Fabuloso Friday 2/Ze Haiku
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Ze haiku
I just can't work with that 4th line of the limerick, so let's try a haiku. Same format as the limerick: when you replace the line, do so without itlaics:
- 5 syllables here
- 7 syllables go here
- 5 more syllables
In the meantime, I'll sleep on ze limerick. - gs
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Another haiku
Except this one poops. I didn't want to ruin the collective haiku effort above... So I will put it here. Now, while it looks very simple, I put a lot of my soul into this one... I hope you guys like it:
- Poop, poop, poop, poop, poop.
- Poop, poop, poop, poop, poop, poop, poop.
- Poop, poop, poop, poop, poop.
- Mmm, the depth of this astounds me. Magnificent, no where has a more profound thought been voiced, in Haiku form. Wow... :D CeruleanNinja 05:35, 16 June 2006 (PDT)
- Moving haiku....but I think Ze already did this one back in April, with a cohort reading ssssomething from the email. gypsysister
Howzabout....... this 'un?:
White, like the new moon,
Delicate spheres retreating,
Ze's ass on the web.