comunal haikus

[Hyakujo's Fox]

in far asoko

[EmotionalVelcro]

in far asoko
where our friend zero resides

[Hyakujo's Fox]

in far asoko
where our friend zero resides
in dreams day and night

[zero]

kissing you senseless

[trisherina]

kissing you senseless
damned vasovagal reflex

[EmotionalVelcro]

kissing you senseless
damned vasovagal reflex
gets me every time

[Kristen]

cracks in your stucco

[ambo]

cracks in your stucco
filled with the roots of ivy

[Jack Flanders]

cracks in your stucco
filled with the roots of ivy
must get them all out

[ambo]

Quite enough lemon

[zero]

quite enough lemon
now just hold this electrode

[micjiggles]

and try not to pee

[Hyakujo's Fox]

where did we go wrong?

[ambo]

where did we go wrong?
did we turn left back there or....

[zero]

where did we go wrong?
did we turn left back there or....
look! andromeda!

[ambo]

caged, pacing fury

[zero]

caged, pacing fury
a gerbil, name of oddball

[EmotionalVelcro]

caged, pacing fury
a gerbil, name of oddball
bares his fearsome fangs

[EmotionalVelcro]

Crayon coloured eyes

[trisherina]

Crayon coloured eyes
Volkswagen Beetle blue dress

[ambo]

Crayon coloured eyes
Volkswagen Beetle blue dress
Panties black as coal

[Hyakujo's Fox]

the hands of the clock

[zero]

the hands of the clock
hold the small pulse at your wrist

[trisherina]

the hands of the clock
hold the small pulse at your wrist
radial seconds

[ambo]

walk like a pigeon

[dddrum]

walk like a pigeon
jutting your chin rhythmically

[ambo]

walk like a pigeon
jutting your chin rhythmically
don't forget to coo

[LeahDear]

Hair in the plughole

[trisherina]

Hair in the plughole
I admire its artful swirls

[LeahDear]

Hair in the plughole
I admire its artful swirls
Amongst the soap scum

[ambo]

Muffin for breakfast

[LeahDear]

Muffin for breakfast
Repeated on me later

[ambo]

Muffin for breakfast
Repeated on me later
Rancid marmalade

[LeahDear]

Next time I'll have egg

[ambo]

Next time I'll have egg
Or maybe some bland oatmeal

[Coffee]

Next time I'll have egg
Or maybe some bland oatmeal
Breakfast, is it safe?

[Hyakujo's Fox]

any other day

[dddrum]

Any other day
I'd have skipped the morning meal

[Coffee]

Any other day
I'd have skipped the morning meal
for a cuppa Jo.

[Hyakujo's Fox]

somewhere's an island

[Ze Frank]

somewhere's an island
we call it kokomojo

[LeahDear]

somewhere's an island
we call it kokomojo
I've never been there

[ambo]

Seth cried until dawn

[Ze Frank]

Seth cried until dawn
His dad made him mow the lawn

[LeahDear]

Seth cried until dawn
His dad made him mow the lawn
And puppy got shorn

[Ze Frank]

Miss my porcupine

[Sunnybunny]

Miss my porcupine
My sweet prickly friend

[klinkie]

Miss my porcupine
My sweet prickly friend
Yes no I this is

[Hyakujo's Fox]

our carved initials

[ambo]

our carved initials
dwarfed now by the massive trunk

[klinkie]

our carved initials
dwarfed now by the massive trunk
in the tree of life

[Hyakujo's Fox]

there's room in my heart

[ambo]

there's room in my heart
for the one with the dark eyes

[trisherina]

there's room in my heart
for the one with the dark eyes
and the darker soul

[ambo]

absent-minded stare

[LeahDear]

absent-minded stare
misunderstood by the man

[Kliffy]

absent-minded stare
misunderstood by the man
looking past my presence

[Hyakujo's Fox]

lights of the city

[ambo]

lights of the city
spray the bay with white blossoms

[Ze Frank]

lights of the city
spray the bay with white blossoms
soothing to the eyes

[LeahDear]

Cloying cigar smoke

[Ze Frank]

