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Old 10-23-2002, 08:31 AM   #61
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While she and I both find Larry's drinking difficult, it is his loyalty to the Green party, which she calls a "devisive splinter group," which we really find annoying.
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Old 10-23-2002, 08:36 AM   #62
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Did I really say that out loud, I wonder, as the woman at the bar looks at me as though I've gone mad.
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Old 10-23-2002, 08:46 AM   #63
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I reminded myself that both Larry and the mysterious "she" were now the human equivalent of charcoal briquettes, but before I could hatch my plan to infiltrate this "Green Party," the door to the bar slammed and I heard the jingle of spurs.
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Old 10-23-2002, 12:45 PM   #64
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Larry, burnt, battered, bloody, and dragging the severed torso of what I could only assume was the girl, sauntered over, pulled up a bar stool and sat down next to me.

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Old 10-23-2002, 12:50 PM   #65
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He turned towards me and struggled to speak when, his blackened mouth gaping, he collapsed into a pile of ashes.
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Old 10-23-2002, 12:55 PM   #66
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I was, at this very moment, beginning to realize that I was either haullucinatiing wildly or having a severe psychotic break.
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Old 10-23-2002, 03:26 PM   #67
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The bartender looked like Larry, as did the waitress, the fat man at the end of the bar, the skinny chick in the cutoffs, and they were all looking at me.
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Old 10-23-2002, 04:47 PM   #68
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Black smoke trickled from their noses and mouths as they breathed, slowly at first then combusting into a desimbodied freight train that chugged from the lungs of each doppleganger, filling the room with thick clouds of tar.
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Old 10-23-2002, 05:21 PM   #69
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Clearly, reality's little supply lines were getting longer and harder to maintain.
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Old 10-24-2002, 11:18 AM   #70
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With a shriek, I ran for the fire hose, hoping to extinguish the unforgettable fire that most assuredly lay behind the smoke these people so volumniously emitted.
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Old 10-24-2002, 11:52 AM   #71
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My head spun as I lost myself in the exhaust, chewing on the thick fumes as everything grew darker and darker until I spun down to the floor, hoping to slither slowly under the smoke, behind the demons' backs and out the door.
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Lost in the vortex of my own panic-stained adrenalin rush, I crawled, reeking of fear and loathing, towards the glow of the open door.
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Old 10-25-2002, 09:26 AM   #73
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An explosion next to my ear momentarily increased my panic (while simultaneously decreasing my hearing), until I realized that it was only another bar patron, wearing an enigmatic tag that read "Hi! I'm Charlton!" trying to extinguish the fire with a shotgun.
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Old 10-25-2002, 09:37 AM   #74
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I tried to pry the gun from his cold dead hands but only succeeded in drawing his ire and unwanted attention as he was obviously either hallucinating, or an hallucination himself.

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Old 10-25-2002, 06:04 PM   #75
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I fought the rising hysteria of madness, and struggled to replace my dilirium with reason and realised that if I could just hold onto a few remnants of reality, I could still make it out of here.
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