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Old 10-29-2002, 06:48 PM   #1
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comunal haikus

DIRECTIONS: okay, this is a little more complicated than the other stories. . .a haiku must follow the STRICT structure of syllables being 5-7-5 for the 1st, 2nd and 3rd lines of the haiku. . .here is an example:

i spilled break fluid
lets get some sucking action
and clean this darn floor

in this exercise, posting will be in groups of three--first person will submist one line with 5 syllables, second person will post a somewhat relevant line with 7 syllables, and the third person will finish that particular haiku off with a 5 syllable line. . .then it starts over with the next person and a brand new comunal haiku. . .to make things easier, put a number (1 2 or 3) to state which line we are on. . .

got it? GOOD. . here goes the first line:
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1. life is like baked beans
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Old 10-29-2002, 07:20 PM   #2
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1. life is like baked beans
2. no good without the brown bread
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Old 11-01-2002, 04:01 PM   #3
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1. life is like baked beans
2. no good without the brown bread
3. and better with ham.
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Old 11-01-2002, 04:17 PM   #4
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Old 11-01-2002, 06:49 PM   #5
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1. Winter wind burns eyes.
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Old 11-01-2002, 06:51 PM   #6
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Old 11-01-2002, 07:12 PM   #7
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Old 11-01-2002, 09:36 PM   #8
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Old 11-01-2002, 11:04 PM   #9
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Old 11-02-2002, 06:44 PM   #10
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Old 11-02-2002, 08:16 PM   #11
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1. So close to Christmas
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Old 11-02-2002, 08:22 PM   #12
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So close to Christmas
the turkey shows its power:
Stealth ninja attack!
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Old 11-02-2002, 11:43 PM   #13
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just saw "Bowling for Columbine"

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Old 11-03-2002, 06:19 PM   #14
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Old 11-03-2002, 06:21 PM   #15
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