Cloying cigar smoke
Wiping the tears from my eyes

[Audreyvgs]

Cloying cigar smoke
Wiping the tears from my eyes
pulmonary hell

[trisherina]

run your fingers through

[Hyakujo's Fox]

run your fingers through
the dark and tousled hair of

[ambo]

run your fingers through
the dark and tousled hair of
my unshaven legs

sorry, carry on

[trisherina]

stretch dangerously

[zero]

stretch dangerously
toward dislocation point

[LeahDear]

stretch dangerously
toward dislocation point
pleasurable pain

[Hyakujo's Fox]

everyday that comes

[LeahDear]

everyday that comes
brings us closer to the end
treasure each moment

[trisherina]

you're getting closer

[zero]

you're getting closer
seeping in on tidewater

[lapietra]

you're getting closer
seeping in on tidewater
sneaky jellyfish

[lapietra]

In this dream, I'm not

[ambo]

In this dream, I'm not
Myself half awake, dreaming

[LatinoSince1983]

In this dream, I'm not
Myself half awake, dreaming
I'm somebody else

[zero]

there's no need to speak

[ambo]

there's no need to speak
in whispers now that we know

[LeahDear]

there's no need to speak
in whispers now that we know
he's deaf as a post

[ambo]

Out of catnip toys

[Coffee]

Out of catnip toys
soothe savage beast with tuna

[Anna]

Out of catnip toys
soothe savage beast with tuna
meow meow me

[ambo]

Some conversations

[catbelly]

Some conversations
Are full of innuendo

[LeahDear]

Some conversations
Are full of innuendo
you cunning linguist ;)

[ambo]

Rows of tile rooftops

[ACD]

Rows of tile rooftops
Red like the hot setting sun

[zero]

rows of tile rooftops
red like the hot setting sun
in balcony dreams

[ACD]

Autumn colours show

[ambo]

Autumn colours show
Through the lace on the window

[LeahDear]

Autumn colours show
Through the lace on the window
Russet framed with white

[ambo]

Toast with butter please

[LeahDear]

Toast with butter please
And a splash of earl grey tea

[ambo]

Toast with butter please
And a splash of earl grey tea
A bit of heaven

[Coffee]

Sunburned and groggy

[ambo]

Sunburned and groggy
Fell fast asleep up on deck

[chuckie egg]

Sunburned and groggy
Fell fast asleep up on deck
Salty sea air soothes

[ambo]

That thing between us

[dinzdale]

That thing between us
Is poking me in the back

[ambo]

That thing between us
Is poking me in the back
Next floor and I'm out

[Hyakujo's Fox]

back then we had tried

[LeahDear]

back then we had tried
to cultivate some marrows

[ambo]

back then we had tried
to cultivate some marrows
in neat little beds

[LeahDear]

rivulets of snot

[ambo]

rivulets of snot
herald the first cold of fall

[LeahDear]

rivulets of snot
herald the first cold of fall
mountains of kleenex

[ambo]

Bags full of raked leaves

[TulsaGuy]

Bags full of raked leaves
Empty tree limbs far above

[dddrum]

Bags full of raked leaves
Empty tree limbs far above
Guess I'm done. This year.

[Hyakujo's Fox]

The things you don't say

[ambo]

The things you don't say
Make your eyes that much bigger

[Hyakujo's Fox]

The things you don't say
Make your eyes that much bigger
You creep me out dude

[chuckie egg]

Sleeves that are too short

[ambo]

Sleeves that are too short
I need some really long gloves

[dddrum]

Sleeves that are too short
I need some really long gloves
To cover my tracks

[ambo]

Tear drop moistens cheek

[Hyakujo's Fox]

Tear drop moistens cheek
And a cold wind erases

[Coffee]

Tear drop moistens cheek
And a cold wind erases
La Paz vacation

[harrier]

Fog covered airport

[TulsaGuy]

Fog covered airport
Winking lights in lines of red

[ambo]

Fog covered airport
Winking lights in lines of red
weary red-eye eyes

[TulsaGuy]

Starry starry night

[ambo]

Starry starry night
Vincent knew his blues, for sure

[Klynne]

Starry starry night
Vincent knew his blues, for sure
John Belushi rules

[brightpearl]

banana cream pie

[harrier]

Banana cream pie
Bury my face in deep

[lukkucairi]

Banana cream pie
Bury my face in deep
yes! nitrous oxide.

