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Old 07-27-2003, 01:14 AM   #1
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haiku variations

each user can only add one line at a time...but we have to complete 3 haikus with the same starting line before moving on...get it? we'll get to explore different ways of looking at it.

for fun lets try and marry clever and pretty...don't go for the obvious...think for a moment or two. let the first two lines set up an atmosphere and the last provide context....amanda...do you have suggestions?

first start:

1) waves of gold and white
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Old 07-27-2003, 01:17 AM   #2
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:nope. sounds good. I'll see if I can pick up your lead:

1) waves of gold and white
2.) oceans of silk and satin
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Old 07-27-2003, 01:47 AM   #5
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1) waves of gold and white
2.) crayons worn to little nubs
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Old 07-27-2003, 02:01 AM   #6
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Old 07-27-2003, 02:19 AM   #8
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