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ambo 05-14-2003 11:38 PM

Circular Verse
 
Okay, I'm feeling creative. And I find that so seldom is verse ever actually written to be visually recognizable, so here are the rules for this thread.

One line per post, to create seven line verses in the following pattern:

1st line short-------------
2nd line medium---------------
3rd line long--------------------------
4th line longest----------------------------
5th line long--------------------------
6th line medium----------------
7th line short-------------

Example:

Once outside
I realized that the air
Was particularly sweet today
Perhaps it was the honeysuckle vines
Or the red and yellow roses
I took a deep breath
Spring at last

I'll start the first one:

1. Sunday morning

trisherina 05-15-2003 12:12 AM

1. Sunday morning
2. Quiet rays of light

lapietra 05-15-2003 01:15 AM

1. Sunday morning
2. Quiet rays of light
3. Reach across my room

dinzdale 05-15-2003 11:39 AM

1. Sunday morning
2. Quiet rays of light
3. Reach across my room
4. With warming fingers stetching

ambo 05-15-2003 02:00 PM

1. Sunday morning
2. Quiet rays of light
3. Reach across my room
4. With warming fingers stretching
5. To eyes only half open

nycwriters 05-15-2003 04:23 PM

1. Sunday morning
2. Quiet rays of light
3. Reach across my room
4. With warming fingers stretching
5. To eyes only half open
6. Sleepy, contented

ambo 05-15-2003 04:47 PM

1. Sunday morning
2. Quiet rays of light
3. Reach across my room
4. With warming fingers stretching
5. To eyes only half open
6. Sleepy, contented
7. Pillow snuggles

Deviate 05-15-2003 05:50 PM

1. stretching

ambo 05-15-2003 06:17 PM

1. stretching
2. out to touch you

nycwriters 05-15-2003 06:28 PM

1. stretching
2. out to touch you
3. a lazy smile upon your lips

lapietra 05-15-2003 09:24 PM

1. stretching
2. out to touch you
3. a lazy smile upon your lips
4. as you slowly undress yourself

ambo 05-15-2003 10:04 PM

1. stretching
2. out to touch you
3. a lazy smile upon your lips
4. as you slowly undress yourself
5. my eyes drinking your body

trisherina 05-15-2003 11:40 PM

1. stretching
2. out to touch you
3. a lazy smile upon your lips
4. as you slowly undress yourself
5. my eyes drinking your body
6. caressed, alit by a glow

lapietra 05-16-2003 05:41 PM

1. stretching
2. out to touch you
3. a lazy smile upon your lips
4. as you slowly undress yourself
5. my eyes drinking your body
6. caressed, alit by a glow
7. from our fireplace

ambo 05-16-2003 05:45 PM

1. Don't go


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