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ambo 05-14-2003 11:38 PM

Circular Verse
 
Okay, I'm feeling creative. And I find that so seldom is verse ever actually written to be visually recognizable, so here are the rules for this thread.

One line per post, to create seven line verses in the following pattern:

1st line short-------------
2nd line medium---------------
3rd line long--------------------------
4th line longest----------------------------
5th line long--------------------------
6th line medium----------------
7th line short-------------

Example:

Once outside
I realized that the air
Was particularly sweet today
Perhaps it was the honeysuckle vines
Or the red and yellow roses
I took a deep breath
Spring at last

I'll start the first one:

1. Sunday morning

trisherina 05-15-2003 12:12 AM

1. Sunday morning
2. Quiet rays of light

lapietra 05-15-2003 01:15 AM

1. Sunday morning
2. Quiet rays of light
3. Reach across my room

dinzdale 05-15-2003 11:39 AM

1. Sunday morning
2. Quiet rays of light
3. Reach across my room
4. With warming fingers stetching

ambo 05-15-2003 02:00 PM

1. Sunday morning
2. Quiet rays of light
3. Reach across my room
4. With warming fingers stretching
5. To eyes only half open

nycwriters 05-15-2003 04:23 PM

1. Sunday morning
2. Quiet rays of light
3. Reach across my room
4. With warming fingers stretching
5. To eyes only half open
6. Sleepy, contented

ambo 05-15-2003 04:47 PM

1. Sunday morning
2. Quiet rays of light
3. Reach across my room
4. With warming fingers stretching
5. To eyes only half open
6. Sleepy, contented
7. Pillow snuggles

Deviate 05-15-2003 05:50 PM

1. stretching

ambo 05-15-2003 06:17 PM

1. stretching
2. out to touch you

nycwriters 05-15-2003 06:28 PM

1. stretching
2. out to touch you
3. a lazy smile upon your lips

lapietra 05-15-2003 09:24 PM

1. stretching
2. out to touch you
3. a lazy smile upon your lips
4. as you slowly undress yourself

ambo 05-15-2003 10:04 PM

1. stretching
2. out to touch you
3. a lazy smile upon your lips
4. as you slowly undress yourself
5. my eyes drinking your body

trisherina 05-15-2003 11:40 PM

1. stretching
2. out to touch you
3. a lazy smile upon your lips
4. as you slowly undress yourself
5. my eyes drinking your body
6. caressed, alit by a glow

lapietra 05-16-2003 05:41 PM

1. stretching
2. out to touch you
3. a lazy smile upon your lips
4. as you slowly undress yourself
5. my eyes drinking your body
6. caressed, alit by a glow
7. from our fireplace

ambo 05-16-2003 05:45 PM

1. Don't go

dinzdale 05-16-2003 06:31 PM

1. Don't go
2. not just yet

lapietra 05-16-2003 06:44 PM

1. Don't go
2. not just yet
3. just another kiss

ambo 05-16-2003 09:30 PM

1. Don't go
2. not just yet
3. just another kiss
4. or perhaps two or three

lapietra 05-17-2003 04:50 AM

1. Don't go
2. not just yet
3. just another kiss
4. or perhaps two or three
5. or three hundred

moel 05-17-2003 10:46 PM

1. Don't go
2. not just yet
3. just another kiss
4. or perhaps two or three
5. or three hundred
6. just please

ambo 05-17-2003 11:03 PM

1. Don't go
2. not just yet
3. just another kiss
4. or perhaps two or three
5. or three hundred
6. just please
7. Don't go

*aw guys, this was beautiful, and truly circular*

moel 05-17-2003 11:13 PM

1. Sweetness

ambo 05-17-2003 11:15 PM

1. Sweetness
2. And a wee bit tart

moel 05-17-2003 11:17 PM

1. Sweetness
2. And a wee bit tart
3. Complex and intriguing

ambo 05-17-2003 11:19 PM

1. Sweetness
2. And a wee bit tart
3. Complex and intriguing
4. Like a book you can't put down

moel 05-17-2003 11:33 PM

1. Sweetness
2. And a wee bit tart
3. Complex and intriguing
4. Like a book you can't put down
5. Forever existing now

ambo 05-19-2003 11:51 AM

1. Sweetness
2. And a wee bit tart
3. Complex and intriguing
4. Like a book you can't put down
5. Forever existing now
6. Between my lips

beckstra 05-20-2003 11:35 PM

1. Sweetness
2. And a wee bit tart
3. Complex and intriguing
4. Like a book you can't put down
5. Forever existing now
6. Between my lips
7. Berry tongue

red 05-21-2003 05:14 PM

1. Call. damnit!

nycwriters 05-21-2003 10:34 PM

1. Call. damnit!
2. I can't bear this

trisherina 05-21-2003 10:49 PM

1. Call. damnit!
2. I can't bear this
3. Being so near, yet

ambo 05-21-2003 10:58 PM

1. Call. damnit!
2. I can't bear this
3. Being so near, yet
4. Tauntingly out of reach

red 05-22-2003 10:50 AM

1. Call. damnit!
2. I can't bear this
3. Being so near, yet
4. Tauntingly out of reach
5. and yet so close

ambo 05-30-2003 01:03 PM

1. Call. damnit!
2. I can't bear this
3. Being so near, yet
4. Tauntingly out of reach
5. and yet so close
6. I can feel you

lapietra 05-30-2003 09:51 PM

1. Call. damnit!
2. I can't bear this
3. Being so near, yet
4. Tauntingly out of reach
5. and yet so close
6. I can feel you
7. touching me

lapietra 05-30-2003 09:52 PM

1. Ruined dress

ambo 05-30-2003 11:24 PM

1. Ruined dress
2. Big red wine stain

trisherina 05-31-2003 12:58 AM

1. Ruined dress
2. Big red wine stain
3. That makes me smile

lapietra 05-31-2003 01:34 AM

1. Ruined dress
2. Big red wine stain
3. That makes me smile
4. remembering the embrace

nycwriters 06-01-2003 12:17 AM

1. Ruined dress
2. Big red wine stain
3. That makes me smile
4. remembering the embrace.
5. How time stood still


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