[Tunesmith]

A guilty pleasure

[Awed_Job]

A guilty pleasure
Brangelohaniston nudes

[harrier]

A guilty pleasure
Brangelohaniston nudes
Hotness Overload

[CherishHellfire]

Onions revolt

[T.I.P.]

Onions revolt
Overthrowing the carrots

[seebe]

Onions revolt
Overthrowing the carrots
Stewing in it's juice

[brightpearl]

Hairy applesauce

[Tunesmith]

Hairy applesauce
Dammit! Where'd the cat get to?

[Klynne]

Hairy applesauce
Dammit! Where'd the cat get to?
Furry sloppy mess

[Jack Flanders]

Oh, great it rains again

[Klynne]

Oh, great it rains again
The ark which I am building

[lapietra]

Oh, great it rains again
The ark which I am building
only a kayak

[brightpearl]

^nice

rice and tamari

[lapietra]

rice and tamari
add some veggies and tofu

[zero]

rice and tamari
add some veggies and tofu
vomit-inducing



.

[lapietra]

hey, to each his own

[T.I.P.]

hey, to each his own
for instance, i like yoga

[brightpearl]

hey, to each his own
for instance, i like yoga
and eating canned snails

[lapietra]

feed your snails cornmeal

[T.I.P.]

feed your snails cornmeal
and they will grow to be strong

[lapietra]

feed your snails cornmeal
and they will grow to be strong
and be good to eat

[Hyakujo's Fox]

where is the logic

[Anna]

where is the logic
reasonable solutions

[Klynne]

where is the logic
reasonable solutions
its all greek to me

[CherishHellfire]

Night's winking headlights

[Klynne]

Night's winking headlights
Strippers stradling upon poles

[Anna]

Night's winking headlights
Strippers stradling upon poles
Neon color red

[Hyakujo's Fox]

waiting for a chance

[trisherina]

waiting for a chance
words wanting to bubble out

[Marcus Bales]

waiting for a chance
words wanting to bubble out
but death comes too soon

[lapietra]

before there was this

[Hyakujo's Fox]

before there was this
they say there was another

[brightpearl]

before there was this
they say there was another
but that was this too

[Marcus Bales]

she picked up the gun

[Hyakujo's Fox]

she picked up the gun
and weighed that hard, cold, heavy
possibility

[brightpearl]

Brussels sprout angels

[lapietra]

Brussels sprout angels
fluffy mashed potato clouds

[Anna]

Brussels sprout angels
fluffy mashed potato clouds
manna from heaven

[Hyakujo's Fox]

I had an idea

[lapietra]

I had an idea
bubbled up from depths of drowse

[Pixie Cherries]

I had an idea
bubbled up from the depths of drowse
a chance for world peace

[Pixie Cherries]

Larceny on rye

[Anna]

Larceny on rye
corporeal bereavement

[lapietra]

Larceny on rye
corporeal bereavement
guilty hamface dog

[Anna]

one two three four five

[Hyakujo's Fox]

you leave me little choice

one two three four five
once I caught a fish alive

[Odbe]

one two three four five
once I caught a fish alive
then it choked to death

[Hyakujo's Fox]

a happy ending

[Anna]

a happy ending
never before seen by man

[rapscalious rob]

a happy ending
never before seen by man
himself, unraveled

[brightpearl]

^good one.
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Does this milk smell bad?

[Coffee]

A good one
does this milk smell bad
randomness



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ya ya ya...should go in the 3-5-3 thread...whatever.

