1. singing in the bath

1. singing in the bath
2. off-key and very loudly

1. singing in the bath
2. off-key and very loudly
3. blood washing away

1. i loathe baltimore

1. i loathe baltimore
2. ravens are just birds, for shame

um... OldSoul... 2nd line should have 7 syllables...

-st.

rav-ens are just birds, for shame
1-2 3 4 5 6 7

(i think that line's ok actually)


1. i loathe baltimore
2. ravens are just birds, for shame
3. black-wing'd ugly crows

1.Knowing one has faults

1. knowing one has faults
2. for instance, dancing badly

I'm a rebel:

I suck at Haikus
I could never do them
That's why I do not

1. knowing one has faults
2. for instance, dancing badly
3. makes one more noble

1. noone has noticed

1. noone has noticed
2. my awkward paranoia





PS: Deviate was originally correct, in that my first post in that haiku above was:

ravens are just birds

thnx Dev'! :O]

1. no-one has noticed
2. my awkward paranoia
3. they're coming for me!

1. quick with fork-ed tongue