Stitched haiku
 

Each haiku begins where the other ends:

1. I hope this form works
2. It would be embarrassing
3. if no one joined in
2. the war would have been over
3. long before now


i'll start:

1.long before now

1.long before now
2.in times of great confusion

1.long before now
2.in times of great confusion
3.we looked to the stars

ze, great idea, but "long before now" ?

1.long before now
2.in times of great confusion
3.we looked to the stars
2.driving westward on 90

in this version you take what you get...thought it appropriate to start where I left off

1.long before now
2.in times of great confusion
3.we looked to the stars
2.driving westward on 90
3.the sun in our eyes

yeah but ze, bubbala, it's only four syllables:D

1.long before now
2.in times of great confusion
3.we looked to the stars
2.driving westward on 90
3.the sun in our eyes
2?.as daylight bleeds from the night

1.long before now
2.in times of great confusion
3.we looked to the stars
2.driving westward on 90
3.the sun in our eyes
2?.as daylight bleeds from the night
3. I'm feeling no fear

1.long before now
2.in times of great confusion
3.we looked to the stars
2.driving westward on 90
3.the sun in our eyes
2?.as daylight bleeds from the night
3. I'm feeling no fear
2. although I miss my old horse

1.long before now
2.in times of great confusion
3.we looked to the stars
2.driving westward on 90
3.the sun in our eyes
2?.as daylight bleeds from the night
3. I'm feeling no fear
2. although I miss my old horse
3. smoke and ashes rise

1.long before now
2.in times of great confusion
3.we looked to the stars
2.driving westward on 90
3.the sun in our eyes
2?.as daylight bleeds from the night
3. I'm feeling no fear
2. although I miss my old horse
3. smoke and ashes rise
2. my father's face in yellow

1.long before now
2.in times of great confusion
3.we looked to the stars
2.driving westward on 90
3.the sun in our eyes
2?.as daylight bleeds from the night
3. I'm feeling no fear
2. although I miss my old horse
3. smoke and ashes rise
2. my father's face in yellow
3. campfire dreaming

1. long before now
2. in times of great confusion
3. we looked to the stars
2. driving westward on 90
3. the sun in our eyes
2. as daylight bleeds from the night
3. I'm feeling no fear
2. although I miss my old horse
3. smoke and ashes rise
2. my father's face in yellow
3. campfire dreaming
2. and the taste of marshmellows

1. long before now
2. in times of great confusion
3. we looked to the stars
2. driving westward on 90
3. the sun in our eyes
2. as daylight bleeds from the night
3. I'm feeling no fear
2. although I miss my old horse
3. smoke and ashes rise
2. my father's face in yellow
3. campfire dreaming
2. and the taste of marshmellows
3. distant memories

1. long before now
2. in times of great confusion
3. we looked to the stars
2. driving westward on 90
3. the sun in our eyes
2. as daylight bleeds from the night
3. I'm feeling no fear
2. although I miss my old horse
3. smoke and ashes rise
2. my father's face in yellow
3. campfire dreaming
2. and the taste of marshmellows
3. distant memories
2. condense to their pure essence

1. long before now
2. in times of great confusion
3. we looked to the stars
2. driving westward on 90
3. the sun in our eyes
2. as daylight bleeds from the night
3. I'm feeling no fear
2. although I miss my old horse
3. smoke and ashes rise
2. my father's face in yellow
3. campfire dreaming
2. and the taste of marshmellows
3. distant memories
2. condense to their pure essence
3. leaving only life