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helenly 11-22-2002 08:14 AM

1. singing in the bath

JudyPatooty 11-22-2002 11:06 AM

1. singing in the bath
2. off-key and very loudly

Deviate 11-22-2002 11:52 AM

1. singing in the bath
2. off-key and very loudly
3. blood washing away

ransom 11-22-2002 04:41 PM

1. i loathe baltimore

oldsoul2002 11-22-2002 07:51 PM

1. i loathe baltimore
2. ravens are just birds, for shame

Deviate 11-22-2002 08:22 PM

um... OldSoul... 2nd line should have 7 syllables...

-st.

helenly 11-22-2002 08:40 PM

rav-ens are just birds, for shame
1-2 3 4 5 6 7

(i think that line's ok actually)


1. i loathe baltimore
2. ravens are just birds, for shame
3. black-wing'd ugly crows

oldsoul2002 11-22-2002 09:14 PM

1.Knowing one has faults

helenly 11-22-2002 09:19 PM

1. knowing one has faults
2. for instance, dancing badly

nycwriters 11-22-2002 10:57 PM

I'm a rebel:

I suck at Haikus
I could never do them
That's why I do not

cosmo949 11-23-2002 12:02 AM

1. knowing one has faults
2. for instance, dancing badly
3. makes one more noble

cosmo949 11-23-2002 12:56 AM

1. noone has noticed

oldsoul2002 11-23-2002 07:58 AM

1. noone has noticed
2. my awkward paranoia





PS: Deviate was originally correct, in that my first post in that haiku above was:

ravens are just birds

thnx Dev'! :O]

helenly 11-23-2002 10:46 AM

1. no-one has noticed
2. my awkward paranoia
3. they're coming for me!

Deviate 11-23-2002 06:26 PM

1. quick with fork-ed tongue


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