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Old 06-20-2005, 05:01 AM   #1
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haiku story... again

looking back, it was
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Old 06-20-2005, 03:37 PM   #2
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Old 06-21-2005, 01:40 PM   #3
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looking back, it was
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I'm moving forward
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Old 06-21-2005, 06:48 PM   #4
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looking back, it was
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I'm moving forward

but, then again, it's
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Old 06-21-2005, 08:46 PM   #5
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looking back, it was
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but, then again, it's
nothing against the backward
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Old 06-21-2005, 09:30 PM   #6
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looking back, it was
crazy as bedbugs to think
I'm moving forward

but, then again, it's
nothing against the backward
perpetual flow
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Old 06-22-2005, 12:54 AM   #7
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looking back, it was
crazy as bedbugs to think
I'm moving forward

but, then again, it's
nothing against the backward
perpetual flow

effluvia runs
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Old 06-22-2005, 07:14 AM   #8
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looking back, it was
crazy as bedbugs to think
I'm moving forward

but, then again, it's
nothing against the backward
perpetual flow

effluvia runs
and ruins my appetite
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Old 06-22-2005, 10:47 AM   #9
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looking back, it was
crazy as bedbugs to think
I'm moving forward

but, then again, it's
nothing against the backward
perpetual flow

effluvia runs
and ruins my appetite
dry, aching and sore
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Old 06-22-2005, 03:06 PM   #10
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looking back, it was
crazy as bedbugs to think
I'm moving forward

but, then again, it's
nothing against the backward
perpetual flow

effluvia runs
and ruins my appetite
dry, aching and sore

give me a downpour
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Old 06-23-2005, 05:27 AM   #11
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looking back, it was
crazy as bedbugs to think
I'm moving forward

but, then again, it's
nothing against the backward
perpetual flow

effluvia runs
and ruins my appetite
dry, aching and sore

give me a downpour
in this drought of love. I wait
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Old 06-23-2005, 10:17 AM   #12
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looking back, it was
crazy as bedbugs to think
I'm moving forward

but, then again, it's
nothing against the backward
perpetual flow

effluvia runs
and ruins my appetite
dry, aching and sore

give me a downpour
in this drought of love. I wait
and I feel still. still
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Old 06-24-2005, 05:47 AM   #13
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looking back, it was
crazy as bedbugs to think
I'm moving forward

but, then again, it's
nothing against the backward
perpetual flow

effluvia runs
and ruins my appetite
dry, aching and sore

give me a downpour
in this drought of love. I wait
and I feel still. still

she is leaving home
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Old 06-24-2005, 07:33 AM   #14
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looking back, it was
crazy as bedbugs to think
I'm moving forward

but, then again, it's
nothing against the backward
perpetual flow

effluvia runs
and ruins my appetite
dry, aching and sore

give me a downpour
in this drought of love. I wait
and I feel still. still

she is leaving home
fledging fleeing flying off
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Old 06-24-2005, 07:54 PM   #15
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looking back, it was
crazy as bedbugs to think
I'm moving forward

but, then again, it's
nothing against the backward
perpetual flow

effluvia runs
and ruins my appetite
dry, aching and sore

give me a downpour
in this drought of love. I wait
and I feel still. still

she is leaving home
fledging fleeing flying off
innocent first steps
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