Circular Verse
Okay, I'm feeling creative. And I find that so seldom is verse ever actually written to be visually recognizable, so here are the rules for this thread.
One line per post, to create seven line verses in the following pattern: 1st line short------------- 2nd line medium--------------- 3rd line long-------------------------- 4th line longest---------------------------- 5th line long-------------------------- 6th line medium---------------- 7th line short------------- Example: Once outside I realized that the air Was particularly sweet today Perhaps it was the honeysuckle vines Or the red and yellow roses I took a deep breath Spring at last I'll start the first one: 1. Sunday morning |
1. Sunday morning
2. Quiet rays of light |
1. Sunday morning
2. Quiet rays of light 3. Reach across my room |
1. Sunday morning
2. Quiet rays of light 3. Reach across my room 4. With warming fingers stetching |
1. Sunday morning
2. Quiet rays of light 3. Reach across my room 4. With warming fingers stretching 5. To eyes only half open |
1. Sunday morning
2. Quiet rays of light 3. Reach across my room 4. With warming fingers stretching 5. To eyes only half open 6. Sleepy, contented |
1. Sunday morning
2. Quiet rays of light 3. Reach across my room 4. With warming fingers stretching 5. To eyes only half open 6. Sleepy, contented 7. Pillow snuggles |
1. stretching
|
1. stretching
2. out to touch you |
1. stretching
2. out to touch you 3. a lazy smile upon your lips |
1. stretching
2. out to touch you 3. a lazy smile upon your lips 4. as you slowly undress yourself |
1. stretching
2. out to touch you 3. a lazy smile upon your lips 4. as you slowly undress yourself 5. my eyes drinking your body |
1. stretching
2. out to touch you 3. a lazy smile upon your lips 4. as you slowly undress yourself 5. my eyes drinking your body 6. caressed, alit by a glow |
1. stretching
2. out to touch you 3. a lazy smile upon your lips 4. as you slowly undress yourself 5. my eyes drinking your body 6. caressed, alit by a glow 7. from our fireplace |
1. Don't go
|
1. Don't go
2. not just yet |
1. Don't go
2. not just yet 3. just another kiss |
1. Don't go
2. not just yet 3. just another kiss 4. or perhaps two or three |
1. Don't go
2. not just yet 3. just another kiss 4. or perhaps two or three 5. or three hundred |
1. Don't go
2. not just yet 3. just another kiss 4. or perhaps two or three 5. or three hundred 6. just please |
1. Don't go
2. not just yet 3. just another kiss 4. or perhaps two or three 5. or three hundred 6. just please 7. Don't go *aw guys, this was beautiful, and truly circular* |
1. Sweetness
|
1. Sweetness
2. And a wee bit tart |
1. Sweetness
2. And a wee bit tart 3. Complex and intriguing |
1. Sweetness
2. And a wee bit tart 3. Complex and intriguing 4. Like a book you can't put down |
1. Sweetness
2. And a wee bit tart 3. Complex and intriguing 4. Like a book you can't put down 5. Forever existing now |
1. Sweetness
2. And a wee bit tart 3. Complex and intriguing 4. Like a book you can't put down 5. Forever existing now 6. Between my lips |
1. Sweetness
2. And a wee bit tart 3. Complex and intriguing 4. Like a book you can't put down 5. Forever existing now 6. Between my lips 7. Berry tongue |
1. Call. damnit!
|
1. Call. damnit!
2. I can't bear this |
1. Call. damnit!
2. I can't bear this 3. Being so near, yet |
1. Call. damnit!
2. I can't bear this 3. Being so near, yet 4. Tauntingly out of reach |
1. Call. damnit!
2. I can't bear this 3. Being so near, yet 4. Tauntingly out of reach 5. and yet so close |
1. Call. damnit!
2. I can't bear this 3. Being so near, yet 4. Tauntingly out of reach 5. and yet so close 6. I can feel you |
1. Call. damnit!
2. I can't bear this 3. Being so near, yet 4. Tauntingly out of reach 5. and yet so close 6. I can feel you 7. touching me |
1. Ruined dress
|
1. Ruined dress
2. Big red wine stain |
1. Ruined dress
2. Big red wine stain 3. That makes me smile |
1. Ruined dress
2. Big red wine stain 3. That makes me smile 4. remembering the embrace |
1. Ruined dress
2. Big red wine stain 3. That makes me smile 4. remembering the embrace. 5. How time stood still |
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