★think not that strength lies in the big round word★
" linguist j. addison alexander was once asked whether one could write as well forcibly in words of a single syllable as in long words. He responded with a poem: think not that strength lies in the big round word, can we do this with e.g. haiku353, limerick, haiku575, fib, acrostic, whatever.. or anything you like? blue beach glass |
blue beach glass:
your eyes, cold, with frost |
blue beach glass:
your eyes, cold, with frost shrouds of fog 5-7-5 haiku: trapped beast writhes in pain |
blue beach glass:
your eyes, cold, with frost won't meet mine |
This is neat.
trapped beast writhes in pain he who trapped it hides in shame |
trapped beast writhes in pain
he who trapped it hides in shame their strain is the same |
lục bát: |
an old man lost at sea
counts fish in the hold of his boat |
an old man lost at sea
counts fish in the hold of his boat, and prays his craft will float |
Oooops, I missed that there's internal rhyme (thanks Ysa)....
This will still work, and it uses one of ezra's most favorite words: an old man lost at sea counts cold fish in his wee red boat and prays his craft will float |
an old man lost at sea
counts cold fish in his wee red boat and prays his craft will float back to the shore; he'll gloat with pride |
an old man lost at sea
counts cold fish in his wee red boat and prays his craft will float back to the shore; he'll gloat with pride back at this sea so wide |
an old man lost at sea, |
an old man lost at sea,
counts cold fish in his wee red boat and prays his craft will float back to the shore; he'll gloat with pride, back at this sea so wide. 'show me a star to guide my way and I will show,' he'll say, |
an old man lost at sea,
counts cold fish in his wee red boat and prays his craft will float back to the shore; he'll gloat with pride, back at this sea so wide. 'show me a star to guide my way and I will show,' he'll say, 'no youth am I, but brave of heart |
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