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Old 12-03-2004, 04:19 AM   #1
victorfabius
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Great work, but there is a slight error in the punctuation. On screen, it displays "." as "you vacuous pussbag" and , as "," as "you miniscule twit". In re-reading your response, with the ingenious additives, the two are switched to heighten the effect. Was the original intent to have the '.' and ',' as spoken?
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