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Old 01-25-2003, 03:03 PM   #76
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nyc- you really didn't get it, did you. . . . Ah well.



1. There's always room for Jello
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Old 01-25-2003, 03:09 PM   #77
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Sorry, wasn't paying attention.

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Old 01-25-2003, 07:38 PM   #78
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Oi ! Purist....

1. There IS al-ways room for Jell-O.

Start agian.......
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Old 01-25-2003, 07:42 PM   #79
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1. There IS al-ways room for Jell-O.
2. This thread is not for the mellow
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Old 01-25-2003, 08:10 PM   #80
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1. There IS al-ways room for Jell-O.
2. This thread is not for the mellow
3. I'll bust out my gat. . .
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Old 01-25-2003, 09:08 PM   #81
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1. There IS al-ways room for Jell-O.
2. This thread is not for the mellow
3. I'll bust out my gat. . .
4. pop a cap in yo rat.
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Old 01-25-2003, 10:28 PM   #82
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1. There IS al-ways room for Jell-O.
2. This thread is not for the mellow
3. I'll bust out my gat. . .
4. pop a cap in yo rat.
5. Cos your shortie ain't phat like J-Lo
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Old 01-25-2003, 10:51 PM   #83
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Can we go back and change it back to depilate? I really liked depilate. Oh well.

While we're on the subject,

1. There IS nothing like a shorn scrotum
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Old 01-25-2003, 10:57 PM   #84
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1. There IS nothing like a shorn scrotum
2. They wanted some proof so I should 'em
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Old 01-25-2003, 11:13 PM   #85
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Quote:
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Oi ! Purist....

1. There IS al-ways room for Jell-O.

Start agian.......
Let me just break the flow for a moment. . . Dinz. . . it's all in the interpretation. For instance, I read your division of beats as 4 instead of 3. (the hyphenated "al-ways" leads me to believe you intended a beat there, as well). . . . Now- I could read this so it fits a 3 beat form, but yours leaves question.

And. . . it's "again". . . not "agian".
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Old 01-25-2003, 11:29 PM   #86
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Well, with that in mind, let me fix this first line a bit.

And did you mean "showed 'em", Noel? Cause that's beautiful.


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2. They wanted some proof so I showed 'em
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Old 01-25-2003, 11:45 PM   #87
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Oops!...I sure did....haha...thanks...I am an idiot.
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Old 01-26-2003, 12:17 AM   #88
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Oh thank goodness. I was about to go in for a vocabulary lesson! And Noel. . . that IS quite wonderful.

1. There's nothing quite like a shorn scrotum
2. They wanted some proof so I showed 'em
3. I unzipped my fly

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Old 01-26-2003, 12:57 AM   #89
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No need for the lesson, I just need more attention. Ha, and not much rhymes with scrotum!

1. There's nothing quite like a shorn scrotum
2. They wanted some proof so I showed 'em
3. I unzipped my fly
4. Not at all shy
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Old 01-26-2003, 01:29 AM   #90
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1. There's nothing quite like a shorn scrotum
2. They wanted some proof so I showed 'em
3. I unzipped my fly
4. Not at all shy
5. But you shrink from cold air, you don't grow some!
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