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zefrank 04-26-2004 01:47 AM

communal 3-5-3 haikus
 
got a message the other day saying that 3-5-3 is a more accurate challenge for haikus in english than 5-7-5.

lets give it a shot:

Hyakujo's Fox 04-26-2004 01:56 AM

a few words

straymonk 04-26-2004 02:32 AM

a few words
given to rambling

catbelly 04-26-2004 03:14 AM

a few words
given to rambling
not concise

straymonk 04-26-2004 03:29 AM

threes not much

catbelly 04-26-2004 03:30 AM

threes not much
five is slightly more

Hyakujo's Fox 04-26-2004 03:48 AM

threes not much
five is slightly more
to work with

catbelly 04-26-2004 03:50 AM

sore and wet

Hyakujo's Fox 04-26-2004 04:29 AM

sore and wet
I lie exhausted

catbelly 04-26-2004 04:30 AM

sore and wet
I lie exhausted
pass the smokes

Hyakujo's Fox 04-26-2004 04:50 AM

short and sweet

straymonk 04-26-2004 05:16 AM

short and sweet
please just the facts ma'am

Spicy Jack 04-26-2004 02:26 PM

short and sweet
please just the facts ma'am
innocent

daverbee 04-26-2004 02:54 PM

Here today

Spicy Jack 04-26-2004 03:13 PM

Here today
with a pen in hand


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