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Old 01-12-2005, 05:42 PM   #1
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Here, have my elbow!!
I'm sorry I did that
Run
Whats wrong with you?
This is not a game
Snap out of it
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Old 01-13-2005, 04:36 AM   #2
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lucid dreams
dreams in color
informative dreams
wet dreams
scary dreams
dreams made with sentences
dreaming with intent to sentence
dreams of innocence
flying dreams
dying dreams
day dreams
teleapathic dreams,
alllll kiind of dreams..
forest, one day i'm gonna get me a boat and get off this island,
forest?...
"first things first said the queen!"
no! the proof is just pudding,
the sentence is ever changeable in combonations of 26 to infinity!
ease your minds interpretation and lossen your grip,
here i hold a mirror.
*walk's in mirror*
"interpretation is a level of a game," said alice to the deck of cards. the cards frowned.
they shuffled, and alice walked with a stick that looked like this(?)
the picture broke into pieces of a puzzle and then I woke up, I think.
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Old 01-14-2005, 02:10 PM   #3
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"harsh judgments"
i think your fat
as soon as the words were out of my mouth
i regretted them
but how was i supposed to know
he was 450lbs
a lovely person at heart
hidden under the layers of flesh
but i didnt see until it was too late
i pushed until all he could do was conform
scheduling the surgery
and once successful
we were happy
but that was shortlived
he slowly slipped away
my desires were satisfied
and he died a thin man
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your star shaped heart
has reached out to me
and together our hearts beat as one
bound by the rich red that runs coarsing
united we stand
stronger than before
able to face the dark
with hands entwined
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Old 01-17-2005, 01:14 PM   #4
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stretched across
the ample roundness
curves revealed
accented slightly
by the too tight tshirt
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your star shaped heart
has reached out to me
and together our hearts beat as one
bound by the rich red that runs coarsing
united we stand
stronger than before
able to face the dark
with hands entwined
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Old 01-20-2005, 04:33 AM   #5
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After a while, it becomes the point.
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Old 01-21-2005, 03:54 AM   #6
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talking to you again is like
...
something i can't describe
i can't quite put my finger on it
and i dont know how to feel
day to day
about it
or even hour to hour
(minute to minute?)
aside from a few snide comments
made to make me
feel guilt, somehow
about protecting myself
and my feelings
the depths of which i would never dream of sharing with you
you're your old self
the back & forth
easily flowing conversation
the witty banter
teasing
giving as good as you're getting
i've missed it
i've missed you
time heals all wounds?
i'll never know for sure







confused
a bit apprehensive
not sure where this is going
if anywhere
everything happens for a reason
i still don't fully fathom
the reason for this?
we spoke of everything in time
shared our losses, hopes, dreams
laughed, cried, counseled, teased, cajoled, encouraged
little did we know
i'd one day grab the chalk
and put you in the losses column
breaking my heart in the process
taking the step you couldn't
or wouldn't
doesn't absolve you
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Old 01-21-2005, 08:37 AM   #7
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giving in
first steps in ears from the notion
echos dependant on your ability to know when to give
sewing machines split cloth in dots of color
into ink of marks
inside the keys hit blind by the light of the screen
with prints
they see through
never fully seeing through. sometimes

inside a rabble rouser speaks of rakes in a silent sort
thinking of knowing,
answers,
flashing on the eyes so i look

sorts the stars by force
not for sorts,
for inward history
knowing whats important
because its defenition,
be right.. what's up with be right?
well be right likes flowers
really?
for real
well, there wasn't a sound how'd you know the tree fell?
i was full of water.
stop dreaming!
how, your wishing coin.
you are too.
i know, its apealing enticing
sought flowers to absorb to give with no intrest in having
missed defentions of my past now rippling coin
stop confusing
fade to black!

to give?
to live humble and tackle with tact when games lose the essence of fun,
well, with all i know
its dark in here for a reason can you see that?

and the flower kept going not knowing why the ground broke
not knowing is exactly why
sad in that respect, knowing we share the ground
and not knowing what is or could become of roots
blind growing seperating
giving up,
in,
to look and see losses,
adapting and seperating.. why forever echoing,
i don't know.

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