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Originally Posted by funkytuba

I'd go with' "misogynist propaganda"-ed ' including a stage direction for hand-articulated double-quotation marks if it fits the character

also, consider the more direct approach: "interfering with my ability to get ****ed"

also... to the point of jennifer's question, how does sarah think the lesbian mother would feel if she were dead? any way to sneak an answer in her little diatribe?

Well, as far as using the f-bomb, it's not the way the characters talk. The script is about a group of people who have obviously been friends a long time, and you tend to talk like your friends, no? Anyway, that just happens to be one of the words they don't use.

Although, I really like the idea of adding to Jennifer's comment.