the Döner's place
who would have thought
last night's dinner

Brynn
11-19-2006, 10:47 PM
in the morning
dense downpouring
sends the turds floating
right into the Döner's place
who would have thought
last night's dinner
would reappear.

Brynn
11-19-2006, 10:47 PM
the coded warnings

Hyakujo's Fox
12-03-2006, 04:13 AM
the coded warnings
subtle lines of division