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Old 03-20-2006, 07:35 AM   #1
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Arrow haiku - and/two words/of

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can be either 3-5-3 or 5-7-5 so long as they comprise (in any order) an "of" line, an "and" line, a "two words" line


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Old 03-20-2006, 07:56 AM   #2
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sails of silk limply sagging

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Old 03-20-2006, 08:07 AM   #3
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Old 03-20-2006, 10:25 AM   #4
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Old 03-20-2006, 05:05 PM   #5
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Old 03-21-2006, 08:09 AM   #6
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Old 03-21-2006, 08:40 AM   #7
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Old 03-21-2006, 08:58 AM   #9
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Old 03-21-2006, 01:49 PM   #10
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Old 03-21-2006, 06:03 PM   #11
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Old 03-21-2006, 09:09 PM   #12
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Old 03-21-2006, 09:16 PM   #13
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