10-29-2002, 06:48 PM
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o my gato
Join Date: Oct 2002
Location: TEXAN lost in washington dc
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comunal haikus
DIRECTIONS: okay, this is a little more complicated than the other stories. . .a haiku must follow the STRICT structure of syllables being 5-7-5 for the 1st, 2nd and 3rd lines of the haiku. . .here is an example:
i spilled break fluid lets get some sucking action and clean this darn floor in this exercise, posting will be in groups of three--first person will submist one line with 5 syllables, second person will post a somewhat relevant line with 7 syllables, and the third person will finish that particular haiku off with a 5 syllable line. . .then it starts over with the next person and a brand new comunal haiku. . .to make things easier, put a number (1 2 or 3) to state which line we are on. . . got it? GOOD. . here goes the first line: ______________________________________________ 1. life is like baked beans |
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10-29-2002, 07:20 PM
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nudge nudge wink wink
Join Date: Oct 2002
Location: Houston
Posts: 99
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1. life is like baked beans
2. no good without the brown bread |
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11-01-2002, 04:01 PM
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monkey
Join Date: Nov 2002
Location: Queens, NY
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1. life is like baked beans
2. no good without the brown bread 3. and better with ham. |
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11-01-2002, 04:17 PM
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o my gato
Join Date: Oct 2002
Location: TEXAN lost in washington dc
Posts: 27
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1. Winter wind burns eyes.
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11-01-2002, 06:49 PM
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caesura
Join Date: Sep 2002
Posts: 516
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1. Winter wind burns eyes.
2. Tears like gentle freezing rain |
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11-01-2002, 06:51 PM
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monkey
Join Date: Nov 2002
Location: Queens, NY
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1. Winter wind burns eyes.
2. Tears like gentle freezing rain 3. Tongue stuck to flagpole. |
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11-01-2002, 07:12 PM
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nudge nudge wink wink
Join Date: Oct 2002
Location: Houston
Posts: 99
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1. Friday afternoon
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11-01-2002, 09:36 PM
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o my gato
Join Date: Oct 2002
Location: TEXAN lost in washington dc
Posts: 27
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1. Friday afternoon
2. freedom has come closer now |
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11-01-2002, 11:04 PM
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caesura
Join Date: Sep 2002
Posts: 516
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1. Friday afternoon
2. freedom has come closer now 3. we weep with relief |
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11-02-2002, 06:44 PM
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Join Date: Sep 2002
Location: brooklyn NY
Posts: 1,581
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1. So close to Christmas
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11-02-2002, 08:16 PM
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o my gato
Join Date: Oct 2002
Location: TEXAN lost in washington dc
Posts: 27
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1. So close to Christmas
2. the turkey shows its power |
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11-02-2002, 08:22 PM
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monkey
Join Date: Nov 2002
Location: Queens, NY
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So close to Christmas
the turkey shows its power: Stealth ninja attack! |
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11-02-2002, 11:43 PM
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half baked
Join Date: Sep 2002
Location: just ducky
Posts: 12,078
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just saw "Bowling for Columbine"
From my cold dead hand
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11-03-2002, 06:19 PM
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Butt-F***ing the World
Join Date: Sep 2002
Location: the other side of normal
Posts: 5,863
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From my cold dead hand
Breathes pulsing fire, flame, and ash |
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11-03-2002, 06:21 PM
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o my gato
Join Date: Oct 2002
Location: TEXAN lost in washington dc
Posts: 27
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1. From my cold dead hand
2. Breathes pulsing fire, flame, and ash 3. just popped a big zit |
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