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Mama2Mia · 10-23-2002, 08:31 AM

While she and I both find Larry's drinking difficult, it is his loyalty to the Green party, which she calls a "devisive splinter group," which we really find annoying.

Mama2Mia · 10-23-2002, 08:36 AM

Did I really say that out loud, I wonder, as the woman at the bar looks at me as though I've gone mad.

MtBikerMike · 10-23-2002, 08:46 AM

I reminded myself that both Larry and the mysterious "she" were now the human equivalent of charcoal briquettes, but before I could hatch my plan to infiltrate this "Green Party," the door to the bar slammed and I heard the jingle of spurs.

masterofNone · 10-23-2002, 12:45 PM

Larry, burnt, battered, bloody, and dragging the severed torso of what I could only assume was the girl, sauntered over, pulled up a bar stool and sat down next to me.

Deviate · 10-23-2002, 12:50 PM

He turned towards me and struggled to speak when, his blackened mouth gaping, he collapsed into a pile of ashes.

masterofNone · 10-23-2002, 12:55 PM

I was, at this very moment, beginning to realize that I was either haullucinatiing wildly or having a severe psychotic break.

dinzdale · 10-23-2002, 03:26 PM

The bartender looked like Larry, as did the waitress, the fat man at the end of the bar, the skinny chick in the cutoffs, and they were all looking at me.

Deviate · 10-23-2002, 04:47 PM

Black smoke trickled from their noses and mouths as they breathed, slowly at first then combusting into a desimbodied freight train that chugged from the lungs of each doppleganger, filling the room with thick clouds of tar.

masterofNone · 10-23-2002, 05:21 PM

Clearly, reality's little supply lines were getting longer and harder to maintain.

MtBikerMike · 10-24-2002, 11:18 AM

With a shriek, I ran for the fire hose, hoping to extinguish the unforgettable fire that most assuredly lay behind the smoke these people so volumniously emitted.

Deviate · 10-24-2002, 11:52 AM

My head spun as I lost myself in the exhaust, chewing on the thick fumes as everything grew darker and darker until I spun down to the floor, hoping to slither slowly under the smoke, behind the demons' backs and out the door.

catbelly · 10-24-2002, 07:02 PM

Lost in the vortex of my own panic-stained adrenalin rush, I crawled, reeking of fear and loathing, towards the glow of the open door.

MtBikerMike · 10-25-2002, 09:26 AM

An explosion next to my ear momentarily increased my panic (while simultaneously decreasing my hearing), until I realized that it was only another bar patron, wearing an enigmatic tag that read "Hi! I'm Charlton!" trying to extinguish the fire with a shotgun.

masterofNone · 10-25-2002, 09:37 AM

I tried to pry the gun from his cold dead hands but only succeeded in drawing his ire and unwanted attention as he was obviously either hallucinating, or an hallucination himself.

dinzdale · 10-25-2002, 06:04 PM

I fought the rising hysteria of madness, and struggled to replace my dilirium with reason and realised that if I could just hold onto a few remnants of reality, I could still make it out of here.

10-23-2002, 12:45 PM	#64
masterofNone ________ Join Date: Sep 2002 Posts: 5,131	Larry, burnt, battered, bloody, and dragging the severed torso of what I could only assume was the girl, sauntered over, pulled up a bar stool and sat down next to me. Last edited by masterofNone : 10-25-2002 at 09:44 AM.

10-25-2002, 09:37 AM	#74
masterofNone ________ Join Date: Sep 2002 Posts: 5,131	I tried to pry the gun from his cold dead hands but only succeeded in drawing his ire and unwanted attention as he was obviously either hallucinating, or an hallucination himself. Last edited by masterofNone : 10-25-2002 at 09:42 AM.

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10-23-2002, 08:31 AM	#61
Mama2Mia Registered User Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Boston Posts: 4	While she and I both find Larry's drinking difficult, it is his loyalty to the Green party, which she calls a "devisive splinter group," which we really find annoying.

10-23-2002, 08:36 AM	#62
Mama2Mia Registered User Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Boston Posts: 4	Did I really say that out loud, I wonder, as the woman at the bar looks at me as though I've gone mad.

10-23-2002, 08:46 AM	#63
MtBikerMike Registered User Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 9	I reminded myself that both Larry and the mysterious "she" were now the human equivalent of charcoal briquettes, but before I could hatch my plan to infiltrate this "Green Party," the door to the bar slammed and I heard the jingle of spurs.

10-23-2002, 12:50 PM	#65
Deviate Butt-F***ing the World Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: the other side of normal Posts: 5,863	He turned towards me and struggled to speak when, his blackened mouth gaping, he collapsed into a pile of ashes.

10-23-2002, 12:55 PM	#66
masterofNone ________ Join Date: Sep 2002 Posts: 5,131	I was, at this very moment, beginning to realize that I was either haullucinatiing wildly or having a severe psychotic break.

10-23-2002, 03:26 PM	#67
dinzdale King of the špatnýs Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: was that dog Posts: 9,411	The bartender looked like Larry, as did the waitress, the fat man at the end of the bar, the skinny chick in the cutoffs, and they were all looking at me.

10-23-2002, 04:47 PM	#68
Deviate Butt-F***ing the World Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: the other side of normal Posts: 5,863	Black smoke trickled from their noses and mouths as they breathed, slowly at first then combusting into a desimbodied freight train that chugged from the lungs of each doppleganger, filling the room with thick clouds of tar.

10-23-2002, 05:21 PM	#69
masterofNone ________ Join Date: Sep 2002 Posts: 5,131	Clearly, reality's little supply lines were getting longer and harder to maintain.

10-24-2002, 11:18 AM	#70
MtBikerMike Registered User Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 9	With a shriek, I ran for the fire hose, hoping to extinguish the unforgettable fire that most assuredly lay behind the smoke these people so volumniously emitted.

10-24-2002, 11:52 AM	#71
Deviate Butt-F***ing the World Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: the other side of normal Posts: 5,863	My head spun as I lost myself in the exhaust, chewing on the thick fumes as everything grew darker and darker until I spun down to the floor, hoping to slither slowly under the smoke, behind the demons' backs and out the door.

10-24-2002, 07:02 PM	#72
catbelly monkey Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: the north Posts: 1,757	Lost in the vortex of my own panic-stained adrenalin rush, I crawled, reeking of fear and loathing, towards the glow of the open door.

10-25-2002, 09:26 AM	#73
MtBikerMike Registered User Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 9	An explosion next to my ear momentarily increased my panic (while simultaneously decreasing my hearing), until I realized that it was only another bar patron, wearing an enigmatic tag that read "Hi! I'm Charlton!" trying to extinguish the fire with a shotgun.

10-25-2002, 06:04 PM	#75
dinzdale King of the špatnýs Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: was that dog Posts: 9,411	I fought the rising hysteria of madness, and struggled to replace my dilirium with reason and realised that if I could just hold onto a few remnants of reality, I could still make it out of here.