[Pixie Cherries]

the blue and white moth

[tapanuli]

the blue and white moth
suspends on droplets over

[T.I.P.]

the blue and white moth
suspends on droplets over
an intricate web

[brightpearl]

two birds on a wire

[Anna]

two birds on a wire
indifferent to currents

[lapietra]

two birds on a wire
indifferent to currents
tiny tightrope stars

[rapscalious rob]

translucent leaf-gems

[brightpearl]

translucent leaf-gems
on each a waiting spider

[T.I.P.]

translucent leaf-gems
on each a waiting spider
reflecting flies' fates

[lapietra]

if I lift my foot

[Hyakujo's Fox]

if I lift my foot
i feel the earth start moving

[seebe]

if I lift my foot
i feel the earth start moving
must start my diet

[Anna]

va room va room vroom

[brightpearl]

va room va room vroom
a mouse drives a turnip truck

[tapanuli]

va room va room vroom
a mouse drives a turnip truck
not yet a teamster

[Tunesmith]

the nimble hands dance

[trisherina]

the nimble hands dance
shadows on flocked wallpaper

[T.I.P.]

the nimble hands dance
shadows on flocked wallpaper
shelter from the light

[Stephi_B]

hide in neon light

[Tunesmith]

hide in neon light
awash in a sea of sound

[Anna]

hide in neon light
awash in a sea of sound
shadows in the dark

[T.I.P.]

night descends quickly

[brightpearl]

night descends quickly
soft rain muffles the ticking

[Tunesmith]

night descends quickly
soft rain muffles the ticking
of my now lost watch

[lapietra]

lavender scented

[Anna]

lavender scented
fold in the fertile crescent

[lapietra]

lavender scented
fold in the fertile crescent
beginning of life

[lapietra]

'tisn't what you think

[T.I.P.]

'tisn't what you think
certainly not what they think

[Anna]

'tisn't what you think
certainly not what they think
thinking way too much

[brightpearl]

Sharpie marker high

[T.I.P.]

Sharpie marker high
Shelley has marked a new low

[tapanuli]

Sharpie marker high
Shelley has marked a new low
Like man melting snow.

[lapietra]

long languorous yawn

[Anna]

long languorous yawn
is it that late already

[T.I.P.]

long languorous yawn
is it that late already
over here it is

[Tunesmith]

rustling through the grass

[T.I.P.]

rustling through the grass
near the oak picnic table

[lapietra]

rustling through the grass
near the oak picnic table
mister toad et al

[rapscalious rob]

pretty butterfly

[brightpearl]

pretty butterfly
eaten by a gimpy crow

[lapietra]

pretty butterfly
eaten by a gimpy crow
they breakfast in heav'n

[Odbe]

tearing down the real

[tapanuli]

tearing down the real
finding its disguised folly

[Anna]

tearing down the real
finding its disguised folly
how interesting

[brightpearl]

overgrown garden

[lapietra]

overgrown garden
figs and roses intertwine

[Anna]

overgrown garden
figs and roses intertwine
thorns biting bittersweet

[lapietra]

why do I let you

[Anna]

why do I let you
thrist for the simplist renment

[Pixie Cherries]

*** note: I think you meant remnent ***

why do I let you
thirst for the simplist remnent
as if it were gold?

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a bite of bubbles

[brightpearl]

a bite of bubbles
a mouthful of rose petals

[lapietra]

a bite of bubbles
a mouthful of rose petals
tummy full of love

[lapietra]

revealing too much

[Anna]

revealing too much
like a thanksgiving dinner

[trisherina]

revealing too much
like a thanksgiving dinner
they picked the bones clean

[T.I.P.]

sounds from the attic

[brightpearl]

sounds from the attic
recorded on a laptop

[lapietra]

sounds from the attic
recorded on a laptop
post to secret blog

[lapietra]

captured your image

[rapscalious rob]

captured your image
as, in turn, it captured me

[lapietra]

captured your image
as, in turn, it captured me
sweet complication

[Anna]

around and around

[tapanuli]

around and around
their sandals scraping the beads

[lapietra]

around and around
their sandals scraping the beads
lightness, darkness, light

[Anna]

it's the master plan

[lapietra]

it's the master plan
bludgeon us with stupid spam

[Anna]

it's the master plan
bludgeon us with stupid spam
mysterious meat

[Hyakujo's Fox]

the softest pillows

[Stephi_B]

the softest pillows
feel hard like concrete to you