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Deviate 03-25-2003 05:56 PM

hmmm, maybe it does only have one syllable. sounds like two, though.... will have to revise, perhaps, to clean ambiguity...

-st.

Deviate 03-25-2003 06:02 PM

revised:

1. the cars that go boom
2. may have an engine problem
3. black smoke is bad sign

moel 03-26-2003 02:02 AM

1. Eyes, can say it all

helenly 03-26-2003 08:09 AM

1. eyes, can say it all
2. flashing glimmers of bright blue

cosmo949 03-26-2003 10:59 AM

1. eyes, can say it all
2. flashing glimmers of bright blue
3. now flat and opaque

Deviate 03-26-2003 12:41 PM

1. blue paper morning

lapietra 03-26-2003 02:51 PM

1. blue paper morning
2. lacy whispery white clouds

Deviate 03-26-2003 05:19 PM

1. blue paper morning
2. lacy whispery white clouds
3. tickle my childhood

helenly 03-27-2003 09:11 PM

1. exhibitionist

Deviate 03-28-2003 12:22 AM

1. exhibitionist
2. removing one's pants at will

cosmo949 03-28-2003 12:51 AM

1. exhibitionist
2. removing one's pants at will
3. hey, give me a hand

lapietra 03-28-2003 01:37 AM

1. come into the light

Deviate 03-28-2003 01:33 PM

1. come into the light
2. it's not at all cancerous

lapietra 03-28-2003 03:59 PM

1. come into the light
2. it's not at all cancerous
3. puts hair on your chest

cosmo949 03-28-2003 04:29 PM

1. nothing personal


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