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Honora · 08-15-2005, 02:22 AM

Dad stands on the dock, beside his boat, regarding an actual pelican intent on finding it's supper. He gazes, blankly at the bird, unable to feel much of anything anymore... and, unaware that his son, Eldon and their dog, Skippy have hidden behind the coils of rope at the marina and now wait patiently for Dad to end his reverie and leave so that they may take sail and begin a life different in every way from what they have known.

Con ate dog · 09-03-2005, 03:07 PM

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Dad stands on the dock, beside his boat, regarding an actual pelican intent on finding it's supper. He gazes, blankly at the bird, unable to feel much of anything anymore... and, unaware that his son, Eldon and their dog, Skippy have hidden behind the coils of rope at the marina and now wait patiently for Dad to end his reverie and leave so that they may take sail and begin a life different in every way from what they have known.

At last, Dad reluctantly gets up and turns towards home, his stomach bothering him instantly. He tries to think about anything other than the spectre of the vicious silence awaiting him at home.

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08-15-2005, 02:22 AM	#1
Honora Registered User Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Canada Posts: 4	Dad stands on the dock, beside his boat, regarding an actual pelican intent on finding it's supper. He gazes, blankly at the bird, unable to feel much of anything anymore... and, unaware that his son, Eldon and their dog, Skippy have hidden behind the coils of rope at the marina and now wait patiently for Dad to end his reverie and leave so that they may take sail and begin a life different in every way from what they have known.