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Old 08-14-2005, 09:57 AM   #31
Con ate dog
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looking back, it was
crazy as bedbugs to think
I'm moving forward

but, then again, it's
nothing against the backward
perpetual flow

effluvia runs
and ruins my appetite
dry, aching and sore

give me a downpour
in this drought of love. I wait
and I feel still. still

she is leaving home
fledging fleeing flying off
innocent first steps

I watch her depart
she is not turning around
but i am rooted

I call out her name
so softly she can not hear
please, god. tilt her back

just this once, for me
she stops and smiles, not looking
just there, and knowing

the train comes on time
how many times can you leave?
her whole life ahead

even looking back
she knows there's no point to it
I am unbalanced

The caboose leaves view
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