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04-26-2004, 01:47 AM
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communal 3-5-3 haikus
got a message the other day saying that 3-5-3 is a more accurate challenge for haikus in english than 5-7-5.
lets give it a shot: |
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04-26-2004, 01:56 AM
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left hanging
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a few words
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04-26-2004, 02:32 AM
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beatbox mantra soundtrack
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a few words
given to rambling |
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04-26-2004, 03:14 AM
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monkey
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a few words
given to rambling not concise |
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04-26-2004, 03:29 AM
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beatbox mantra soundtrack
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threes not much
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04-26-2004, 03:30 AM
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monkey
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threes not much
five is slightly more |
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04-26-2004, 03:48 AM
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left hanging
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threes not much
five is slightly more to work with |
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04-26-2004, 03:50 AM
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monkey
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sore and wet
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04-26-2004, 04:29 AM
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left hanging
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sore and wet
I lie exhausted |
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04-26-2004, 04:30 AM
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monkey
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sore and wet
I lie exhausted pass the smokes |
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04-26-2004, 04:50 AM
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left hanging
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short and sweet
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04-26-2004, 05:16 AM
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beatbox mantra soundtrack
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short and sweet
please just the facts ma'am |
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04-26-2004, 02:26 PM
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Brains! Brains!
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short and sweet
please just the facts ma'am innocent |
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04-26-2004, 02:54 PM
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Key Lime Pie rocks!!!
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Here today
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04-26-2004, 03:13 PM
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Brains! Brains!
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Here today
with a pen in hand |
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