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03-29-2004, 08:49 PM
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small world
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03-29-2004, 08:58 PM
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well written.
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03-29-2004, 10:04 PM
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girthy pickles
Join Date: Feb 2003
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Loved it.
A real friend picks you up @ the airport @ 9:30am, on 4 hours' sleep, in their PJ's. *smooch*
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03-30-2004, 12:49 AM
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Brains! Brains!
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I have four certified friends.
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03-30-2004, 12:51 AM
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Stuck in T.O.
Join Date: Oct 2002
Location: Floundering
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it won't let me see it at work?
Is Ze pedalling porn?  And until I see it, I won't comment on your comment pfp!  |
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03-30-2004, 12:51 AM
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Blue's Clues
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What's your favorite television program
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03-30-2004, 01:00 AM
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Myth Demeanour
Join Date: Jan 2004
Location: My tent
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Very good. IMHO
I like the mood you set with the constant motion, and the set changes. Very nervy and edgey with the steady monotone dialogue that doesn't slow long enough for focus to shift. edited to add: And the pisser part was great!
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03-30-2004, 01:23 AM
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Conspiracy Theorist
Join Date: Mar 2004
Location: cleveland, oh
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Can't see it -- damn firewall software. I'll have to get into it and try to get it to allow me to view it. Bah.
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03-30-2004, 01:25 AM
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elite rabble
Join Date: Sep 2002
Location: Houston
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I'm just here to help.
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03-30-2004, 01:27 AM
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elite rabble
Join Date: Sep 2002
Location: Houston
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Oh yeah, It was really funny. I agree with moN. Well written and great facial emphasis.
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03-30-2004, 01:27 AM
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Stuck in T.O.
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It's interesting you made this as a topic, considering not the week before, some 20-something in my writing class was telling me how friendster was making a huge sweep on the NYC social scene ... and how it died out almost within the same moment.
Who has the energy to keep up with that kind of deal when it's hot for a month and then dead? PISSER .. loved it. Very clever --- nicely written. I liked this, a great deal. |
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03-30-2004, 01:33 AM
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monkey
Join Date: Dec 2002
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I loved pisser..hahaha.
I'm on friendster. Not for the dating aspect... but for the "friend" part. It's soo stupid, it's an online clique. All my friends on friendster are my friends in real life. soooo strange.. |
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03-30-2004, 02:50 AM
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in the middle of it
Join Date: Jan 2004
Location: Texas
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Arrrrrgggg! Something else this pile of junk computer won't run.
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03-30-2004, 03:19 AM
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half baked
Join Date: Sep 2002
Location: just ducky
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loved the EST reference
great character work - again 
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03-30-2004, 03:40 AM
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feline, naturally
Join Date: Apr 2003
Location: California
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but ze, isn't est a bit before your time ?
*she wipes her wrinkled brow*
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