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Old 04-26-2004, 01:47 AM   #1
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communal 3-5-3 haikus

got a message the other day saying that 3-5-3 is a more accurate challenge for haikus in english than 5-7-5.

lets give it a shot:
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Old 04-26-2004, 01:56 AM   #2
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Old 04-26-2004, 02:32 AM   #3
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Old 04-26-2004, 03:14 AM   #4
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Old 04-26-2004, 03:29 AM   #5
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Old 04-26-2004, 03:30 AM   #6
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threes not much
five is slightly more
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Old 04-26-2004, 03:48 AM   #7
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Old 04-26-2004, 03:50 AM   #8
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Old 04-26-2004, 04:29 AM   #9
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Old 04-26-2004, 04:30 AM   #10
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Old 04-26-2004, 04:50 AM   #11
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Old 04-26-2004, 05:16 AM   #12
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Old 04-26-2004, 02:26 PM   #13
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Old 04-26-2004, 02:54 PM   #14
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Old 04-26-2004, 03:13 PM   #15
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