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ransom 10-29-2002 06:48 PM

comunal haikus
 
DIRECTIONS: okay, this is a little more complicated than the other stories. . .a haiku must follow the STRICT structure of syllables being 5-7-5 for the 1st, 2nd and 3rd lines of the haiku. . .here is an example:

i spilled break fluid
lets get some sucking action
and clean this darn floor

in this exercise, posting will be in groups of three--first person will submist one line with 5 syllables, second person will post a somewhat relevant line with 7 syllables, and the third person will finish that particular haiku off with a 5 syllable line. . .then it starts over with the next person and a brand new comunal haiku. . .to make things easier, put a number (1 2 or 3) to state which line we are on. . .

got it? GOOD. . here goes the first line:
______________________________________________

1. life is like baked beans

JudyPatooty 10-29-2002 07:20 PM

1. life is like baked beans
2. no good without the brown bread

Hamtastica 11-01-2002 04:01 PM

1. life is like baked beans
2. no good without the brown bread
3. and better with ham.

ransom 11-01-2002 04:17 PM

1. Winter wind burns eyes.

cosmo949 11-01-2002 06:49 PM

1. Winter wind burns eyes.
2. Tears like gentle freezing rain

Hamtastica 11-01-2002 06:51 PM

1. Winter wind burns eyes.
2. Tears like gentle freezing rain
3. Tongue stuck to flagpole.

JudyPatooty 11-01-2002 07:12 PM

1. Friday afternoon

ransom 11-01-2002 09:36 PM

1. Friday afternoon
2. freedom has come closer now

cosmo949 11-01-2002 11:04 PM

1. Friday afternoon
2. freedom has come closer now
3. we weep with relief

zefrank 11-02-2002 06:44 PM

1. So close to Christmas

ransom 11-02-2002 08:16 PM

1. So close to Christmas
2. the turkey shows its power

Hamtastica 11-02-2002 08:22 PM

So close to Christmas
the turkey shows its power:
Stealth ninja attack!

lapietra 11-02-2002 11:43 PM

just saw "Bowling for Columbine"
 
From my cold dead hand

Deviate 11-03-2002 06:19 PM

From my cold dead hand
Breathes pulsing fire, flame, and ash

ransom 11-03-2002 06:21 PM

1. From my cold dead hand
2. Breathes pulsing fire, flame, and ash
3. just popped a big zit


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