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Vaporous spirit · 07-24-2003, 06:22 PM

this year, i'll set goals
I said to him as he gawked
smiled with contempt

"goals are for soccer"
he said with a sheepish grin
"and you've never played."

i pushed him aside
and went back to my drawings
mumbling to myself

"it will work this time."
"slow and steady wins the race"
I drew a tortoise

art is killing me
the tortoise must win the race
say "no" to paint fumes

Angel sauntered in
Angel wasn't wearing much
a cheap way to flirt

In this case- cheap worked

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07-24-2003, 06:22 PM	#11
Vaporous spirit Registered User Join Date: Jul 2003 Posts: 1	this year, i'll set goals I said to him as he gawked smiled with contempt "goals are for soccer" he said with a sheepish grin "and you've never played." i pushed him aside and went back to my drawings mumbling to myself "it will work this time." "slow and steady wins the race" I drew a tortoise art is killing me the tortoise must win the race say "no" to paint fumes Angel sauntered in Angel wasn't wearing much a cheap way to flirt In this case- cheap worked