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Old 08-13-2003, 03:35 AM   #1
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Moonlight set upon the shore. It was quiet, tranquil, waiting for something.
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Old 08-13-2003, 07:24 AM   #2
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Moonlight set upon the shore. It was quiet, tranquil, waiting for something. Do I ask him, I let fate ask me.
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Old 08-13-2003, 09:26 AM   #3
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Moonlight set upon the shore. It was quiet, tranquil, waiting for something. Do I ask him, I let fate ask me. The sands started shifting although there was barely a breeze.
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Moonlight set upon the shore. It was quiet, tranquil, waiting for something. Do I ask him, I let fate ask me. The sands started shifting although there was barely a breeze. A step or two maybe, in the right direction and I would be back to the beginning.
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Old 08-13-2003, 12:25 PM   #5
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Moonlight set upon the shore. It was quiet, tranquil, waiting for something. Do I ask him, I let fate ask me. The sands started shifting although there was barely a breeze. A step or two maybe, in the right direction and I would be back to the beginning. But would I ever learn to accept what I have become, with or without that damn ringing in my ears ?
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Moonlight set upon the shore. It was quiet, tranquil, waiting for something. Do I ask him, I let fate ask me. The sands started shifting although there was barely a breeze. A step or two maybe, in the right direction and I would be back to the beginning. But would I ever learn to accept what I have become, with or without that damn ringing in my ears ? Desert wind sparkles of stardust and oasis dreams.
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Old 08-13-2003, 10:32 PM   #7
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Moonlight set upon the shore. It was quiet, tranquil, waiting for something. Do I ask him, I let fate ask me. The sands started shifting although there was barely a breeze. A step or two maybe, in the right direction and I would be back to the beginning. But would I ever learn to accept what I have become, with or without that damn ringing in my ears ? Desert wind sparkles of stardust and oasis dreams.

Fundamentally, it had nothing to do with it.
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Old 08-14-2003, 12:07 PM   #8
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Moonlight set upon the shore. It was quiet, tranquil, waiting for something. Do I ask him, I let fate ask me. The sands started shifting although there was barely a breeze. A step or two maybe, in the right direction and I would be back to the beginning. But would I ever learn to accept what I have become, with or without that damn ringing in my ears ? Desert wind sparkles of stardust and oasis dreams.

Fundamentally, it had nothing to do with it. This was the road I had chosen, just as surely as I had been born to walk it. I had almost partially decided that to be definitely completely true.
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Old 08-14-2003, 12:14 PM   #9
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Moonlight set upon the shore. It was quiet, tranquil, waiting for something. Do I ask him, I let fate ask me. The sands started shifting although there was barely a breeze. A step or two maybe, in the right direction and I would be back to the beginning. But would I ever learn to accept what I have become, with or without that damn ringing in my ears ? Desert wind sparkles of stardust and oasis dreams.

Fundamentally, it had nothing to do with it. This was the road I had chosen, just as surely as I had been born to walk it. I had almost partially decided that to be definitely completely true. The darkness that surrounded me was deafening. I felt hungry.
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Moonlight set upon the shore. It was quiet, tranquil, waiting for something. Do I ask him, I let fate ask me. The sands started shifting although there was barely a breeze. A step or two maybe, in the right direction and I would be back to the beginning. But would I ever learn to accept what I have become, with or without that damn ringing in my ears ? Desert wind sparkles of stardust and oasis dreams.

Fundamentally, it had nothing to do with it. This was the road I had chosen, just as surely as I had been born to walk it. I had almost partially decided that to be definitely completely true. The darkness that surrounded me was deafening. I felt hungry.

Fat juicy burgers swam past my field of vision. Was this the key to the meaning of life? I pondered the vegan alternative while the sand sucked at my toes.
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Moonlight set upon the shore. It was quiet, tranquil, waiting for something. Do I ask him, I let fate ask me. The sands started shifting although there was barely a breeze. A step or two maybe, in the right direction and I would be back to the beginning. But would I ever learn to accept what I have become, with or without that damn ringing in my ears ? Desert wind sparkles of stardust and oasis dreams.

