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09-06-2003, 04:34 AM
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Communal Blues
Hey, what could be more communal than blues? We’ve all got ‘em.
Standard blues form, as I understand it, is like this: A B (repeat) C B The last two lines should be sort of funny or ironic. Example (pirate blues): It ain’t easy bein’ a pirate, Lawdy, no it ain’t no good. I said it ain’t easy bein’ no pirate, an’ it also ain’t no good; I’d sure like to chase some booty but my leg is made of wood. So one poster can come up with the first line, A, then another does be and the repeat, then another does C, then another does the second B. Or whatever. Copy and paste just like the other communal poetry forums. Okay, to start this whole shebang off: Oh, the gas here cost so damn much, |
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09-06-2003, 10:57 AM
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Lollypop!
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Oh, the gas here cost so damn much,
I should have gotten a hooker instead of this hummer
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09-06-2003, 03:29 PM
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Oh, the gas here cost so damn much,
I should have gotten a hooker instead of this hummer Said the gas here cost so damn much, I should’ve got laid by a fine hooker instead of gettin’ this hummer. Oh, I guess I’d best start walkin’ |
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09-06-2003, 05:53 PM
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Spone to Proonerisms
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Oh, the gas here cost so damn much,
I should have gotten a hooker instead of this hummer Said the gas here cost so damn much, I should’ve got laid by a fine hooker instead of gettin’ this hummer. Oh, I guess I’d best start walkin’ Runnin outa gas is such a bummer |
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09-07-2003, 05:36 AM
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I’m stayin’ up past midnight,
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09-07-2003, 05:26 PM
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Stuck in T.O.
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I’m stayin’ up past midnight,
Gonna drink my troubles off my mind |
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09-08-2003, 12:39 PM
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King of the špatnýs
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I’m stayin’ up past midnight,
Gonna drink my troubles off my mind I said, I'm stayin' up way past midnight |
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09-08-2003, 01:11 PM
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I’m stayin’ up past midnight,
Gonna drink my troubles off my mind I said, I'm stayin' up way past midnight Gon’ drink des troubles right off my mind Last edited by rapscalious rob : 09-08-2003 at 01:18 PM. |
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09-08-2003, 01:13 PM
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Stuck in T.O.
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I’m stayin’ up past midnight,
Gonna drink my troubles off my mind I said, I'm stayin' up way past midnight Gon’ drink des troubles right off my mind It's been lovin' and then hatin' |
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09-08-2003, 01:20 PM
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I’m stayin’ up past midnight,
Gonna drink my troubles off my mind I said, I'm stayin' up way past midnight Gon’ drink des troubles right off my mind It's been lovin' and then hatin' This crazy love sho’ ain’t too kind |
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09-08-2003, 04:35 PM
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Spone to Proonerisms
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My job has gotten crazayayay,
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09-09-2003, 12:16 PM
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King of the špatnýs
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My job has gotten crazy
Working hard for what I make |
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09-09-2003, 03:26 PM
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My job has gotten crazayayay
Working hard for what I make Said, lawd, this job’s driving me crazy |
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09-09-2003, 03:28 PM
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King of the špatnýs
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My job has gotten crazayayay
Working hard for what I make Said, lawd, this job’s driving me crazy Work too damn hard for the little bit I make |
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09-11-2003, 12:09 AM
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My job has gotten crazayayay
Working hard for what I make Said, lawd, this job’s driving me crazy Work too damn hard for the little bit I make If I don’t get a raise pretty soon |
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