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Old 09-14-2005, 10:50 AM   #76
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alisdair went down to the zoo on a whim
these tantrums of morag's were just too grim
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Old 09-14-2005, 10:56 AM   #77
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alisdair went down to the zoo on a whim
these tantrums of morag's were just too grim
he wasn't awarded the solace he sought
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Old 09-14-2005, 11:06 AM   #78
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alisdair went down to the zoo on a whim
these tantrums of morag's were just too grim
he wasn't awarded the solace he sought
and he found that he wasn't as smart as he thought.
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Old 09-14-2005, 11:06 AM   #79
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alisdair went down to the zoo on a whim
these tantrums of morag's were just too grim
he wasn't awarded the solace he sought.
don't climb up on railngs unless you've been taught.
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Old 09-14-2005, 11:09 AM   #80
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Old 09-14-2005, 11:12 AM   #81
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Old 09-14-2005, 11:26 AM   #82
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you'll still see the penguins despite what you thought
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Old 09-14-2005, 06:38 PM   #83
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Old 09-14-2005, 06:54 PM   #84
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you'll still see the penguins despite what you thought
Unless those behind you, as quick as a wink,
should elbow and jostle you into the drink.
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Old 09-14-2005, 07:13 PM   #85
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Old 09-15-2005, 12:20 AM   #87
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The scattered parts might once have been a man
Now dead because he'd rhyme, but would not scan.
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Old 09-15-2005, 01:43 AM   #88
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