Fundamentally, it had nothing to do with it. This was the road I had chosen, just as surely as I had been born to walk it. I had almost partially decided that to be definitely completely true. The darkness that surrounded me was deafening. I felt hungry.

Fat juicy burgers swam past my field of vision. Was this the key to the meaning of life? I pondered the vegan alternative while the sand sucked at my toes. Ate pie, corner pocket.
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Moonlight set upon the shore. It was quiet, tranquil, waiting for something. Do I ask him, I let fate ask me. The sands started shifting although there was barely a breeze. A step or two maybe, in the right direction and I would be back to the beginning. But would I ever learn to accept what I have become, with or without that damn ringing in my ears ? Desert wind sparkles of stardust and oasis dreams.

Fundamentally, it had nothing to do with it. This was the road I had chosen, just as surely as I had been born to walk it. I had almost partially decided that to be definitely completely true. The darkness that surrounded me was deafening. I felt hungry.

Fat juicy burgers swam past my field of vision. Was this the key to the meaning of life? I pondered the vegan alternative while the sand sucked at my toes. Ate pie, corner pocket.

Then it happened.
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Old 08-16-2003, 05:13 PM   #13
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Moonlight set upon the shore. It was quiet, tranquil, waiting for something. Do I ask him, I let fate ask me. The sands started shifting although there was barely a breeze. A step or two maybe, in the right direction and I would be back to the beginning. But would I ever learn to accept what I have become, with or without that damn ringing in my ears ? Desert wind sparkles of stardust and oasis dreams.

Fundamentally, it had nothing to do with it. This was the road I had chosen, just as surely as I had been born to walk it. I had almost partially decided that to be definitely completely true. The darkness that surrounded me was deafening. I felt hungry.

Fat juicy burgers swam past my field of vision. Was this the key to the meaning of life? I pondered the vegan alternative while the sand sucked at my toes. Ate pie, corner pocket.

Then it happened. The formula for pi floated before me, and it did have a finite end.
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Moonlight set upon the shore. It was quiet, tranquil, waiting for something. Do I ask him, I let fate ask me. The sands started shifting although there was barely a breeze. A step or two maybe, in the right direction and I would be back to the beginning. But would I ever learn to accept what I have become, with or without that damn ringing in my ears ? Desert wind sparkles of stardust and oasis dreams.

Fundamentally, it had nothing to do with it. This was the road I had chosen, just as surely as I had been born to walk it. I had almost partially decided that to be definitely completely true. The darkness that surrounded me was deafening. I felt hungry.

Fat juicy burgers swam past my field of vision. Was this the key to the meaning of life? I pondered the vegan alternative while the sand sucked at my toes. Ate pie, corner pocket.

Then it happened. The formula for pi floated before me, and it did have a finite end. Lucky for me, because if it didn't, it would still be floating there, over the face of the waters, way past the scraps of unfinished answers to questions no one ever thought to ask me, past the bottles without messages, and past, far beyond, the memory of that time we had in Ozona Texas.
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Old 08-17-2003, 01:06 AM   #15
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Moonlight set upon the shore. It was quiet, tranquil, waiting for something. Do I ask him, I let fate ask me. The sands started shifting although there was barely a breeze. A step or two maybe, in the right direction and I would be back to the beginning. But would I ever learn to accept what I have become, with or without that damn ringing in my ears ? Desert wind sparkles of stardust and oasis dreams.

Fundamentally, it had nothing to do with it. This was the road I had chosen, just as surely as I had been born to walk it. I had almost partially decided that to be definitely completely true. The darkness that surrounded me was deafening. I felt hungry.

Fat juicy burgers swam past my field of vision. Was this the key to the meaning of life? I pondered the vegan alternative while the sand sucked at my toes. Ate pie, corner pocket.

Then it happened. The formula for pi floated before me, and it did have a finite end. Lucky for me, because if it didn't, it would still be floating there, over the face of the waters, way past the scraps of unfinished answers to questions no one ever thought to ask me, past the bottles without messages, and past, far beyond, the memory of that time we had in Ozona Texas.

Two steps forward and sixteen back.
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