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Zatoichi · 12-21-2006, 03:31 PM

He set it in motion then fled
To the dream weaving warmth of his bed
Yet doubt plagued his sleep

zenbabe · 12-21-2006, 04:37 PM

He set it in motion then fled
To the dream weaving warmth of his bed
Yet doubt plagued his sleep
And with the counting of sheep

ambo · 12-21-2006, 05:19 PM

He set it in motion then fled
To the dream weaving warmth of his bed
Yet doubt plagued his sleep
And with the counting of sheep
The bleating just filled him with dread

Coffee · 12-21-2006, 08:57 PM

He woke with a start from a dream

zenbabe · 12-21-2006, 08:59 PM

He woke with a start from a dream
In his hand it appeared to be cream

daverbee · 12-22-2006, 10:26 AM

He woke with a start from a dream
In his hand it appeared to be cream
Dinz smiled at the thought

Coffee · 12-22-2006, 02:02 PM

He woke with a start from a dream
In his hand it appeared to be cream
Dinz smiled at the thought
of the dream that was fraught

Zatoichi · 12-22-2006, 03:50 PM

He woke with a start from a dream
In his hand it appeared to be cream
Dinz smiled at the thought
of the dream that was fraught
With visions of Diana, supreme.

abednigo · 12-25-2006, 02:24 AM

I've one thing to say

abednigo · 12-25-2006, 02:27 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by 1kookykat

1. I see you've a restraining order
2. Still I risk overstepping the border

3. I've one thing to say

ambo · 12-31-2006, 10:23 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by abednigo

3. I've one thing to say

Abednigo, you're lost at the start

Zatoichi · 01-02-2007, 03:34 PM

Abednigo, you're lost at the start
There's a thread now for those who would part
With notions of meter

ambo · 01-02-2007, 04:40 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ambo

Abednigo, you're lost at the start

What I meant to say above, since nobody else was, is that you have mistakenly continued a limerick from the first page of this thread. I wasn't commenting on your style or meter, as others with less class might do.

What's needed here is the start of a new limerick.

We know now why Atlas once shrugged

Zatoichi · 01-02-2007, 04:47 PM

Oopsies! Silly me. Mea classless culpa and all. It's just that your line actually scanned, and, well...

We know now why Atlas once shrugged
That ungrateful burden he'd lugged

Coffee · 01-02-2007, 06:55 PM

^^^*Puts it back on ignore list*

We know now why Atlas once shrugged
It seems that he'd never been hugged

12-21-2006, 04:37 PM	#4037
zenbabe Lollypop! Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: we are all made of stars Posts: 11,690	He set it in motion then fled To the dream weaving warmth of his bed Yet doubt plagued his sleep And with the counting of sheep __________________ Be yourself, because the people that mind don't matter, and the people that matter don't mind. -Dr. Seuss

12-21-2006, 05:19 PM	#4038
ambo feline, naturally Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: California Posts: 4,407	He set it in motion then fled To the dream weaving warmth of his bed Yet doubt plagued his sleep And with the counting of sheep The bleating just filled him with dread __________________ Non-violence leads to the highest ethics, which is the goal of all evolution. Until we have not stopped to include violence as an option in our conflict management, we are still savages. --Thomas A. Edison

12-21-2006, 08:59 PM	#4040
zenbabe Lollypop! Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: we are all made of stars Posts: 11,690	He woke with a start from a dream In his hand it appeared to be cream __________________ Be yourself, because the people that mind don't matter, and the people that matter don't mind. -Dr. Seuss

12-22-2006, 10:26 AM	#4041
daverbee Key Lime Pie rocks!!! Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Oh, yeah! Posts: 7,695	He woke with a start from a dream In his hand it appeared to be cream Dinz smiled at the thought __________________ Time is essential because without it everything would happen all at once.

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12-21-2006, 03:31 PM	#4036
Zatoichi monkey Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 401	He set it in motion then fled To the dream weaving warmth of his bed Yet doubt plagued his sleep

12-21-2006, 08:57 PM	#4039
Coffee Cheeses Save Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Floating Posts: 9,204	He woke with a start from a dream

12-22-2006, 02:02 PM	#4042
Coffee Cheeses Save Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Floating Posts: 9,204	He woke with a start from a dream In his hand it appeared to be cream Dinz smiled at the thought of the dream that was fraught

12-22-2006, 03:50 PM	#4043
Zatoichi monkey Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 401	He woke with a start from a dream In his hand it appeared to be cream Dinz smiled at the thought of the dream that was fraught With visions of Diana, supreme.

12-25-2006, 02:24 AM	#4044
abednigo Registered User Join Date: Dec 2006 Posts: 3	I've one thing to say

01-02-2007, 03:34 PM	#4047
Zatoichi monkey Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 401	Abednigo, you're lost at the start There's a thread now for those who would part With notions of meter

01-02-2007, 04:47 PM	#4049
Zatoichi monkey Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 401	Oopsies! Silly me. Mea classless culpa and all. It's just that your line actually scanned, and, well... We know now why Atlas once shrugged That ungrateful burden he'd lugged

01-02-2007, 06:55 PM	#4050
Coffee Cheeses Save Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Floating Posts: 9,204	^^^Puts it back on ignore list We know now why Atlas once shrugged It seems that he'd never been hugged