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Old 10-16-2002, 01:36 PM   #16
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As Larry did so I stood, dumbfounded, wondering: is this the man that took her away from me?
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Old 10-16-2002, 03:01 PM   #17
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I felt like I was losing control of the moment.
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Old 10-16-2002, 04:15 PM   #18
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In that moment I realized that even though she is a Republican, I want her back and beer soaked Larry doesn't deserve her.
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Larry continued to drink and chain smoke, as usual, and I wondered what hold he had over her.
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Old 10-16-2002, 05:17 PM   #20
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Was it his flashy smile, dark curly chest hair, or the mystery surrounding the hot, smoking gun clumsily concealed in his pants?
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Old 10-16-2002, 05:45 PM   #21
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At least I HOPED it was a gun.
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Larry reached down his left hand, and pulled it out.
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Old 10-16-2002, 06:11 PM   #23
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At last Larry spoke: "Guess how many I have left," he sputtered, holding the handgun solid in his grip.
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Old 10-16-2002, 06:19 PM   #24
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"You're drunk again, Larry" I said, and turned and walked out on him, standing, sweating, gaping, impotent.
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Old 10-16-2002, 06:33 PM   #25
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I paused at the open door, looking to see the sky drooling overhead, and sighed.
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Old 10-16-2002, 06:43 PM   #26
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It was a sure bet that she was not going to leave with me.
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Old 10-16-2002, 07:06 PM   #27
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Completely expected and yet unforseen, her eyes snapped wide a split second after the bullet rushed past my left arm and plunged quickly into her abdomen, sunken deep and hidden in its burrow.
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There was that split second, before the sound of her scream and the echo of the the charge tore the air of the appartment, that the world spun and I realised that some things you cant ever take back.
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A ragged, desperate "Noooooooo!" escaped from me as I lunged toward her.
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Old 10-17-2002, 06:59 PM   #30
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As I took her now lifeless body up in my trembling arms, I wondered who had shot her from outside the open door. Could this have been retribution aimed at Larry? Who could have done this. Why, why for the sake of Pete had they done this?
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