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Old 12-11-2003, 11:37 AM   #1
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black

the bottom of the forest
endless night
thick, drenched velvet
cover all
slowly spreading, absolute
just playground
sadness openly displayed
infinite space
doleful, elegant solace
eternal fascination
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Old 12-11-2003, 05:59 PM   #2
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apple green
or is it chartreuse?

crisp and juicy
tart and tangy
wakes me up and makes me happy

spring leaves, tender shoots
and velvety soft grass

martians and sugar snap peas

a memory of his eyes...
challenging bright, sensuous light

slightly rebellious, uncontainable
and very good
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Old 12-26-2003, 01:09 AM   #3
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lametta

~
~glittery
~~jittery
~~~fragile
~~~~docile
~~~~~mobile
~~~~~~agile
~~~~~~~sparkle
~~~~~~~~twinkle
~~~~~~~~~yestereve
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Old 01-30-2004, 06:51 AM   #4
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pink

eyeing aureola
peeking above her shirtline
an accident
blush at catching it
she blushes that you caught it
walk into a strawberry
and pucker up
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Old 02-04-2004, 03:50 PM   #5
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rainbow

gives flight to birds of paradise
song of longing
of earth and life
glistening in the sunlight
ugly bridesmaid dress
kiss the frogs
spring leaves, tender shoots
tart and golden
the bitter citrus smell wafts upwards
boom!
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Old 02-05-2004, 05:03 PM   #6
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Beige

Noncommitted
unopinionated
unassuming
bland
flavorless
empty
fits in anywhere
as a computer should
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Old 02-05-2004, 07:14 PM   #7
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hedgehog

black
white
silver
beige
peach
brown
white
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Old 02-06-2004, 05:22 PM   #8
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fluorescent yellow

jumps out at the page
pointing out the points that hold the paragraphs together
or perhaps
making your mistakes glare out at you
and yell:
“Hey!! Don’t forget about me!
I need to be revised!”
Sometimes it is a way of conveying something to a client,
for instance, in a publication proof,
“this is supposed to be in color,”
on a black & white ad printout.
Lemongrass is a pretty bright yellow.
Not quite fluorescent, but
I still remember those long summer days when I was a kid,
nibbling on it.
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Old 02-10-2004, 12:58 AM   #9
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lava

gold
orange
red yellow
yellow gold red
orange black yellow
black gold orange red
red orange gold red yellow
black orange red orange yellow
orange red black orange red black yellow
gold yellow orange red orange black gold black orange yellow red
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Old 02-10-2004, 01:09 AM   #10
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stars

**white
*****

**************gold
****************
*******silver
*********


*gold
***
*************************silver
***************************

***********white
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Old 02-11-2004, 05:12 AM   #11
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Asphalt

black, gray and white constellation of tar, pitch, gravel
Yellow trails of paint, the yellow road, your destination
little shiney black patches of run-over chewing gum
dried blood from the roadkill, a stray feather from
a run-over owl. Black, caked asphalt, cracked
beneath the pressure of truck tires moving goods
from the Long Beach Harbor, paper, gasoline, soda
a million billion commuters rolling through each day,
cracks in the asphalt
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Old 02-22-2004, 01:45 AM   #12
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Brown:

Pine needles covering the trail on a winter hike in Little Talbot State Park.
Ferns covering a long dead oak tree waiting for Spring rains to wake them up.
A mare and foal I found had spent the night behind my tent on Cumberland Island. Her ribs were showing as it had been a dry winter.
Old bull gator gliding through the tannin stained water in the Okefenokee.
Cypress trees along Billy's Lake, paddling towards Billy's Island.
My wood canoe paddle dipping into and out of the water.
Thrashers flying overhead as I toss the ball for my big dog, Kodi, so named because he is brown like a Kodiak Grizzly.
Brown and white like my little dog Fred. Not so much that as brown and gray. Fred and dirty are synonymous.
A brown blur as Kodi and Fred play Alpha Dog Smackdown in the back yard. They take turns winning.
Cabinet grade plywood as I rip it on the table saw. Even richer brown when I cover it with contact cement before covering brown plywood with black laminate for another countertop.
Vickie's eyes as she reaches for me in the morning light.
Corn flakes in the morning while we watch Scooby-Doo.
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Old 03-02-2004, 11:47 PM   #13
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cautious
approach
de-rail, fragment
Red.
visible
violence
Shame

Regret.
Red.
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Old 03-27-2004, 04:37 PM   #14
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azure

cool

throat chakra

calling me

in cerulean dreams

of a beloved blue velvet voice

the blues

are not always sad

sometimes they're liquid joy
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Old 03-28-2004, 08:24 AM   #15
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Peach and Blue


My mother's house is painted peach and blue.

Psycho colours says my friend.

I agree


And think of gravel crunching

Which was her car arriving

And Dad putting down his violin

He knew he could play no more.



And the tango for two,

Aztec stripes of brightness and joy,

Became for three

And turned to peach and blue.
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